Panxian Road

After the male protagonist appears, the female protagonist is too dependent and needs help everywhere... As a sword nun, the heroine is too weak.

Just to prevent Wangxi from being lonely, he had to catch monster eggs and separate mother and son! Although the heroine is of the blood of the heavenly veins and has accepted the mission of the Queen Mother of the West Sea, she never treats monsters and beasts as equals as human beings! Forget it, after all, we are born as human beings, but these three views have changed a bit, including the male protagonist!

Although the heroine wants to be a swordsman, there is too little description of the sword, such as the skills, the swordsmanship learned, and even the forging of the natal sword. Not to mention that the understanding process of "Tao" was not at all in the early stage. . . What's more, it's the issue of "bloodline" that makes me, a sword cultivator, very uncomfortable.

After reading 300 chapters and talking about my thoughts, I actually don't quite understand the central idea. I vaguely feel that I am just trying to climb the road of cultivating immortality. I am said to be a sword cultivator but I have never shown any signs of being a sword cultivator. The appearance of the blood of the heavenly veins seems to have just added one more heroine. Means, and the fire spirit that high-level monks covet has no use at all. The path of love is faintly ranked behind family affection. The collective centripetal force and cohesion of the sect is minimal. There is a feeling of dissatisfaction and there is not much achievement in cultivation. He holds many treasures but cannot use any of them because of his sword cultivating skills. I don't know why at all. I'm not a troll, just my own opinion.

In fact, it would be better for the author not to define the heroine as a swordsman, because the heroine does not practice swordsmanship seriously at all in the whole story.

I have read more than 140 chapters, and I really can't stand it any longer. Despite so many typos, I still find that the writing is getting worse and worse... It doesn't feel like it was written by one person... Mark bye.

I've been poisoned, I'll get out of here, you can do whatever you want. 😥

The idea is clear, but it doesn't feel like a fairy novel. The writing about cultivating immortals is very rough, and the style of painting is not right. Anyway, it doesn't feel like cultivating immortals.

There are too many typos 😅

There are so many typos that it's a bit tiring to read the whole article. Some of the plots are inconsistent, and there are still many things that have not been explained clearly.

There are a lot of typos, and people's names are always wrong, and often the following text does not match or is inconsistent with the previous text, and the plot skips after writing. I think the author is very perfunctory.

This has the most typos among the online articles I have read.

I think the writing skills of this book were a little poor at the beginning, but they got better and better later on, and overall it was pretty good. Regarding the comments about me being the Great Luo Jinxian, I think it is too biased. First of all, "stealing monster eggs to look west leads to the separation of mother and child." When I saw this, I laughed. In which cultivation novel, the protagonist takes in a contracted beast to take in a whole family? Isn't it true that only one is collected, so isn't the beast separated from its parents and brothers? What to pretend?

The sword cultivators here are weird and don't want to be sword cultivators at all.

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

I wanted to give my opinion or something, but after seeing the trolls in the comments, I couldn't afford to offend them, so forget it.

That graceful little lady is so childish. This kind of writing is not suitable for you, so go read some bloody writing.

The ending is just mentioned in one stroke... The writing behind it is so confusing

The beginning was good, but then it became more and more confusing and the plot was a bit confusing. I didn't get to the end.

Post an advertisement for "Chi Xiyue, the Lieutenant of the Wilderness Chronicles" and ask for advice.

The ending is so quick, and the plot behind it feels so rushed

I found it from listening to books. It looked really good. I thought I had found a rare treasure. Even though there were so many typos, I tolerated it! But the more I read, the more unsatisfied I became, so I simply read the book reviews and confirmed it with everyone before deciding whether it is necessary to continue! Well, I gave up in the end and summarized the following points: 1. I think the story background and character design at the beginning are quite good, and the "Sword Cultivation" here is different from other fairy tales. It can be regarded as breaking out of the established fairy tale routines and becoming unique! But no matter how successful it is, it will be no good if it fails! The "sword cultivator" in this article, as far as I understand, obtains the prototype of the "natal sword" as if he has comprehended supernatural powers. Then as the sword cultivator's strength increases, the natal sword can be transformed into any form such as swords, guns, swords and shields, flowers, plants, insects, fish, birds and beasts, and even become "one with the human sword" with the owner - improving or giving the owner abilities! To be more precise, it would be more appropriate to call it "War Cultivation"! According to the setting in the article, this type of "sword cultivator" has superior combat power and can be divided into three stages according to strength, but I don't understand the specific divisions! As for the heroine, other people's natal swords were learned through hard work (I have no idea whether they need to find materials to make them), but hers was made by directly taking out two ribs. It always feels like a shortcut was taken from the beginning! Moreover, in the subsequent training and battles, I really didn't see any outstanding performance in her "sword cultivation", nor any efforts and breakthroughs! Whenever we encounter difficulties, we rely on the bloodline talent "demonization" (I understand it as "transformation") to deal with it. If it really can't be solved, the male protagonist will definitely come to the rescue! It's simply not worthy of the status of "sword cultivator"! 2. Compared with other fairy tales, the female protagonist in this article does not have a big golden finger. Apart from the "demonization" of her bloodline talent, the biggest cheat is the male protagonist! But in comparison, I feel that the heroine has always been quite weak, so it would be better to just give her a golden finger and let her continue to improve! 3. This article is based on the war between human cultivators and monsters. The heroine accepts the talent of blood and takes it as her own duty to end the war. Therefore, the fighting scenes are mostly understandable, but I don't know if there is a problem with the author's writing style – I always feel that the fighting is not interesting, but the result is that it is very intense! According to the idea of ​​​​the female video article, the female protagonist will experience all kinds of things in the process of cultivation and growth, and will continue to gain a deeper understanding of the grudges and entanglements between the two races. There is human nature, animality, cruelty, and warmth... The heroine should slowly improve her strength, as well as "infectious power" or "centripetal force" in her friendship with people and monsters, in order to finally "reconcile the contradiction"! Well, the above are all personal conjectures, and are based on the author's ideas - from the sect's suppression of demons, the competition between sects, the internal fighting of different factions within the sect, to the extremely lengthy race war between human cultivators and demons. . I've been fighting all the time, and I'm a little tired from watching it. It seems that apart from family affection and the occasional interaction between the male and female protagonists, there aren't many warm things. In addition, the female protagonist's "sword cultivator" is not good at having natural resources and earthly treasures - there is no sense of surprise, and it feels more like a male video, right? Although I am very curious about how the heroine ends the war in the end, judging from the current direction of the story, I am not optimistic about it - is it necessary to "fight violence with violence"?

This book is actually okay, the ideas are quite good, but the writing style is still not mature enough, and many places are not detailed enough, but in the universal rebirth, time travel, this book is considered good, and it is free to read recently. It is not bad, there are many typos! One question I have is how did the natal sword come from? The heroine is made of bones, but what about other people's swords? Direct molding, no need to build? ? I feel like there are a lot of things that haven't been explained clearly, but in the novel about female protagonists cultivating immortals, this cheat is not that many! It's not an exaggeration, it's okay!

I would like to ask if Execution is the male protagonist?