Dimensional Broker

The writing is inexplicable. The author may want to use a foreshadowing method to achieve an unexpected effect in the final ending, but the foreshadowing is always too superficial due to insufficient writing power. In terms of characterization, it is quite good, but the protagonist's emotions are always a problem. The author may want to write about the daily feeling, but always fails to achieve it, resulting in the protagonist's feelings being always inexplicable. Brilliant, (it's okay to steal the heroine of the original work, but the key is to steal it after the heroine and the male protagonist of the original work have feelings. Forget it, you are still grinding, you are still stepping on n boats... It is really full of flaws...) In terms of structure, the author created an everyday world at the beginning (this is how I was deceived), and then found out that it is a multi-world travel system, and then you create your own world? ? ? Integrate all the characters, maybe you want to write a comprehensive comic? But it still feels strange. Maybe I can't get the author's ideas, but I feel like most people are probably the same as me (but the writing style is really good, describing various aspects) 😠😠😠

Didn't the author realize that since the protagonist was transferred from the heroine's world to the giant halfway through, the performance of this book has plummeted? The passers-by wrote so well, it's so disgusting to leave in the middle of the journey! Because of this, I gave up reading it every day. After seeing The Passing of Giants, the author went back to writing Muse and I no longer had the intention to read it!

I just read a dozen chapters, and I feel like the protagonist is stupid. He spent 2,000 of the only 3,000 achievement points at the beginning. Everyone knows how important the resources are at the beginning, but it turned out that he spent them on having fun. What a stupid act.

The writing is okay, but unfortunately it does not meet the appetite of most people. The results are poor, and the author has always insisted that there is no eunuch. It is much better than those who write about eunuchs.

Happy New Year. I wish all readers and authors a prosperous career in the new year. Come on!

Why is the passerby plot inexplicably missing? Not to mention conquering them, but at least getting Yinglili out of Lunya's misery 😰, it's a bit confusing.

It's great that I was able to finish it, but it's a pity that this novel doesn't have a strong sense of immersion, and I feel less and less as I go to the end. Especially in the Dragon Ball world, the protagonist who gets tired even after digging a small hole is such a waste, so weak. As expected, the attributes mentioned before can only be used as a background wall. After reading this article, I couldn't hold on, so I skipped to the last chapter to see the ending. The subject matter is very good, but it is not well written. We need a sense of immersion when reading novels. If you can't get into it, you will not be able to read it. I hope the author's new book will improve.

The boss is still updating. It's so popular. It's better to end it with a decisive ending and start a new book. You can't hang yourself from a tree.

The story line is too confusing, and there is no trace of the connection.

After reading two chapters, I can't accept this kind of anime-style dialogue. Although I like Two-Spined Salamander, why don't I just watch the anime if it's to watch the daily Comics of Two-Spined Salamander? If the author writes this, it's destined to be a niche audience.

Let me start by saying that I have only seen the first ten or so pictures of Giant. The passerby heroine disappeared inexplicably. . . . Just move on to the next chapter. . To me it feels like a book made out of a bunch of eunuch novels. . When I read the heroine, I felt it was okay and the description was quite delicate. I thought I was going to dig out the heroine with a hoe. . . I looked at it, and then nothing happened. . This makes me very unhappy. (ﾉಥBenefitಥ)Watt, that feeling of holding back two kilograms is really embarrassing. . .

Finished with flowers (๑•ั็ω•็ั๑)

Happy National Day~\(≧▽≦)/~

Is the author's new book out yet?

Is the author's new book out yet?

Alas, I can only say that the plot is forced. With Frieza's ability, he was threatened by the gang boss for ten seconds. Negotiations only happen when the gap is not big. An ant threatens a lion. Without the ability to copy artists, even a few ordinary people can't beat them. Just keep writing insipidly, forcefully participate in the plot, and have no choice but to get over all day long. If you don't want to cause trouble, just hide away. Why bother?

Anyway, I just support the author.

"OVERLORD", "Blessings for a Beautiful World", "Re: Life in a Different World from Scratch", "Money Control", "Grandma War", "Red Girl", "Moon Shadow Agent", "ZOMBIE LAND SAGA", "Between the Sky and the Sea", "Layton Mystery Detective Agency ~Katli's Puzzle Book~", "Danganronpa", "Magical Girl Training Program Lyrics" "Magical Girl Website" "Magical Girl Garden" "Magical Girl Special Battle Asuka", "Hell Shoujo", "Touhou Miko", "Card Captor Sakura", "Ramen-loving Koizumi-kun", "Yuki Yuna is a Brave" "Cute Beast Girl Zoo", "Pastel Memories", "Saint Shoujo Soar", "Cottbatch Flight Squadron in the Wild" and "Fly!" Fighter Girl", "CIRCLET PRINCESS", "An Angel Came to Me", "Tobacco Animation", "The Rising of the Shield Hero", "The Price of Smile", "Unlucky Pop Don't Smile", "The Fifth Bride" "The Promised Neverland", "Gambling Abyss Season 2", "Cohabitants sometimes on the lap, sometimes on the head", "Ghost Stories Restaurant", "Ghost Stories from School", "Hell Teacher", "Violent Space Pirates", "Kamikaze Kaitou Jeanne", "Holy Girl", "Three Cat Eye Sisters", "Getaro Series", "Idol Activity Series", "Wonderful Series", "Precure Series", "Sailor Moon Series" Domestic production: "Touhou Korr's" "Modern School", "Sirius War Series", "Bubble Mermaid", "Star Academy", "Elf Dream Ye Luoli", "Cute Wife Cooking God", "If History is a Group of Meows", "Please Eat Red Beans", "Dancing Goddess Series", "Mythical Beast King Kong Series" Amway Comics: "Bait", "Red Clover", "Love Eater", "Knights of the Good-for-Nothing Queen" United States: "Strawberry Shortcake", "My Little Pony" Russia: "Happy Ball Series"

Others are okay, but the author writes too much nonsense. We can accept whatever ideas you want to instill in us, but you don't want to write a lot at once.

Happy New Year╭(°A°`)╮

The idea is great, but the writing is really touching.

The plot of Giant... Just one sentence, do the people in it have no IQ? You said what you said, and you said "I can become a super giant". Why didn't you say that you could become Ultraman?

Please do not bring the dangerous item "brain" with you when reading this book. People who read this book said that their brains are like the humps of a camel in the desert.

Huh? Did the author previously have a book called "A Plan for the Development of a Top Scholar"?

Why can't the protagonist be forced to be merciful and merciless to complete the mission, when he can obviously kill those few people?