Harry Potter and the Magical Badger

The protagonist is really useless. He is just an idiot. He knows that he is in the magic world. If he doesn't know magic, he just learns martial arts or takes the technological route. He really thinks of himself as a child. He has lived in vain for ten years and can't even fight with others.

The deal (or threat) between Delphi and the mysterious man aroused my curiosity. By the way, the emotional scene between Hermione and the male protagonist was a bit too much (but it was superbly written), but should the male protagonist be more reserved and pay attention to his distance? Author, do you want to play for free? I don't want to cry. Looking forward to what follows. Come on

Some suggestions and thoughts: First of all, the protagonists are all in the first grade. Is it a bit early to start the relationship line so early at the age of 11? The emotions at this time are ignorant and ignorant. Then Delphi is the protagonist and the protagonist escorts her to and from get out of class. But after all, Delphi is a Slytherin. What should she do when she returns to the common room at night? Can the protagonist also follow? I understand that the author wrote it to warm up the relationship between the two, but the handling is not reasonable. In addition, if there is only one female protagonist, there is no need to write Hermione as a jealous image. Hermione in the novel is very sensible and rational; Sissi and Harry also heat up their relationship a bit quickly. In the original work, neither Hakim nor Hero was so fast (⊙o⊙)! Write more about friendship during this period Furthermore, some people say that Sissi is ignorant. In fact, no one has gone through that rebellious period. If your parents or relatives say that you can't play with Xiao Ming without asking the reason, there is no reason at all, and no one will be happy. As for saying that the protagonist is a squib, it is just a child's angry talk. The protagonist's love for his sister is correct, but the way of expression is not sure whether it is specially arranged by the author or something unreasonable.

Sacrificing oneself to save others is awesome. This is the protagonist. But if we wait for the protagonist to cheat and return, will the protagonist absorb the magic stone?

Let me just say one thing, if the girl doesn't accept her, don't go out of her way to flirt with her. Does the author like to write about eight o'clock, or does the author really enjoy the process of readers tearing each other apart because of the difference in holding shares?

Really entered the palace? Nothing left

I thought I was a eunuch, after half a year😅😅

It's not easy, it's actually changed 😭

Thinking of a configuration, the sword that killed the giant snake in the secret room is a legendary item no less than the Elder Wand. There must be many more in the world. Why not let the protagonist find some such legendary items, maybe he can become a melee mage.

The idea is good, but the main character is a bit confusing... You were so careful with Voldemort at the beginning, but you went to catch him with a net and a knife at the back, and then you went to challenge Voldemort alone without trying to see if he could actually cast a spell? ? ? It's too desperate to be anxious; and there is a protagonist who is grabbed on the neck and knocked unconscious many times despite resisting magic. He should at least take some protective measures or exercise. Of course, the author seems to have his own ideas, so I will mention it.

The protagonist is an 11-year-old squib who has not yet entered school, but he actually guides Hermione to learn a magic~

Since the author has always emphasized that it is a single heroine, he should not create so many plots where two women compete for husbands. Since it is written like this, just two, but don't make it become a lover's rebellion or one of them dies! ! ! Also, it doesn't matter that the younger sister likes Harry, but calling the male protagonist a squib is too much. I suggest that there be less scenes with the younger sister.

Finally coming back, looking forward to it🙂

Is it still updated after two months? Or is it a new book?

Author, are your hands okay?

Come on! Pit d(ŐдŐ๑)!

Update it quickly, don't stop ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ.

Very well written! Come on! ! Waiting for your update! 🤭

Alangka came here with "Magic Machine World" to complain, and found that what you said made sense.

I hope the author can resume updating

The book begins to fall apart when the younger sister prefers Harry. Although this may be normal, this is a novel. Your younger sister, who has always had a good relationship with her since childhood, suddenly, for no reason, prefers her friends in certain matters to her older brother who she had been with day and night. Very poisonous. A fanfic is more inclined to the intersection between the protagonist and the original owner, rather than giving up the sister he has raised for more than ten years.

Author, I hope you will continue to update

Come back soon and update quickly,

Master Miaomiao, have you stopped updating?

So what? The Snake Yard only accepts purebloods. How did that little girl whose parents are both Muggles get in?

I thought about it carefully and found out that Delfei is the daughter of a mysterious man. Are you trying to play haha ​​8? Master Miaomiao, should Ron be paired with Hermione? If Harry is paired with Ginny and Sissy, then Harry's son won't be able to come out. Sure enough, my sister can't get married. Awesome?