One Punch Is the Strongest on the Ground

I just read a few chapters and what you wrote at the beginning is really true. . . It sucks. It's embarrassing. It feels like I'm reading my own essay for an exam. . But I still read it and won't comment later. . . Not bad? At least I'm being kept. It's best to skip the first few chapters about the protagonist's time travel. It won't affect you if you just read the rest

To be honest, although King is indeed an ordinary person in the original work! But have you overlooked something? Where does the sound of the Imperial engine come from? Heart! A person whose heart is beating so powerfully (no matter how noisy the scene is in the original book, but those weirdos in the comic are still beating, the sound of the Imperial engine can still be clearly heard) can still maintain an expressionless face, the physical condition is quite terrifying.

To be honest, it was a failure to create so many god-level ones. The most powerful monster so far is still Boros. However, Boros is set to be dragon level or above, but it is acceptable to change Boros to god level. But although Orochi, the monster king, seems to be very powerful, it is obvious that he is far from the level of Boros. At best, he is slightly stronger than Tatsumaki. If the Monster King really had the power to destroy the Heroes Association, with the character he showed in the comics, he would never summon other monsters to deal with the Heroes Association, let alone use kidnapping to force the Heroes Association to attack the Monsters Association, but would directly come to kill the Heroes Association alone. Obviously, if the teacher were not there, Boros would have killed the Hero Association without any doubt, and he might not even need to take off his armor (Boros' armor-piercing ability surpassed the three monsters under him. Among the three monsters, the one with the strongest official data was killed by the teacher's punch. I forgot whether the one with multiple heads was second or third, and the competition included Many S-level players, including Fangs and Atomic Samurai, are possible, or even very likely, to destroy the Heroes Association. However, Orochi needs to recruit weirdos to force the opponent to attack his base camp, which shows that he is not confident in dealing with the Heroes Association. Therefore, it is acceptable to change Boros to the god level. After all, it is almost recognized that you can do it. However, there is a huge gap between the King of Monsters and the god level, which is only Long Dian's strength. And depending on your settings, I feel that if you want to make the King of Monsters even worse than Boros, that would be too much. In addition, the setting of Explosion being killed is quite interesting, as it can explain why Explosion never appears.

Where does the strength and speed come from? Once it disappears, the body will return to its original state. I don't understand.

The original book talks about Saitama doing a hundred push-ups, a hundred sit-ups, a hundred squats and a ten-kilometer long run every day. This is only one round. Please understand what the original book says. If you think one round is too easy, practice it yourself and see how many days you can persist.

Sweetheart Mask is an asshole! Someone like Akainu!

Judging from the King in the novel cutting an apple in front of the Atomic Samurai, the King in the novel is still much inferior to the King in the original work. In the novel, King can cut an apple into four pieces at a speed that Atomic Samurai cannot detect. However, in the original work, King is not only so fast that Atomic Samurai cannot detect it, but also makes Apple unable to react. It does not know that it has been cut and is still a complete apple. This magical skill is several levels higher than the former. It can be seen that the king in the novel still has a long way to go.

I haven't watched the original anime, so I just want to ask, are the TV stations and people in the anime so stupid and cheap? It feels like the whole world is full of trolls... It almost gave me a myocardial infarction.

When is the best time to rest your body? . It's been over 3 months.

After reading the introduction carefully, I found that it's not the author who doesn't know, but the protagonist who doesn't know the king's strength.

Not bad(*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

It's over, it's cold, but I'm still watching it well.

I was really confused when I saw the training. The teacher's training plan was originally a training method for ordinary people listed for fun. It was supposed to be only one round (of course, I am not the author, so I don't count). The purpose was to show his unreasonableness in terms of strength and methods of becoming stronger. No matter how Why shouldn't it be a multi-round cycle? The only price for him becoming stronger is baldness and indifference. This is a basic setting. Although it is not very important, it should not be changed. If you really want to show your efforts, it should be said that no matter how strong you are, you will be exhausted after every exercise, which reflects the specialness and irreplicability of Bald Guy...

Does the author want a eunuch|･ω･｀)

There is always a price to pay for becoming stronger! Look at Saitama-sensei! Bald!

The author is so unfriendly to undocumented knights and full of malice.

Although I haven't finished reading it, overall the quality of this book is better than most One Punch fan fiction. However, if possible, I hope the author can continue to optimize the details. Here are some of my suggestions. I hope the author can consider it after reading it. 1: Comparison between the protagonist and the teacher To be honest, I don't want to see a 55-5 relationship between the king and the teacher. The teacher will always be a teacher. He is more suitable to be regarded as a "symbol of peace" that only readers like us know, rather than being used as an indicator of combat power. 2: Combat power value The king can be very strong, and the emperor's engine, martial arts, eyes, etc. Can all be used to develop moves, but I hope that the strength of the king is still a human being, not a god. Compared with every second, I think the king will lose to the hard steel Boros, and then say to the teacher with tears: I'm sorry, I'm still too weak. This plot has more flavor. 3: Use words I hope there will never be any words such as "Open it for me!" "Die for me!" "Explode for me!" And other words that can directly knock me out of the immersive state at a glance. Just be normal. Carefully imagine the battle scene in your mind. You can also watch more excellent battle dramas. 4: Pretending to be cool To be honest, in Chapter 22, the king's attack using two fingers really made me nervous. Wouldn't it be better to hold it with his hands and kill with his eyes? The scene is explosive! 5: About weirdos In fact, the author can create something original. For example, the association publishes a mysterious task that requires kings to complete. Where the environment is harsh and there are hordes of monsters, there is no need to consume the weirdos in the original work, because those are all explosive and exciting points. Don't use them so early. You can learn from "Food Hunter" in this aspect. 6: I hope the author will write better and better, give you likes (≧ω≦)/

King is an ordinary person in the original work. The Liebo Wushuang wave cannon was made up by his brain, and the subtitles bragging about himself were also made up by his brain. The passage that he didn't understand included the words of the people around him. After reading it a few times, it was obvious that it was all a bluff. King himself was an ordinary person who had not exercised, and there was no sign that he had potential, and his physical fitness was very poor. The king in this book has not read the content behind it. I thought that the king in the original work really has so much strength, so he worked hard to become the strongest. Teacher Saitama's success is not irreproducible. In fact, Hungry Wolf's growth rate should be about the same as Saitama's, turning from an ordinary martial artist into a god-level monster within a few months. I don't think One wants to tell a story about Long Aotian. In the book, Saitama and the Black Light Hungry Wolf turned out to be ordinary people, but they all achieved good results after hard work. I think what one wants to say is faith and persistence. If someone has the same faith and persistence as Saitama, he can reach the same height as Saitama-sensei. However, there is only one such person in the original work, Saitama. Not to mention being undocumented, I have always felt that it is too deified, as if an undocumented person has the spirit to die. Which hero was not beaten to the ground? Snake also risked his life to protect the masses. Why doesn't Snake get a fair evaluation? Snake also worked hard and risked his life to save people. Why is Snake not praised?

However, this king does not feel as interesting as the original king. I look forward to the future development.

Oh oh! Found a good one-punch fanfic

The length of the original work is limited, and it would be difficult to write a long story no matter how long it is. Will there be time travel later?

You can only become stronger if you are bald lol

Author I want to see King fight Boros

Will the teacher take action later?

Do you believe me when I say I haven't read the One Punch comics? But as far as books are concerned, the roundness is pretty good. Let's see what you write next.

Why is Xiong Zai the peak dragon level? So stiff

Spoiler, Black Semen is the strongest monster besides Orochi, not counting PS Hungry Wolf

Breaking the same restrictions, why are King and Saitama so different?