The Goddess’s Path in Another World

Seeing that everyone is asking whether there is a male protagonist in this article, I thought about it for a long time and decided to make a post to explain it. In fact, at the beginning of the design, I had a male protagonist in my imagination, but... I kept writing and writing, and I couldn't write the male protagonist (T▽Ｔ). There was no way, I was really not very good at writing emotional scenes between male and female protagonists, so the male protagonist was reduced to a male supporting role... I don't want to either, I'm also desperate...(╥╯^╰╥)

How can I put it this way? It is written very elegantly and creates a sense of warmth among many otherworldly novels. The heroine is gentle and kind, has a beautiful appearance, has strong potential and is motivated But so far it is still tepid, even a little bleak. I think that in addition to the writing style being a little immature, it also fails to hit the preferences of most readers There are only a few elements of popular novels. One is pleasure. Reading a big novel can make you slap in the face, and the heroine becomes stronger, but I don't feel happy enough. (Please note that there are a large number of readers who are happy, otherwise how can I explain so many similar routines, but the novels that are better than slaps in the face are very popular) The second is the plot design. I don't know what others think about the big plot, but I am quite happy to read the plot. Of course it would be better if there was some control over the rhythm (be careful not to mix it with water, although many online articles become more popular and less popular because of their popularity, but readers prefer compact content plus occasional relaxation) Three, character creation. Speaking of this, I think the writing is really average. Except for the heroine who is the protagonist, it takes a lot of effort to portray, but the other supporting characters are inevitably suspected of being stereotyped. At least there are currently no popular characters among the supporting characters, and some of the supporting characters have some good settings, but obviously the author has no intention of describing it too much (even the time-travel companions who have been the most talked about are still mediocre and unremarkable, but the heroine's opponents in the game are more maneuverable). Although the supporting characters are just foils, the creation of certain characters can also attract readers (a typical example is The Master, A Song of Ice and Fire) Finally, I will add some personal complaints. Although the general direction is wrong, I was really unhappy watching it. First of all, the heroine's small team can easily get high-level monster eggs even when the heroine has special powers. That's okay, but the people in this small team are a bit casual. It is said that partners are more valuable than more. Especially the small team in Ridgeland in the early stage (this team is really weak. Although the heroine's partners do not have to be very strong, these few rely too much on the heroine. The key point is that the rewards are small and the growth is too slow. Being a younger brother is not enough to make back the money. The heroine who leads them to play is too kind). After arriving in the royal capital They basically disappeared, and when they came to the capital later, the readers had long forgotten about them, otherwise the author would have forgotten about them at all Then there is the heroine. Although the heroine is growing up again and is not as naive as she was at the beginning, I still want to say that the heroine's growth rate cannot keep up with the plot. The plot itself is a bit weak, and the heroine's growth is even slower. After arriving in the royal capital for so long, I still feel that there is still a bit of amusing naivety. Maybe I also wanted to write a long-term female protagonist, but it was too slow and procrastinating. Perhaps the lessons the heroine has experienced are not profound enough. Does she have to lose one or two friends with deep feelings in order to truly grow? Finally, there are too many people from the bloodline of God. Basically, 90% of the people the heroine meets come from large or small, first-rate, second-rate, third-rate, and inferior families with blood. Anyway, the eye color and hair color are so colorful that there is too much to remember. Apart from the characteristics of the heroine, I really don't want to remember much else. I remember that in the setting, people with bloodline only accounted for a small percentage of ordinary people. Ordinary people are still the majority. Even if the environment is affected, there should not be an outstanding ordinary person. Or are ordinary people already so incompetent? Okay, the above is my complaint, comments are welcome

Recently, it was finally updated. Let me store it for a few more days, but it's not enough for me to read 😭

The group time travel successfully persuaded me to quit

The idea is quite good, but there are some ink stains. It is quite interesting to fuck and fuck, but if it is too much, it will feel like a procrastination. Sibel always feels that she will bring big trouble to the heroine.

It's so uncomfortable to watch😣😣I feel like if it wasn't for the aura of the protagonist, the heroine wouldn't have survived past 3 chapters.

After watching some of it, I feel like the heroine is sometimes smart and sometimes stupid, but generally she's okay.

Otherwise, don't write about the male protagonist, but also write about the emotional disagreement. How cruel! If only it was sweet all the way.

The writing is a bit rough, but I can still read it.

I've read 400 chapters, and the heroine has always been the Virgin.