Mortal Girl Becomes Immortal

I was very wary at first, but then out of nowhere I insisted on leaving with the male protagonist I just met. It was too fake.

What kind of ending is this? It really is not an ending. The author was speechless when writing the article. Did he have no idea? Let readers imagine?

This ending. . I don't want to finish it hastily. .

The more I read, the more I think I have a big brain.

It's amazing, based on my experience in reading the article, it's just the beginning, but it's coming to an end. The heroine went to participate in a dance competition and was killed by a group of people. The male protagonist came to find him and was killed by others. The heroine's fairy palace was also destroyed. The heroine woke up after 100 years. The hero looked for the heroine everywhere. It was over. This is the end

The protagonist of "The Age of Immortals and Demons" is not dark. What is dark is the world. There is nothing wrong with what our Lord does. What is twisted is the laws of this world. Just let me step on this day and become a devil! ! !

There is a bit too much psychology and narration, making the text seem a bit white and trivial. Come on, author.