The Path to Immortality

After the male protagonist appears, the female protagonist is too dependent and needs help everywhere... As a sword nun, the heroine is too weak.

Just to prevent Wangxi from being lonely, he had to catch monster eggs and separate mother and son! Although the heroine is of the blood of the heavenly veins and has accepted the mission of the Queen Mother of the West Sea, she never treats monsters and beasts as equals as human beings! Forget it, after all, we are born as human beings, but these three views have changed a bit, including the male protagonist!

Although the heroine wants to be a swordsman, there is too little description of the sword, such as the skills, the swordsmanship learned, and even the forging of the natal sword. Not to mention that the understanding process of "Tao" was not at all in the early stage. . . What's more, it's the issue of "bloodline" that makes me, a sword cultivator, very uncomfortable.

After reading 300 chapters and talking about my thoughts, I actually don't quite understand the central idea. I vaguely feel that I am just trying to climb the road of cultivating immortality. I am said to be a sword cultivator but I have never shown any signs of being a sword cultivator. The appearance of the blood of the heavenly veins seems to have just added one more heroine. Means, and the fire spirit that high-level monks covet has no use at all. The path of love is faintly ranked behind family affection. The collective centripetal force and cohesion of the sect is minimal. There is a feeling of dissatisfaction and there is not much achievement in cultivation. He holds many treasures but cannot use any of them because of his sword cultivating skills. I don't know why at all. I'm not a troll, just my own opinion.

In fact, it would be better for the author not to define the heroine as a swordsman, because the heroine does not practice swordsmanship seriously at all in the whole story.

I have read more than 140 chapters, and I really can't stand it any longer. Despite so many typos, I still find that the writing is getting worse and worse... It doesn't feel like it was written by one person... Mark bye.

The idea is clear, but it doesn't feel like a fairy novel. The writing about cultivating immortals is very rough, and the style of painting is not right. Anyway, it doesn't feel like cultivating immortals.

I've been poisoned, I'll get out of here, you can do whatever you want. 😥

There are too many typos 😅

There are a lot of typos, and people's names are always wrong, and often the following text does not match or is inconsistent with the previous text, and the plot skips after writing. I think the author is very perfunctory.