Across the Heavens, I Rise Against the Odds and Become an Emperor

There are too many typos, and they don't correct them even after I pointed them out. Some of the plot points are just plain stupid, and the main character is nowhere to be found!

I've always had a question about multi-part novels: who should be the main character? You can't just write about one thing one minute and another the next, right? That would be similar to an ensemble piece, and most authors don't have the writing skills for that. Besides, since the story is multi-part, it will inevitably merge and unify later on. So, who should be the main character?

In the world of "Covering the Sky," even an avatar can join a sect and practice cultivation techniques on Earth. There are many sects on Earth, such as the Lingbao Sect and Longhu Mountain, which are actually legitimate sects where one can learn. It's just that the sect leader's level is low, only at the Dragon Transformation stage, so there's no need to learn Huashan techniques. Once you have money and power, it's quite easy to gain access to them.

The beginning was alright, but the later part was riddled with typos and grammatical errors. All I could say was that it was creative; otherwise, it was... Well, let's just say it wasn't great.

The beginning was alright, but the rest was just single-player mode. What about the story? What about Ning Zhongze? What about the White Snake?

The author's use of various surnames is a bit convoluted; it would be better to just use the world name plus "Buqun" or simply have different names. Otherwise, it's hard to read.

After reaching level four, why would you need so many resources? Especially after reaching the Sendai realm. Reaching level four in the Secret Realm Dao means beginning to comprehend the Dao, sensing the external world's great Dao and seeking inner self-realization. The first few Secret Realms are for building a foundation and require resources; otherwise, what kind of Secret Realm Dao could be created in the wilderness?

Dude, don't give me the impression that I'm watching a pirated copy. Please pay more attention to typos.

This kind of subject matter is best suited to focusing solely on personal cultivation and the original storylines of each world. Modernizing a backward era is a massive undertaking, requiring attention to countless details. Currently, it presents many problems and doesn't fit the genre. The more detailed the modern farming elements are in this genre, the further it strays from the main theme.

I hope it won't be abandoned.