Reborn: A Growth Plan for 1975

I don't know why soldiers in the era literature have to subsidize their families! My grandpa's brother was a soldier in the 1950s! Being a soldier is so hard and you still don't have enough to eat! There is also life danger! He became a deserter at that time and fled home to have a full meal! Then he was sent back by my grandpa! I was afraid that if I deserted, I would be caught and shot! Then the great grandfather went to Xinjiang with the army! Worked in the military all my life! At that time, he was just a soldier and just took care of himself! And then the fifties! My grandpa's brother went to a normal university! Become a teacher! The salary is not enough for one person! I'm so hungry! I quit my job and came back to be a farmer! My family is from Anhui!

The writing style feels so far-fetched and makes people feel tired to read it. Moreover, the whole story is boring and lacks any vitality. The author's writing style needs to be strengthened. In short, I feel that this novel is boring to read and it is a pity to abandon it.

Did the author finish writing the manuscript and not review it before publishing it? One or two typos are acceptable and will not affect reading too much, but there are typos in almost every paragraph, which really makes people laugh every minute. Readers spend money to subscribe, which makes them feel very uncomfortable. I hope the author can correct it?

I can't understand... Why should you give the money you earn to your father-in-law... You have already separated your family, so why should you still subsidize your brothers? They have the skills to make money. Why don't you think about your own family? You will have children in the future.

There are so many typos that it makes me heartbroken!

It's a running account. They just eat whatever they eat every day. They compliment each other when they meet. There are no ups and downs at all. There are only two military wives in the entire military region. They are drunk. Every chapter feels like it is about the same thing. The heroine is a selfless Virgin. She meets many powerful people. It doesn't look like the 70s at all. It feels like the 90s.

It was okay at first, but then I saw that the author's writing became more and more like a narrative. The characters' psychology and ways of doing things are all expressed by the narration. I also felt that everything the heroine did could be solved easily. It was too selfless and too fake to ask for anything in return. I like the kind of writing that allows readers to imagine what kind of person the heroine is through the dialogue and the way things are done, rather than the author narrating what kind of person the heroine is.

There is no top quality or all kinds of suicide attempts, it should be a good-looking article. But the heroine is too fake and aloof. She seems to be doing a friend a favor by recuperating the body of the group leader and treating Mr. Qiao. She has no inner requirements or connections. It seems that there is no selfishness at all, it is too noble or false, and the things they do are the opposite. I didn't feel excited even after making so much money selling medicine. I didn't feel nervous when I saw someone like Mr. Qiao. The mood remains unchanged. So fake

It's okay, at least the male and female protagonists are not Madonnas, there are top-quality characters but they don't appear often, there is no big plot, and there are not too many people appearing, but the writing is light, the description of emotions is slow and restrained, and the female protagonist is calm and has the feeling of a bystander. It means that the hero saves the heroine, performs artificial respiration, and then gets married. The heroine's golden finger is the medical skill and heals the father-in-law, the hero's comrade. Then a cousin of the hero's comrade-in-arms appears, who likes the heroine, and then joins the army. She gets pregnant and gives birth to a child, college entrance examination, university, development in the capital, meets some people, the hero is injured once, the heroine wakes up, gives birth to a daughter, and the family is harmonious. That's it! Some appear and are never mentioned again. You can read it in Shuhuang

I don't know why so many people write about military wives. I would like to recommend the new book I wrote, "Little Women Who Struggled in the 70s". Welcome everyone to read it.