Dragon Ball: Super Grandmaster

Alas... I can't find any good fanfics

I didn't want to read it until I saw it halfway. Why? Because I couldn't understand it anymore. They said that the combat power of Dragon Ball Super collapsed. But the author wrote that the combat power collapsed halfway through. Frieza had 150 million combat power, Cell had 2.2 Billion, Majin Buu had 12 billion. He had just transformed into over 1.2 Billion, over 2.5 Billion, over 3.12 Billion. It's still normal. When you go to the demon world in the next few chapters, it's awesome. Any demon king has a combat power of one trillion, and Dabura only has 2.5 Billion. The kings are also so different. When Majin Buu came out with 12 billion, the trillion king was scared to death. It was said to be a disaster in the universe and no one could defeat it. I believe this is too much of a self-contradiction. You don't need to watch the second half. It will give you a headache because of its combat power. If there is no character with a combat power of one trillion, you will be confused. Rubbish, really rubbish. I didn't say it was poorly written. Maybe the first half and the second half were not written by the same person. I can't watch it. . . . . . . I think people who can read the whole book are awesome. People who want to read it can just read the first half.

This book has many original characters created by the author, and every original character is basically extremely poisonous, the kind that can really make you sick to the point where you can't eat. For example, Mia, Amei, Aqing, Anan, Aying, and Zajiang Wan. Only see the mid-term. Mia was abandoned by the author and was not written. Amei was someone else's wife, Aqing was married to him, Aman, the niece, was the goddess of his clone Zajiangmaru, Aying was a niece... No. 17 And 18 were written out, Bulma and Tais were thrown into the universe, and Vegeta married someone else. Every original plot about a woman is disgusting and poorly written. Looking at fan fiction, he prefers to write a lot of original works, and he also contradicts himself. He himself wrote that "Frieza is afraid of being thrown into the sun by the protagonist", but later, the protagonist's clone Zachanomaru only has 9 million combat power, but he can actually practice in 30,000-degree water, let alone whether there is such "water" , not to mention whether the Tianjin Fan family has this kind of talent, Frieza's 120 million fighting power is afraid of falling into the sun, his clone, in short... After the protagonist's original national martial arts training was brought to Dragon Ball, Jane It's so... Those original women are just so... I don't want to marry Bulma or her sister, and I have to delay Vegeta's marriage, it's so... I thought I could keep watching, or at worst I would skip it when I saw original characters. I didn't expect that more and more of these characters will be described later. It's really disgusting. It's not the plot that is disgusting, but his character descriptions and settings, which make people feel psychologically and physically uncomfortable. In short, it's simply...

It's always like this, and the supporting actor feels that the protagonist is weak. The protagonist has to stand there and get beaten up every time, and then kill the enemy in an instant. The supporting actor breaks out in a cold sweat and shouts that it's impossible. . . . Annoying or not, awkward. In the original version of Dragon Ball, the only way to fight is to lower your combat power, instead of standing still and letting others abuse you first. You want to write about Leng Ao who plays the role of Piccolo and others, but I only see that they are SB.

Being able to write Dragon Ball fans so viciously is actually an ability in itself. . . It poisoned me to death!

A book that is not suitable for normal human beings to read. Maybe the author is just such a person!

The later stage was really messed up. He and Klin were one body and two souls, shared by his wife. When I watched it, I felt like the protagonist was turning green. . . I'm really speechless.

The character of Kame Sennin is completely ruined in the book. He often calls others ants in front of Goku Krillin, and he also looks down on others in front of the protagonist. "Learning martial arts is not about winning fights, nor is it about getting praise from girls. It is about learning martial arts to keep your body and mind healthy, and to live a more fulfilling and meaningful life." "Active well, study well, play well, eat well, and rest well. This is the training of Kamesen-ryu." Will the martial arts master Kame Sennin who can say such words and teach a group of Z warriors who protect the earth look like in the article? Are you sure you are writing about Turtle Immortal and not Crane Immortal?

It feels like the structure of the novel completely changed after the protagonist learned the art of cloning.

The book is good, but not suitable for people to read