The Literary Cultivation Proving the Dao System

Give me some advice! First! Too wordy! Doesn't the second protagonist realize that he can only rely on himself to achieve enlightenment after reading so many novels? Not fighting yet!

The subject matter is good, but the author's writing style is not good and there is too much nonsense.

This world belongs to the world of powerful people. As soon as they open their mouths, countless people will block their works.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the author needs to revise the world view of the work. You can refer to Confucianism and Taoism. At least you should connect some allusions when copying the book. Otherwise, according to your world view, are literary practitioners all mentally retarded and unable to see that some of the things written by the protagonist are not found in this world? Also, why can't the protagonist have some intelligence when he travels back in time and looks like a goddess when he sees a beautiful woman? Do all the beauties who must appear have the potential to be included in the harem? And the protagonist comes through time travel, and when he opens and shuts his mouth, he is choked with the sounds of the earth, and there is no sense of disobedience at all? Can you all understand it?

←_←When I copied the poem, I couldn't copy so much at once.

This author has the potential to become a god. He is very creative.

There are so many women in this book, and they are all surrounding Pig's Feet. Isn't the author still single?

Author Jun, don't be a eunuch, you can tell us if you have anything, but don't be silent, we can understand 😫

Why aren't there a few chapters in between? Jumped directly to the back

Is Shen Qiubai a boy or a girl? Sometimes it's "her" and sometimes it's "him". I haven't figured it out after reading 10 chapters. The author's second work is related to it, where he wants to experience love and have gay feelings with Xiaobai.