Reborn to Outrace the Gods of Speed

The world is in danger! I feel like I'm falling apart after writing this book. I ignored a very important thing when I first wrote it, which resulted in a flaw. From the tone set at the beginning, there was one problem in the outline that I overlooked, which caused the writing to become narrower and narrower. It was completely limited and the writing was a bit broken. I wanted to write some new things later, but found that there was no way to add them. In addition to the competition, there are also tasks and competition scenes. I wanted to make some changes, but found that I couldn't start. As a result, the subsequent Racing Era chapter and the God War chapter could not continue at all. I would like to collect some good suggestions or plots from book friends. Thanks again!

Next is the "Dream Contest" plot, which requires the appearance of twenty characters and five "Ten Kings" characters. Driver: Hailong. Age: 25. Gender: Male. Guild: Burning Soul. Personality: Unknown. Title: "Dragon King", one of the ten kings. Character description: The top master of the Burning Soul Guild won the title of Ten Kings when he participated in the Dream Competition.

I just read the first chapter. This author is a breath of fresh air in virtual online game novels. Although there are racing novels in other categories, this seems to be the first one in online games, right? I hope the author can control the pacing well and don't throw other authors' conventional routines of fighting monsters and upgrading online games into this novel. I hope the plot can give us a bright feeling.

I think the writing is not rigorous. The previous article mentioned that racing skills require proficiency to rise, and advanced skills should not be difficult to learn. In the previous arena competition, I said that I could not perform at 30% of the level of others, which is obviously outrageous. No matter how good I am, I can occupy the top three in the standings, and my level must be above average. It should be a little difficult to win with the same level of cars. After all, strength does not come from skills. I remember that I learned drifting at the beginning. I don't remember if I have learned the tire burning start, but I must have used it. If I didn't write about it, it would be very abrupt. I think ordinary skills are just that. Advanced skills should occasionally be written down. Also, I saw that you already had a very complete outline in your PS. It seems that in the later stage, you want to write a plot where the protagonist fails badly and then finds his way to the car god? This kind of thing is usually very poisonous, so you really have to be careful when writing it.

I don't understand that since the male protagonist is reborn, he can't comprehend the skills of drifting due to the experience he carried in his previous life (it's fine if he can't comprehend them by himself in the early stage. It can also be understood that the game brain has restrictions on this aspect, but after the update, ordinary players can learn skills, but the male protagonist still can't comprehend skills by himself), and since he can't learn by himself, why does the article say that the third way to learn skills is to comprehend and create! Isn't this a contradiction?

No matter how I read this novel, I feel that the heroine is superfluous.

I had seen it before, and I wanted to see it again, but suddenly I realized that I was really young at the time. . . .

Come on, believe in yourself, take your time and don't rush

This is the best racing game novel I have ever read. Thank you Yi Ming. I look forward to your next work =^_^=

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