Black Gold Technology

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. As an old reader who has been reading online articles for 14 years, my favorite thing to read is science fiction. If you still want to write this book and the previous one without being abandoned by readers, take a look at my suggestions. 1. If you are not good at it, try not to express your opinions excessively. 2. This book has a plot that connects the previous book. Don't write it in the early stage. Keep the foreshadowing as moderate as possible, and slowly make up for it in the middle and later stages. 3. After all, you started a new book early before the last book was finished. The most fatal thing is that this book spoils the fate of the previous book. What are you most afraid of when writing online articles? [1. There are no readers. 2. Loss of readers due to avoidable plot points. 3. You are too obsessed with your own novels, but you cannot see clearly the shortcomings of your novels. After all, there is a gap between the author's imagined world and the written world. If the writing is poor, it can be said that no matter how good the creativity is, it will not escape the criticism of readers. Those who are obsessed with the authorities are clear to the outside world. This is the situation you are in now. In the last book, you may have been thinking that the ending must be worthy of this book and the readers, but why do you need to spoil it in the new book? To put it bluntly, the food you cook looks like shit, and you want others to think it is beautiful? I think the author has been in a state of morbid self-excitement since the last book was written. In the book "Military Industry", you did not listen to the readers' advice and blindly believed that you were right, and everyone saw the result. Sticking to yourself is a good quality, but not listening to advice and insisting on going your own way is asking for trouble, because what you write is for readers in real time. You are not a traditional author. After you finish writing a book, you will publish it. Readers will follow your daily thoughts and read it, so you must clearly know that in every chapter outline you write, there are minefields that you cannot touch, and you still abuse the weak protagonist when it is almost finished! As soon as the new book comes out, you tell the readers directly that the ending of the previous book was disappointing. So what is the point of writing the previous book? It neither achieves the desired goal nor caters to readers reasonably, so what else do readers want to read? Do you think every reader should be like Qian Lao and Deng Lao? Then you also wrote the title of the book as "Super Military-Industrial Empire". Since the empire is definitely not perfect, it is almost there, but what is it about in your new book? Do you want readers to imagine a perfect ending and then bury it with your own hands? Having said so much, I think you should give an explanation to the readers who are still following you, an explanation with at least a perfect ending. You can write a new book, but the readers of the previous book need an explanation. I don't want to see the previous book coming to an end and being dragged down by the new book with such miserable results. Brothers and sisters who agree, please come to 11111

At first I thought it was technology flow, but there was indeed a bit of technology flow in the middle. But that's not the case at all. The main content is focused on how to blow other people's heads off and put out fires everywhere... Originally, I mainly wanted to see the technology flow, but now I am full of urban violence flow... Hmm. I'm not very good at describing this genre... Anyway, I just wanted to eat hot pot, and ended up stuffing myself with sushi... However, I wonder if this is the reason for the pounce? I'm a little bookworm, please don't complain.

Like you, I just commented on the article on military industry: In that popular and professional era, the head of the base (at least the division level) was banned from calling the wife of an ordinary military worker, not your wife, but your lover. The author is really narrow-minded.

I wrote "Idiot" at the beginning. I'm not my biological mother. Why did you agree to this and that condition? You asked me to ask for it. Is this really a crazy way to write?

There is no superior experience of military-industrial literature, rubbish pig's feet and fucking golden fingers, and novice-level pretentious mode. Is this really written by the same author? Wasn't it coded casually by his son?

This book is a

Is this a pretentious and slap-in-the-face text? Black technology is sold directly for money. Then I worked for someone else, and I had to write five chapters to explain a misunderstanding. (Note that there are no other plots in these five chapters, just how others misunderstood and resented. Repeat several times.)

Stupid. ,. There is a very famous Xueba novel, the protagonist is named Yang Rui, and at the beginning of this book, the girlfriend is also named Yang Rui,

Can anyone tell me why the super military-industrial empire banned subscriptions? Waiting online

Working for someone else again. It's another time to live under someone else's roof. Are you the protagonist? , You are just a supporting role. Same as the previous one.