Scarlet Dawn

Hello, classmate on the right, I would like to ask if I should bring you some fruit when I come back for a return visit. I remember that this was always the case between neighbors. So... What do you want to eat...

"I Maybe I Can Be a Hero" has returned the favor. I have never seen the previous book review in the client. I had to go to Writer Assistant to find it. Thanks for the reward, boss.

I really like this book, every character and their fate, keep it up.

Come on, the hardest part is here

Actually, I think it's okay to write, so deserted?

I want to gain weight before reading, but I can't help but click in (~￣▽￣) Damn it, please update it soon!

Hahaha, the male protagonist is so domineering! Interesting!

Well written and worth reading, great book!

Dude, you are much better than me, "Noah: War of the Worlds" is coming and going.

I'm reading a book again. Although I'm busy with work, I still won't forget to catch up on updates.

One more chapter is not enough, please add more.

Dude, what you write is really good. When I see a raven, I feel familiar. Great Wall of the North, will dragons appear in the future? Game of Thrones?

Oh, I came to visit and read a few chapters. It's good. Come on! ! !

Looks good, add to book list! If you like it as much as me, please come to the book list and give this book a thumbs up (^_^)😍

Er Ya, you have actually opened a new book. Sure enough, you are hungry and thirsty when you have no time to write math questions during the summer vacation? Huh, then I took a look at it and found that it was only thirty-six thousand. I don't think this is your character. You should have saved the manuscript to sixty-three thousand. I'll read the beginning first. The beginning is pretty good, at least it can arouse interest in reading. The previous section mainly talks about combat and tactics, and I have to say that Erya is definitely writing it seriously, at least it's not a mass product. And although the application of the convex lens principle is indeed for the earth, it is indeed known to ordinary people, unlike some novels where the protagonists are all science tycoons. BUT Two Crows was a little confused after writing Beast Tide. Although the Haydn section later was a little turbulent, it was not enough, and the contrast with the previous gay love was a bit big. I feel that this may lose some readers who originally came in just to watch the fights. In fact, I believe you have also discovered it, but after looking at it again, this is indeed difficult to change. But there is still one good thing here, which is to introduce the character of Xue Xi. When she said "I did not cheat", I was indeed silent. In fact, I suspect that for the character Xue Xi, you had reference to Qi Qi, but Qi Qi is pure black, and you want Xue Xi to be pure white, right? Also, your skills are still not good enough hhhhhhhh and I suspect it is your first time writing a conspiracy theory, some traces can still be seen. However, although I complained a lot above, I have to say that this is still a good book. Come on, my two crows hhhhhhhh

1. Don't start a fight and be gay. If you see someone, delete the post and ban them. 2. I am not opposed to advertising, after all, this is the basic market situation. Although I myself feel it is impolite to place advertisements under other people's books, I have no choice but to shamelessly go ahead. So just use your heart and mind, and don't open an advertising building to close it, otherwise the effect will be very poor. 3. There are no rules. I will make up for it later if I think of anything.

Knowing that I am stupid and poor at writing, I specially built a forum to collect various bugs and suggestions. The opportunity must not be missed and will never come back again. The opportunity to scold the author is here!