The Supreme Tycoon of the City

"If you're a system harmful to Earth, I'll definitely take you down with me." I almost died laughing in the bathroom when I saw that line! 😅

The first few chapters made my head spin and I didn't understand them... This is supposed to be filler, and I still didn't get it. You believe me?

I don't know when it started, but the protagonists of urban novels now exude a strong sense of being a loser.

That's how it's going to be written, just pure fantasy, so what? What do you expect from a novel? It's fake, you know? If you don't like it, just leave.

I couldn't even finish the first three chapters before I couldn't stand it anymore. Seriously, they'd rather be punished than complete the task? What normal person would do something like that? The author's thought process is incredible! I'm not going to try reading the rest.

This book is poisonous; it's deadly. I almost died from the poison after only reading 20 chapters.

Chapter 30 is enough to make you want to quit. I could tolerate the live stream part before, but what era are we living in? Why are they still writing about fighting and killing? How big is their heart?

I couldn't even get past two chapters, it's so rubbish.

Terrible! This system novel is written like prose—stiff and awkward! The sentences are too stiff and difficult to read, riddled with typos and grammatical errors. Strictly speaking, many sentences are grammatically incorrect! It feels like a third-person, rambling account of events. The first chapter failed to engage the reader, and needless to say, it ended poorly! Has the bar for writing novels really been lowered this far? Anyone can write books these days.

Putting aside the logical problems, the most crucial issue is the sheer number of typos, which is utterly baffling. Are all sorts of random people allowed to write novels these days?