I Am a Ninja in Naruto

Come on, improve your writing style

Feel sorry. I think I can still save it

Suitable for novices and old bookworms may not be able to stand it. After reading more than ten chapters, the punctuation and paragraphs are too messy, and I feel very tired. Moreover, there are too many interactions that are irrelevant to the main plot. It feels like I am reading a daily novel without any sense of the ninja world. To put it bluntly, it's too watery. It always writes about conversations between other people and has nothing to do with the main plot. The protagonist doesn't feel like an adult at all and behaves very childishly.

I just read the beginning, and I feel like I was in an online game novel from 10 years ago.

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After watching Naruto again, I felt that Danzo was indeed in the clear. When I get to Hokage, I will become a person like Danzo... I understand Danzo's approach very well (to give a few known examples): 1 Conspiracy to destroy the First Akatsuki organization. In ancient times, Zhou Yu drove a wedge between Cao Cao and Cai Mao, just like Danzo drove a wedge between Hanzo and Yahiko. Divorce tactics are one of the best ways to weaken hostile forces. I guess Danzo's original purpose is to help Hanzo weaken Akatsuki first, and then change his identity to help Akatsuki fight Hanzo without a leader. In the end, he can control Akatsuki and weaken the Kingdom of Rain. A great idea to kill two birds with one stone. It's a pity that who could have thought that Nagato would explode (it's not as good as God) 2 The Death of White Fang. First of all, it is not said in the manga and anime that Danzo controls public opinion, but it is understandable even if it is. If you say that your employee made a mistake at work that cost you 10 million, and you ask him the reason, the explanation he gives you is that another employee of yours had a car accident and he was busy sending people to the hospital and had no time to do his work. I'm sorry that you lost 10 million, but human life is priceless, and you should be able to understand. Even if he is your best employee and his work ability is much better than others, do you still want to fire him? If he was dismissed, did he have to explain the reasons to everyone (to avoid the seriousness, should he focus on the losses, just because he couldn't get a month's salary, so that no one would have any objections to his dismissal). Who would have thought that White Fang, who was so funny and so glass-hearted, committed suicide. It's really not as good as God's calculations. 3 Destroy Uchiha. There is nothing to say. If you are the Minister of Defense and find out that someone is about to rebel (this is a fact), then the top leader says not to worry and let's see if we can negotiate a solution. When you see that negotiations cannot resolve the matter, the top leader is still not in a hurry. Do you have to be worthy of your position, your country, and the people who need protection? At this time, you discover that the son of the rebel leader is patriotic, but you are afraid that it is a conspiracy. Just let them dog eat dog. It can not only solve the rebellion, but also reduce the losses. It is a clever plan to kill two birds with one stone! This time it was successful, man can conquer nature. Of course, you can't take too much of the enemy weapons captured at the end of the war... (The Sharingan is Uchiha's weapon and there's nothing wrong with it) 4 Public opinion hates Naruto. Another one that didn't explicitly say Danzo did it. But whether it was done by Danzo or the Third, I think it makes sense. It's like your child has a button in his hand and can blow up your house with one press. Do you want to take this button and put it where it is safest? Even if you put it with other friends (third generations), wouldn't you feel at ease? If it can't be taken away, should you teach him to love this home from a young age and not to destroy it (it's not unreasonable for Naruto to love Konoha so much). It is inevitable that there will be some minor conflicts between family members. In order to prevent him from pressing the button because of the smallest things, do you have to increase his tolerance when he can't press the button? (At the same time, in order to create a cold world, you treat yourself as a furnace that he can't live without, so that when he presses the button, you can tell you, and you can notify others to leave. From this point of view, this is more like what the third generation did, but the approach is also understandable) 5 Payne's inaction in the invasion. Your force has 12,000 people, and you control 2,000. Six people (the total number of enemy forces are unknown) are coming from the opposite side to challenge your 10,000 people. Do you want to keep these two thousand people to keep the secret in case there is a bigger conspiracy on the other side? Furthermore, if ten thousand people cannot defeat those six, then these two thousand people will die. If 10,000 people can defeat them, then it won't matter if these 2,000 people don't go. It's better to guard against the enemy's rear attack. If 10,000 people plus 2,000 people can defeat six enemies, then wait until 10,000 people fight 5 and then 2,000 people fight the last one (because you don't know the outcome, so it's best to take action based on the situation). If 12,000 men cannot defeat 6 enemies, there is nothing to say, just run away as soon as possible. If only 12,000 men can perish together with six of the enemy, not to mention 12,000 for six, even two thousand for six would be too much of a loss. It is better to retain the strength in order to make a comeback (An Changli said that countries with larger populations recover faster after war). So no matter how you look at it, it is more appropriate for Gen's people to take action based on the situation. 6 The five shadows talk to other gods. Nothing to say, two options. 1. If you give your money to your enemy and ask him to invest for you, you are not sure whether you will make a profit or lose. 2. Your enemies give you money to invest. When you lose money, all you lose is his, and you are fine (the other party can do the same). Even if you lose, you can buy his things at a low price when he has no money. In the end, you can make a small profit and make a steady profit. When you have a way to do method 2, will you not do it? Especially even if you fail, no one can blame you because of the special situation (you just jumped the gun, the referee is lucky if he doesn't see it, and if he does, he just starts over from the same starting line)...

This is another book about quitting on the first page. The author's writing reminds me of the narratives I wrote in junior high school. The dialogue is too stiff 😰 (I don't write narratives in high school)

Two words, rubbish, I really can't think of any comments. Don't tell me that the author had a hard time typing millions of words. I also had a hard time writing my elementary school diary. I will rewrite what should be rewritten. Are you telling the teacher about the hard work? ? ?

I want to say that I can't stand it after reading more than ten chapters. My dream is to date 100 women. Wouldn't it be better if you just said that your dream is to be a stallion? That's bullshit.

The Fourth Ninja War is over, and Naruto said, Teacher, let's play grabbing the bell again. The teacher said yes. Naruto yelled Six Paths, Senjutsu, Super Tailed Beast Jade, and Spiral Shuriken, Sasuke yelled Indra's Arrow, and Sakura yelled Hundred Heroes' Jutsu. Then, there was another name on the Konoha Heroes Monument

Sky! This kind of writing is still on the hot search. Can Qidian editors make money so quickly? ? ?

I'm so speechless. I feel like this book is really boring. I didn't want to read it after just a few chapters.

Is there anyone who quit after reading Chapter 10 like me? . .

I hope there will be a Naruto novel where the protagonist travels to the Shinigami world and is hailed as the strongest genius and future captain, and then travels back again during the first Wan (can't spell it out) solution and becomes a civilian ninja with an average amount of chakra and two attributes, and his two Zanpakutō (turned into two daggers after the Wan Qie) time travel to two girls from Hinata and Uchiha. One has yin-yang chakra and the other has five-series chakra. The amount of chakra is about the same as that of the Uzumaki clan. Then he was taken away by the girl

Let's laugh at the title of the book. In Naruto, you should not be a ninja but a firebender! As for the content, I will take a look at it and then share it with you.

I was put off by the comments before I started reading, and then I wanted to see what was written, so I looked at the table of contents... The naming of this chapter is really amazing, hahahahaha, 90% of it is "something", discussion of teammates, establishment of teammates, own ninjutsu, Ebisu's date... And so on, it suddenly made me laugh.

It's been over a thousand chapters and you don't even know who the heroine is?

Recommend a book: The Beginning of Konoha: Kill Uzumaki Naruto

It's completely understandable that he's a eunuch. After all, he doesn't make money. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I knew it was a hydrology. If you want to make money, don't be lazy. It's a bit silly to keep thinking about fooling readers. After all, people are not stupid.

I am invulnerable to all poisons. I want to try to see if it is as poisonous as you say.

The characters are too dense😭