Reborn to Be Cherished

All of them, therefore, therefore, therefore… The long, drawn-out descriptions are too verbose; they make it hard to breathe. I've read over a hundred chapters, and it's exhausting. 😒

It looks like a work suitable for relaxing and unwinding.

The article is alright, but it's too verbose and doesn't need much explanation.

A normal person wouldn't tell someone they've just met that they've just received a sum of money, that they bought a house in a certain neighborhood, and how they plan to make a living in the future. They would tell others about their future plans!

The male protagonist has only ever had one woman in his past and present lives: the female protagonist.

The writing is flat and straightforward, with long, tedious descriptions that make it tiring to read. The slow-burn pace is also excessively slow. This time, the free books are either ones I've already read or ones I didn't enjoy. I'm almost at my breaking point with this book drought.

It's too wordy. The beginning was okay, but I couldn't stand the rest.

The story is good, but it's too long-winded! I'm an old man and I don't have the patience for it!

I've submitted seven recommendation votes. Keep it up!

Admiring your work! Enjoy savoring it slowly. 🤝