Dragon Ball Super Grandmaster

The character of Kame Sennin is completely ruined in the book. He often calls others ants in front of Goku Krillin, and he also looks down on others in front of the protagonist. "Learning martial arts is not about winning fights, nor is it about getting praise from girls. It is about learning martial arts to keep your body and mind healthy, and to live a more fulfilling and meaningful life." "Active well, study well, play well, eat well, and rest well. This is the training of Kamesen-ryu." Will the martial arts master Kame Sennin who can say such words and teach a group of Z warriors who protect the earth look like in the article? Are you sure you are writing about Turtle Immortal and not Crane Immortal?

Very watery, very watery, very watery, the sea, it's all water! !

Alas... I can't find any good fanfics

I didn't want to read it until I saw it halfway. Why? Because I couldn't understand it anymore. They said that the combat power of Dragon Ball Super collapsed. But the author wrote that the combat power collapsed halfway through. Frieza had 150 million combat power, Cell had 2.2 Billion, Majin Buu had 12 billion. He had just transformed into over 1.2 Billion, over 2.5 Billion, over 3.12 Billion. It's still normal. When you go to the demon world in the next few chapters, it's awesome. Any demon king has a combat power of one trillion, and Dabura only has 2.5 Billion. The kings are also so different. When Majin Buu came out with 12 billion, the trillion king was scared to death. It was said to be a disaster in the universe and no one could defeat it. I believe this is too much of a self-contradiction. You don't need to watch the second half. It will give you a headache because of its combat power. If there is no character with a combat power of one trillion, you will be confused. Rubbish, really rubbish. I didn't say it was poorly written. Maybe the first half and the second half were not written by the same person. I can't watch it. . . . . . . I think people who can read the whole book are awesome. People who want to read it can just read the first half.

This book has many original characters created by the author, and every original character is basically extremely poisonous, the kind that can really make you sick to the point where you can't eat. For example, Mia, Amei, Aqing, Anan, Aying, and Zajiang Wan. Only see the mid-term. Mia was abandoned by the author and was not written. Amei was someone else's wife, Aqing was married to him, Aman, the niece, was the goddess of his clone Zajiangmaru, Aying was a niece... No. 17 And 18 were written out, Bulma and Tais were thrown into the universe, and Vegeta married someone else. Every original plot about a woman is disgusting and poorly written. Looking at fan fiction, he prefers to write a lot of original works, and he also contradicts himself. He himself wrote that "Frieza is afraid of being thrown into the sun by the protagonist", but later, the protagonist's clone Zachanomaru only has 9 million combat power, but he can actually practice in 30,000-degree water, let alone whether there is such "water" , not to mention whether the Tianjin Fan family has this kind of talent, Frieza's 120 million fighting power is afraid of falling into the sun, his clone, in short... After the protagonist's original national martial arts training was brought to Dragon Ball, Jane It's so... Those original women are just so... I don't want to marry Bulma or her sister, and I have to delay Vegeta's marriage, it's so... I thought I could keep watching, or at worst I would skip it when I saw original characters. I didn't expect that more and more of these characters will be described later. It's really disgusting. It's not the plot that is disgusting, but his character descriptions and settings, which make people feel psychologically and physically uncomfortable. In short, it's simply...

It's always like this, and the supporting actor feels that the protagonist is weak. The protagonist has to stand there and get beaten up every time, and then kill the enemy in an instant. The supporting actor breaks out in a cold sweat and shouts that it's impossible. . . . Annoying or not, awkward. In the original version of Dragon Ball, the only way to fight is to lower your combat power, instead of standing still and letting others abuse you first. You want to write about Leng Ao who plays the role of Piccolo and others, but I only see that they are SB.

A book that is not suitable for normal human beings to read. Maybe the author is just such a person!

Being able to write Dragon Ball fans so viciously is actually an ability in itself. . . It poisoned me to death!

The later stage was really messed up. He and Klin were one body and two souls, shared by his wife. When I watched it, I felt like the protagonist was turning green. . . I'm really speechless.

It feels like the structure of the novel completely changed after the protagonist learned the art of cloning.

Just by looking at the introduction, you can tell that the protagonist is a loser. Klin doesn't even have one percent of his talent, so he still wants to dance? Just sit back and dream. There is everything in the dream

The book is good, but not suitable for people to read

In Toxic, the protagonist begins his path to becoming a star when he arrives in the Dragon Ball world. He starts with two songs: Father, Mother, and Becomes the King and becomes the national singer. Then he starts the plot as a martial arts practitioner. Whenever passers-by meet him, he will shout "big star" or "god of singer". This is a sense of disobedience everywhere in Dragon Ball, which is mainly about martial arts and fighting. What happened later was even more amazing. The protagonist's sister was captured by the red ribbon. The protagonist tried to save her but was unable to save her. Then the sister was taken to another place. The protagonist went back to the enemy's base after a rough fight and did not continue to track her. During this period, she still had time to go to her grandfather's house to play in a leisurely way and cheat.

It was okay at first, but I couldn't stand the original female character at first. The main character was a dog licker, and he also licked a woman with a child for several years. This is really poisonous.

Real intelligence attack vs someone who thinks he is a time traveler

I'm really drunk, Sun Wuben, you might as well call me Tiedan

So, what should I say? The protagonist's friends never believe him and look down on him. What about the enemies? Every time I come over to fight, my fighting power is probably hundreds of times lower than him, so the protagonist insists on sticking his face up and hitting me, which makes the protagonist very happy. This sounds like it's too damn cheap. I'm born to be a bitch, right?

The more I watched, the more frustrated I became. It was good at the beginning, but later on the protagonist completely turned into a virgin. She wants to take care of everything and ask questions. Others don't appreciate it, but you still try to get involved. The protagonist has completely lost your temper. Others have told you to get lost, so why are you trying to get involved? The most annoying thing is that others are trying to criticize you, but they don't save you any face. You still smile playfully and don't take it seriously. What kind of monster is this kind of person? The protagonist in this book is someone who wants to antagonize everyone, and the people who antagonize the most powerful ones are all positive characters in the original work. Well, they all seem to be antagonizing the protagonist, and the protagonist helps them without any regrets. The author is very extreme in writing, and knows how to suppress the protagonist, but you seem to suppress it every day, and just suppress someone for a while, even if you pretend to be a pig, but you still don't eat a tiger, which looks aggrieved.

When I saw Vegeta's betrayal, the protagonist said that he admired his son and wanted to let him go. I couldn't stand it anymore. It was really poisonous. I had survived the previous poisons, but here the poison has spread.

How can a person lick to such an extent and still make excuses in his heart to lick the dog?

How do I report or block this book? I have been reading novels for several years and have read all kinds of novels, but this is the only novel I can't stand. I didn't even finish Chapter 6 before I couldn't stand it anymore.

Dragon Ball is all about aerial combat. Honkai Sanfuhua's Cunxin Fist is more suitable. Others are nonsense when used in Dragon Ball. Most martial arts in our country rely on the power of the earth, so they are more suitable for land combat.

I have to comment, this is it 💩

I'm really curious about the author's brain circuit. Is he pretending to be poisonous?

Was the author still underage when he wrote this book?

If you don't practice immortality, you won't be able to write. All kinds of embarrassment, wisdom, poison, too lazy to say.

What kind of sterile thing was written? It's original, but it turned out to be so disgusting.

I can't stand it anymore. . . There is basically no fighting, and the plot is extremely toxic. . . Forget about Dihua, the protagonist's liberties are not counted, and there are many places where the combat power plot does not match, and the data is not correct. . . Although I agree with the originality, it's really not poisonous. It makes readers uncomfortable, but it's okay. Even pretending is better than being slapped in the face, although it is a bit boring. But you didn't pretend to be in this competition, and you didn't fight in the face. What does it mean to be neither up nor down? ? ? ? Obviously in emergencies in many places, others need a centering pin. All they need to do is say how much their combat power has reached. They have to talk about it after that. Then Baba talks about his previous experience without saying what level he has reached. Bloody Mother Poison. . . . The framework is quite good, but I have to give up the writing for you.

The name has dissuaded me twice. This name really ruins the reading experience

I read it again, and I generally like this novel. It is a pure martial arts novel, without any system or other messy things, but the heroine doesn't like it very much. She had affairs with so many women in the early stage, but in the end, there was only one who really had a relationship, and she still had the lowest force value. Wouldn't it be nice to marry everyone home like in "Happy Martial Arts"? Later, when he shared a body with Klin, wasn't this cuckolding himself? I still feel that Mia is stronger than Gao Yaqing in terms of combat power and bloodline in the early stage, and the empress is stronger than Bulma in the later stage. Bulma has an ex-boyfriend Yamcha not counting other time and space. Plus Krillin who coexists with the protagonist, I feel that the protagonist has become one of Bulma's harem.