The Ancestral Demon of the Witch World

After reading Chapter 10, I found that the author had a point that was not very correct. The foundation of aristocratic rule was not shaken by the development of productivity and production relations. It was just one of them. The most fundamental reason was the shaking of divine power. People were enlightened, and the representative was to take the king. If you want to know more deeply, read Western history. According to the world described by the author, there are powers beyond ordinary people, and their roots are deep among the people. Therefore, even if the productive forces are liberated, it is impossible to have the kind of society you think of. Beings with extraordinary powers will always rule and control the common people. At most, the ruling class will change the soup without changing the medicine. Changing the waistcoat and not calling it a nobleman, although it does not have a great impact on the reading of the full text, is very awkward for the perception. In fact, if you don't understand the relationship very well, there is no need to write it in. You can also use other mental activities to pass it through, and it will not affect the character development.

Although I don't like the Virgin, I also don't like the dark character of the protagonist. No matter how high or low the bottom line is, you should have a certain heart and maintain goodwill towards others without involving core interests. This is a healthy outlook on life.

Readers who like Our Lady, don't criticize the author. This is the book you like. The protagonist of this book is cruel and ruthless on the surface. You will know if you read it carefully. The protagonist kills either because of his duty or because he offended the protagonist. After reading more than 50 chapters, I didn't take the initiative to kill anyone for profit. Readers who like all the female characters in the book to be beautiful are also suitable for this book. Beautiful girls will appear every few chapters, and none of them are ugly, which will completely satisfy you. To summarize, the protagonist has what you call three righteous views, and there are many beauties in the book.

The author has been scolded by both sides. Readers who like Madonna can't stand it. I like dark writing and can't stand it either. I think it's fake.

Are you using a chip or a computer to directly instill strength? Where did it come from (ー_ー)!! You committed suicide at the beginning

There are too many ambiguities, there are too many beautiful women, why are there no ugly women? After reading Chapter 80, I found that these women are everywhere, and I can't stand it 😥

As you can see, the later stages are relatively boring. But this is a common problem in all novels. Flaws do not cover up strengths

Author, quit the circle, writing novels is not for you

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I thought it was a mess, but I still enjoyed it. It was a mess, but I could still write hundreds of chapters later.

Pig's Feet is such a smart person who doesn't want to suffer losses. Doesn't he know that the most practical way is to defend himself from witchcraft that can save his life and escape? ! All three witchcrafts are offensive. There are many ways to kill people, but the human body is the most vulnerable, so saving life first is the most important. For ancient warriors, the most valuable equipment was armor, not swords and guns. As long as the defensive maneuver is good, pig's feet, as a big knight, have many ways to kill people.

This book should be called "Good Dog"

Listen to me, just drive the screws. You don't have the talent to write novels.

The old author is gone, but he is gone. Familiar readers have also disappeared, and now I am the only one left.

It's a waste of time, has many flaws, and some of the plots are inexplicable. You will know how big the gap is after reading some quality books. The author is eager for quick success and has not thought about how to write this book well.

I can accept the dark novel, but I can't accept the white-eyed wolf. People who are kind to you are used by the protagonist for profit. If you don't have it, you don't care. It is normal to repay kindness with revenge. Anyway, the attitude of the protagonist is, what does it matter to me if you are good to me? Repay you? I'll just keep you and not kill you.

Where can I buy smart chips?

It feels pretty good, although the ending is a bit rushed, but it is better than many watery endings nowadays. Overall it's worth recommending.

The Shadow of Holy Light can capture the fragments of the future of the plane. The Eye of Chaos is the ability to break the order of the fragments of the future of the plane. Isn't this the initial model of the Lord God Space? It is definitely better for the protagonist to create a Lord God Space and let others work than to work alone.

Is this book a black book? I've read it for almost a hundred times, but I can't find anything that's dark. Is there a heroine? Is there a heroine who should run away early? There can be rpqs like this, but there's a heroine who can't stand it.

The content of the book is completely different from the style of the introduction. The introduction gives the impression that it will be an interesting and light-hearted novel. In fact, this is a dark novel. The protagonist is mentally and physically dark and insists on unscrupulous means. You never know who will die suddenly in this book. The character created in one chapter dies at the beginning of the second chapter. Is it surprising? However, I still have to say that although the atmosphere of this book is gloomy, it is not a white book. The author's writing skills are very good, and the character creation is very successful. The plot of each chapter is very compact, and there is a feeling that you can't understand it if you skip a chapter. It will be difficult to catch up with such a book. It is better to have the perseverance to hoard it for a few days. It is a rare true masterpiece from Sanjiangge... Recently, Sanjiangge's recommendations have become worse and worse, and it is difficult to find good books from it.

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Continuing with the issue of characterization, let's talk about the mask I wrote (the author can write anything, as long as it gives the character some characteristics, like the Lich King, or Dark Souls, Death (this Death is wearing a black cloak, with only skeletons inside, surrounded by black energy, holding a scythe), etc., Giving people the impression of being haunted by darkness), let's talk about this mask, I have already written how to make it reasonable This mask is the external manifestation of a certain witchcraft of the protagonist (this witchcraft is the best self-created iconic witchcraft). This mask can be hidden (hiding it just does not add the additional ability, but the witchcraft can still be used normally), but wearing the mask will increase the mental power or thinking ability by 5%-3% (just for this kind of painless number) According to reports, because if you want to pretend to be a white wizard, you can't carry such an evil thing. Even if you hide it, the loss will not be too big. Just carry it with you on a daily basis. No matter how small a mosquito is, it is still meat. It is reasonable, so that the image of the protagonist can give a constant outline). Besides, because the more advanced wizards on our side can see the protagonist at once (1 There is usually this kind of plot. After being glanced by a higher wizard, the protagonist feels that his whole body has been seen through, which strengthens the protagonist's idea of improving his strength), but the protagonist's mask is only useful for the protagonist's level, and is useless for advanced levels, so the great wizard has no intention of taking anything by force (if it is an enemy wizard, but because the protagonist is sneaking in Of course, such an iconic thing must be hidden), but this mask, because the protagonist has a core, can be upgraded (that is, at the first level, it increases thinking power by 5%. At the second level, I can still use it after upgrading, and it can also increase by 5%). And wizards of the same level, who are also wizards, all have more or less strange things about them. So I don't care much Now let's start with my existing feelings about the protagonist. Apart from being good-looking, there is nothing that gives me an intuitive feeling, so I think it would be better to add some features (actually there are many novels, and the villains impress me more deeply). In fact, I personally feel that it is better to be feared by mortals than to be infatuated by mortals (or a combination of the two. In fact, I feel that giving fear to others can make the character more powerful). And I designed this mask, which actually feels quite handsome. The author wants to control the appearance. I feel that this does not conflict. Isn't there a kind of beauty called incomplete beauty (my protagonist is also not missing anything, just an extra half of the mask) To be continued. I have paid my previous discretion (QAQ is uncomfortable)

In this paragraph, I will write about some problems in Chapter 94. This problem has also appeared in many previous chapters (I think it is a problem, and I don't know if what I said is right or not, the author just has fun reading it) ① Some places have too much explanation, or some places don't really need to be explained. It is better to express it through dialogue and descriptions of the expressions and psychology between the characters (I feel that this is the key to distinguishing short stories from short stories), such as the section about the wizard's secret realm in Chapter 94. "There is no wizard secret! Senior, you think too much," Lin Wei said with a smile, giving people a feeling of spring breeze. "But... But... Huh?" Bensini was confused for a moment, and then instantly understood what Lin Wei meant. Lin Wei wants to eat alone! "I remember that when I came to your manor yesterday, the person in charge of welcoming me should be your direct grandson, right?" Lin Wei just talked about things unrelated to the topic casually. But Bensini immediately understood what he meant, and a chill ran down his spine. "I want to meet your direct grandchildren tomorrow. After all, this incident was solved thanks to the help of my seniors. I don't have much to offer. I'll just use some small gifts as insurance for your preparations. I hope it will be of some use and keep them safe." Anyone who sees Lin Wei's expression now can't help but envy those direct grandchildren. After today's battle, everyone can see how powerful Lin Wei is, including Bensini. For such a powerful person, what he gives out will never be simple. "Oh! By the way, senior, leave it to me to report to the academy. Senior, go and get ready. I'm looking forward to meeting those little guys more and more." Lin Wei's young face formed a strong contrast with the words he spoke. "Oh... Then how will he deal with it?" Bensini pointed at the king and said in a hoarse voice. (My opinion is, don't explain too much. In fact, the words you use can have the same meaning as the expressions and movements of the characters, and it won't look so white. The use of some vocabulary can also achieve good results. For example: only, just, how could it be, not in any way, not at all. Such words are very effective. Let me give you an example. Although they are both second-level wizards, Bensini is just an old man struggling on the line of life and death, trying his best to enjoy himself. He has only a little power and cannot pose a threat to Lin Wei. Or it doesn't pose the slightest threat to Lin Wei. You see, when I use sentences like this, I don't write about how Lin Wei is so strong, how Benseni is so corrupt, or how he has no fighting ability. Using modifiers can highlight the difference in strength, and it doesn't look white. If you explain too much, it will look white. The part in the palace where the mastermind is revealed can also be written like this. I feel that that part is a bit white.) To be continued

There are no major flaws, but there are no merits worth talking about. Overall a bit boring. It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. Best used to describe

Fighting monsters and upgrading: People who read online articles will more or less put themselves into it, but I prefer to watch the upgrading scenes (I don't know if any of you book friends are the same as me). Let me first talk about why I like to watch upgrades, because I am more or less involved in it, so when the protagonist upgrades, I always feel that he is really getting stronger. Take this article as an example. The core is a thing that digitizes strength, which can give readers a better intuitive feeling. Even if you The crazy collection of books in the library gives people the feeling that the protagonist's background has improved, so I think it would be better to describe this kind of place in more detail, such as what books have been collected, and in which books I have used Spherical Core's sorting and analysis ability to analyze things that no one else knows (Witch World) Warlocks are doing quite well in this area), this is making full use of your golden fingers, and the protagonist's data improvement. It is better to write down the improvement process in detail. I will list the data after a while (because it is the apprenticeship stage, so the changes will be more ordinary), but the author did not put the witchcraft data together. Next (refer to the sorcerer), I find it quite uncomfortable. There is no intuitive expression of strength. For example, the mental attack of the protagonist's eyes is digitized in the core of the ball. It will stun apprentices of different levels for a certain number of seconds, and people with higher mental powers will be stun for a decreasing number of seconds. You can describe how mysterious these eyes are when describing the battle, but in the core, it is better to digitize it, so that it feels like the protagonist understands all aspects of himself, and it also allows readers to see clearly. At the same time, ※ I want to talk about a few mistakes here Failure: When fighting against a third-level apprentice, I always felt that the author said what he said in terms of combat. It felt light and airy, especially the witchcraft of Black Sand. It was too buggy. Is this an apprentice-level skill? I feel that this witchcraft can be used for life if it is optimized (because the author has a ball core, it feels quite reasonable to upgrade witchcraft and so on. For example, I am a level 1 official wizard, and I upgraded my previous level 2 apprentice witchcraft to level 1 witchcraft). Just say this black sand handle. It feels like everything changes, and it appears out of thin air. Then I can YY. I will have more mental power in the future, okay. Make a volley of thousands of arrows, or transform the black sand into various runes, and then carry the formation with you (because the black sand can turn into runes and is itself an element, so a large number of runes can be combined into a formation. This kind of high-precision operation is most suitable for the core). Who can you think of this portable formation? The protagonist no longer has to be busy upgrading all day long, but is busy studying advanced formations. So this Black Sand is too buggy at the moment, so I'll delete it soon when it becomes the official wizard. The author needs to work hard and think about witchcraft, so please post a few solicitation posts. By the way, I strongly suggest that you don't call out the names of witchcraft during a fight. It feels a bit stupid. For those witchcrafts of yours, I know they are black sand without even looking at the names, so don't write out the names. By the way, my entire series is a suggestion category, so the author can adopt it if it seems reasonable. Due to the word limit, there will be some suggestions for the author ③

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1. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. Although it does not break out of the wizard's usual cage, the plot is very exciting. 2. Although Pig's Knuckle's character is not described in much detail, it is consistent with a mature adult's mind. 3. The power system is a bit vague, and the golden finger is too powerful. 4. When you are born as a human being, you must have indelible beauty in your heart. The so-called killing of your wife to prove the truth is not advisable. Blind pursuit of power will definitely lead to the collapse of values. 5. This book has been moved to the fattening area, and daily recommendations will be provided. We look forward to the author's early release. In addition, not every author can become a great writer. Don't hang yourself on a tree. Studies are what's important.

It makes me cry😭!

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