Fantasy Arms

There must be a reason why it is not popular. No matter how good the writing is, a niche novel with a plot cannot become popular. Not all popular novels are written by novices, so the trolls downstairs don't need to say that only novice novels can become popular. Let's talk about the characters. The character of the protagonist, the martial artist, is not fully reflected. What about the great perseverance to explore the limits of the human body day after day? What about the personality that is incompatible with the surrounding people? Where are the fighting skills of martial artists? The author will say that fighting skills are related to the subsequent settings, but the readers don't know anything. If you can't justify it in the early stage, it is typical of ignoring the character in order to promote the plot in your mind. The protagonist is afraid of ghosts, dogs, this, that, and makes a fuss about everything he sees. Wouldn't it be better if you were a loser? A martial artist who is out of tune with the public? In short, it is a fact that it is not popular. Can the author reflect on his writing techniques? Welcome the brainless trolls

Because I couldn't stand the comments from some readers, I specially copied the comments from my book list. I hope more people can appreciate this quality work. The following are my comments on the book list. The comments are divided into two parts: update and completion. Comments while following the update: Although the author said in his introduction that he is a setting person and a foreshadowing person, after following the latest chapter, I found that there are still loopholes in the setting. As for the comment in this book review that the plot is slow, I actually recommend reading the short version, which is much more enjoyable than this kind of article with a grand world view. I like the setting of this book very much, although it seems like it has just begun. Comments after finishing the book: When I first saw the sudden end of the novel in the chapter, I started to wonder. Could it be that the author couldn't bear it and gave up? However, after actually reading it, this novel can be raised one to two levels just by the handling of the ending. In terms of the overall style of this novel, it is a very high-quality work. In addition, it is commendable that the author can guarantee such a high-quality ending despite such dismal results. Despite all the praise, there are still some flaws in the details of the work. Although the author later said that some early chapters had been revised, they were not detailed enough. However, these minor flaws have been magnified by many readers, which is partly related to the slow pace of the novel itself. This is not to belittle the pace of the novel, on the contrary, it is precisely because of this slow pace that a complete story in which every detail can be clearly seen is presented to the reader sharply. Whenever I encounter good works and powerful authors that have been buried, I always feel emotional. I hope the author will not be defeated by setbacks and look forward to the next work. After all, flaws cannot be concealed.

The 980,000-word completed book of Slow Heat... Ah this

The subject matter is niche... The writing style and the subject matter are inconsistent... A large number of characters have poisonous personalities... There are certain problems with the logic in the later stages... And a very long slow-burning plot

Miss 2b on the cover praised it, and I am satisfied with this book.

But you are so stupid, you have written 19 chapters about a battle that started in the woods and it is not finished yet, and you are so stupid and you still update it every day, it is impossible to subscribe, okay... It's okay to think of water, but you have to increase the amount of water, otherwise just pay attention to the rhythm... It doesn't bring a large number of readers, so writing this way will make many people give up.

I don't like a foreigner being a heroine or a social butterfly.

Today I met a strange person. I had just come back from eating at the door. I saw a homeless man picking up garbage, so I handed him the empty bottle. When I was about to walk by, I didn't expect to be stopped by the homeless man. "I'm sorry to bother you for a minute. I see that you are so caring. I wonder if you can do me a little favor?" The homeless man said politely. Out of curiosity, I asked him what help he wanted from me. A gloomy look flashed in the tramp's eyes, "Actually, I am a rich man. Although I don't have much property, I still have tens of millions of wealth. It's just that something unexpected happened. I never expected that the failure of an important investment would put me in such a situation overnight. Not only was my property frozen, but my wife also left me. I was completely dejected and just planned to die." I saw that even though he was in rags, he still had a certain temperament, so I couldn't help but believe him, and I felt very sympathetic to his plight, so I said, "Do you want me to lend you money to make a comeback?" "No, there are more important things!" When the homeless man heard this, his eyes shone brightly, "At that time, I wanted to die and stood on the roof, just waiting to jump off at midnight. While waiting, I opened the Qidian client on my mobile phone and found a good book titled "The First Era of Heaven"!" When talking about this book, the tramp's eyes became even brighter, "The plot of this book is wonderful and the writing is touching. It immediately made me give up the idea of committing suicide. I just want to wait quietly for updates every day. There is only one thing I want to ask for today. I want to use your mobile phone to log in to my Qidian High V account, read today's two chapters, and vote for a few recommendations." I couldn't help but unlock the phone and hand it to him. I saw him logging in to the account skillfully, reading the votes, and then left immediately. I looked at his back and couldn't help but quickly log in to my account and search for "Tian Yi Era"! Clicked on a collection

What kind of operation is the engraving skill? What does the need for Phantom Star mean? Is the Magic Star a one-time consumption or can it be consumed repeatedly? For example: Exploding Phantom Star... At level 2, 5,... The potential burst requirement is 3, the combination critical hit requirement is 1,... At level 3, 7,... Blitz requires 3, Air Blade requires 3,... The total number of magic stars required for the four skills has exceeded the total number.

Daily updates are too few and fattening is difficult

The last few chapters have been so confusing to each other that I would have forgotten if they were posted together, but they are just one chapter a day, and I feel like I can't keep going.

Feel the writing style. . . Sort of. . Ancient. . . . Martial arts master. . . . Just exercise. . . . The will is not rooted in the ground. . . . Sent to the wrong place! It's already a semi-light novel anyway. Half light and half not light. . .

It's getting more and more awkward to watch. I feel like the main character is just a charlatan, and the priestess is the main character.

I feel like this book is incompatible with the starting point . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . The above is purely fictitious and any similarity is purely coincidental.

The foreshadowing at the beginning was a bit long, and I watched it several times but couldn't finish it. Read it in one sitting. Settings are pretty good

The writing is really good, I have been following it, please put it on the shelves, I will support 😁😁😁

When I clicked on the recharge button when subscribing, I was given the following chapters as a gift. I don't know if this counts as my first subscription. . . .

The last few chapters have been good. The description of the fighting scenes is not very good, and there are too many dialogues. They are just like the verbal wars in Japanese novels 😅

Finally updated again. If you stop updating for so long, you will definitely lose followers.

The second time I was asked to quit, there was something wrong with the protagonist's character.

When I was strong, I killed a lord who was afraid of a regular group by myself, and killed a dragon with two people. In the end, I couldn't defeat two little devils when I went out. This setting is too outrageous...

Sorry, I can't hold on anymore. I don't like the Japanese style in sheep's clothing. Xi Zi Nai? Are there any names like this in China?

The pseudo-setting is reasonable, but if the game interferes with reality, why is it reasonable?

Is this book out of date? 😓

The process of learning skills is really too long...

This protagonist is wrong! Just after killing the Abyss Commander, he turned around and was tortured by a little man who looked like a human cavalry captain? I always feel that I have cognitive confusion... Also, you said that the protagonist has been a genius since he was a child, but his combat skills are not as good as those of gamers? Obviously when he first entered the game, didn't the protagonist fight back when monsters were attacking him? Doesn't it mean that other players can't do it? Depressed! After thinking about it for a long time, I always feel that game skills can violate the physical laws of reality, so players can use game skills to violate common sense and unexpectedly abuse fighting masters. I don't know if this is the case, but the author's description always makes me feel that the protagonist's martial arts training is useless, and the character of the protagonist should be changed to a game waste house. Otherwise, I always feel that the style of the painting is wrong.

The author's writing is quite good, and the setting is quite rigorous. Come on.

Is it a little too early to put it on the shelves? I'm afraid I don't even have a leg to test the waters. . . But the writing still sounds good.

Everyone who comes here wants to read a good article. Even if it is not a good article, it should not be written in such a dark way. It will easily make people give up.

This book is really good, but I don't think it's very popular. . .