Football Savior

After reading 4 pictures, I dare not write the word "Hengda", so I write it as "Hengbing". . . I'm so drunk. There's not that much thunder in Qidian Football. Hey, I'm upset watching it.

In the past, domestic football was divided into southern, northern, Shanghai and Sichuan schools. The Sichuan style is the best looking and pays more attention to your feet. Now there are no factions in the country, all are head teams.

I just discovered this book, and I had an idea before I even read it. First of all, the title of the book stood out. Secondly, the theme introduced the savior of the national football team. Thirdly, courage. It takes courage to write about the national football team. No matter how it is written, give it a thumbs up. No matter how much you criticize the national football team, nine out of ten people have a dream of playing in the national football team and wish they could get there. I won't read it for now, I'll save it for now and then read it after 200,000 words.

Can the author update it faster? This pace is excruciating. Another suggestion: compared to other aspects of this article, the description of the game is a shortcoming. First of all, the players in the second-tier competition are not well-known. It is difficult to put them into the game if you don't know who they are. Furthermore, there are problems with formatting, sentence fragmentation, and typos, which greatly affect reading. Of course, the whole thing is regarded as food and grass.

Not bad, brother, I still remember Guangxi Long Guida, but it's a pity that it was sold. I suggest that the text be polished a bit. It's still a bit messy now, and the rhythm must be mastered. If you are too awesome, you can't release it too early. You must not overdo it with skills and other cheats, and you must have cool control. Now, there is only one book like you, Call of an Army. The writing is a little smoother than yours, you can learn from his rhythm. In short, yy can't be avoided but it can't be too much. In fact, the timeline can be advanced by about 5 years, which makes it much easier to write. Now you have to rely on your own brain to make up for transfers and other matters, which will make loopholes bigger. It is the first time to write so many words, all with the fantasy of the rise of the national football team 😭