Full-Time Hunter: Soul Hunting Twins

Emmm, if you write it like this, then you write the heroine. Does the heroine like Jin Hao or Bao Kuer? If two people with different personalities are in the same body and pick up the same girl, will the heroine not notice? Or is it that there is no female protagonist in this novel?

I have to say that it is a pity that this book was not written down.

It's very well written. It's easy to persuade people to give up at the beginning. Just wait for the right person.

Naiya didn't kill him just because she was a woman? The author should be more careful...

I read the book many times and clicked it, but each time I was dissuaded by the dual-soul setting. It's so difficult to find a normal, somewhat creative hunter with telekinesis abilities.

The most novel idea of ​​this book is "Two souls become one", but it is also the biggest flaw. It is too uncomfortable for two grown men to be squeezed into one body. The original owner of the protagonist's body next door also appears, but it is the "mind beast" that appears as an auxiliary ability. They have a common goal and will, complement each other, and work together to improve the body's strength. This is the right way to deal with it.

I think Baokuer just doesn't have a background in the hunter world, and his talent is quite impressive. You see, he has become a hunter at such a young age. Gang is the protagonist, and Killua comes from a family of killers.

Naiya, the supporting actress, has already threatened the protagonist, but she has not yet been written off. I really don't know what the author was thinking. Seeing that I, the reader, feel so aggrieved and feel uncomfortable for the protagonist. He obviously has the ability to torture her to death but he doesn't mean it. I really don't know if he is looking for torture.

What happened to the twin souls of two men? I think it's fine.

What happened to Naiya in the end? Just let it go?

The author of this book is pretty good at setting it up, and the original characters are also pretty good. However, there are many problems with the characters, plot, and settings of the original part, such as the scattered plot, poor logic, and conflicting characters. Another problem is that the author likes to add outdated embarrassing jokes into the text, and there are also voiceover comments that suddenly appear that do not fit the context. The author also thinks that he is very humorous. Overall, it's a pretty good Hunter fanfic, but most of it was ruined by the author's own poor writing. I have a suggestion. I hope the author will not put himself as the protagonist. The protagonist should be a character with an independent personality, not a tool for the author to satisfy his own imagination.

I feel like the writing is a bit broken at the end, especially Hisoka.

The start is boring, it might as well be a time travel type

This chapter seems to put Naiya in a positive light. Isn't it possible that the protagonist will have an affair with Naiya later on? ! ! ? In fact, I let her kill Peng Si for 100 billion. I really don't understand. If my girlfriend is betrayed, betrayed and assassinated, I can just let it go. It's okay if I don't show up. If I dare to show up in front of my eyes, I won't kill him. How can I still keep it and go home to celebrate the New Year?

I hope everyone will actively participate and not be left in the cold.

I can't stand the author doing things like this. If there were no two souls, I don't think this book would be bad, so bye bye

I feel like my brain will explode if I continue reading.

The author's telekinesis ability is a bright spot, for moon fans, but I can't see any bright spots in King's Treasure at all, and he was also criticized.

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