Bull Head Memoirs

After reading Chapter 142, I couldn't stand it anymore and gave it up The description at the beginning of the story was quite good. Niu Niu and the time traveler met and mistakenly thought the time traveler was a devil, which led to the follow-up path of dual cultivation of shaman and warrior. Watching the protagonist continue to become stronger, the interaction with his family and villagers during the period was also very pyrotechnics. The battle with strength beyond the same age gave him the pleasure of showing off. Overall, it can be said to be very good But when I saw the plot after the time traveler retreated and woke up, I started to feel uncomfortable. The relationship between Niu Niu and the time traveler changed. It was understandable to be suspicious and distrustful of each other in the early stage of the plot, but it was very uncomfortable to still distrust after experiencing various events. "The time traveler kindly helped Niu Niu, but Niu Niu suspected that the time traveler was doing evil. , But after discovering that he had indeed helped him, Niu Niu neither felt guilty nor reflected, and would do the same next time, and the time traveler would not be angry or angry, and would continue to help him next time." In other words, the development of the relationship between the two people was strangely stagnant Another uncomfortable point is fighting. Niu Niu has experienced many life and death battles, but he hesitates every time he encounters an unexpected situation. I was dumbfounded and could only wait for the time traveler to save me. After learning more skills, it was obvious that the author's description of the battle became increasingly weak, and the newly learned skills seemed to have not been learned When I saw the second time traveler appeared, and it was a cultivation time traveler who also taught the skills to the protagonist, my feeling of discomfort reached its peak. After reading a few chapters, there was no relief, so I had to give up.

This book has been on the bookshelf for at least a year, and I just discovered it now. In fact, I am a bit confused. It has 2.2 Million words and more than 5,000 votes. Is it because I was isolated by Qidian Niang or because of the lack of writing skills? I clicked on the book and found that I had read a hundred chapters before I knew it. After tasting it, I also understood why the results were unsatisfactory. It's not that this book has shortcomings in writing and plot, but it's a problem with the audience. In layman's terms, it's too unpopular. Take Fighting to Break the Sky as an example. The grandfather is an indigenous person and the protagonist is a time traveler. The grandfather of this book is actually a time traveler, while the protagonist is an aboriginal. The difference in identity between the two is not just a slight difference, it is equivalent to the author opening up a new uninhabited stream, which can be said to be an alternative classic. But a sudden reversal of identities and changes in ideas are extremely unfriendly to some people. With the addition of the first-person perspective, impetuous people will start to point out the world and trigger the original inertial thinking, which will lead to terrible consequences. The loss of most of the drug testers will prevent a large number of subsequent readers from seeing this book, and pollute the comments, giving this book a brand. This is not to belittle this book, but an objective analysis of this book. However, if the author wrote this book for a dream in his heart, then I can say that the author is a person who is persistent in his dream, or is responsible for a small number of readers, both of which are worthy of praise. Any book is the hard work of an author. Actually, there is another whisper. It is better to end it earlier and lay the foundation for the next book. Although it is well written emmm, I am still reading it, quack😰😰😍😍

This book has really poor results. . . But it's very strange that it's clearly written so well. . . The author is working hard to build his own Western fantasy world to depict the rise of one of the most ordinary tauren. However, it is difficult for an ordinary tauren to rise, so he added the original male protagonist who failed to seize the body...? So stubbornness and detachment, simplicity and cunning, fall in love and kill each other under the unequal strength and wisdom. Many times the tauren's stubbornness makes people anxious, but if you think about it carefully, isn't this what a real tauren should be like? I feel that the conflict between the two people and the deviation of the plot are largely due to the author's dissatisfaction with the current routine. . But in order to continue the plot, it had to go full circle and rely on the stubborn party to give in to return to a similar situation. . . Have no choice. . . In the end, the two male protagonists (?) Fell in love after killing each other... Anyway, now the two of them influence each other and penetrate each other. One wants to simply protect, the other wants to do whatever he wants, and now it has become. . Simply do whatever you want. . Anyway, it looks good, NB Then I hope the author will do a lot of publicity, that is, go to a certain degree, a certain C, a certain WeChat, or something similar. There are articles recommending novels on them, and you can help me recommend them. There is also a website that recommends novels, and you can also help me. In short, it is a good novel, but too few people know about it. The pearl is covered in dust. I hope the author will get better and better.

Halfway through the pursuit of the book, I can say that the delicate and rigorous world setting and character characterization are very rare in online novels. From the beginning, the world is shown bit by bit, and the truth of everything is slowly discovered like solving a puzzle. This way of telling can be seen that the author wants to create a literary work, rather than just write an entertainment work. The story is indeed a good story, but now that I have seen it, I have some thoughts on the reasons for the unsatisfactory performance of this book: First of all, the first-person description itself is not a poisonous point, but the lack of growth experience and character portrayal of the protagonist has led to readers having a more negative perception of the protagonist - a stupid, stubborn, impulsive and narrow-minded pig teammate who does not understand good and bad, and is bound to lose his chain when something goes wrong. This is how I felt about Bihong when I was halfway through reading. Of course, in fact, if we start from the story itself, this state is actually what a newly adult tauren from another world should look like. However, just like the same meaning can be said in different ways, the results may be completely different. Although the setting is that Bihong gradually grows from this character and gradually matures, the description of Bihong's growth experience and character formation in the book does not give readers a sense of identity. Especially the several major turning points in the protagonist's thoughts (1. Falling in love with Taiya, 2. Meeting Taoist Priest Feiyun, 3. Meeting Zhao Ritian for the first time) are a bit pale and weak. 1. Regarding Taiya, a young calf who has just grown up and has just begun to fall in love falls in love with the most beautiful priest at first sight. Falling in love at first sight is indeed an unreasonable thing, but if all the descriptions are just Bihong thinking about how he likes the priestess, it is like Talking to oneself generally does not resonate with people. Although the author himself said that he is not good at emotional dramas, the more intuitive feeling after reading the whole story is that the relationship between Bihong and the priestess is more like a love because of the setting, and there is a feeling of lack of flesh and blood. 2. Taoist Feiyun, this plot is actually an important point where the relationship between the protagonists begins to ease. There is nothing wrong with this plot itself. However, as the plot unfolds, the crisis of trust between Bihong and Leo breaks out again and again, creating a sense of dissonance - also facing the time traveler, does it seem too easy for the old werewolf to gain Bihong's trust and influence him? Leo, who has helped him and rescued him countless times for many years, cannot even gain his trust more than an old werewolf whom he has only met once. Even if it is reasonable from the plot, it will inevitably give people the feeling that the protagonist is an unfamiliar white-eyed wolf. 3. Regarding Zhao Ritian, if it is easy to trust Taoist Feiyun, then Zhao Ritian is at the other extreme - hostility comes unexpectedly. From the first time I heard about Zhao Ritian until the two met, the points that created hostility towards Zhao Ritian were probably the following two points: the voodoo doll that cursed the little girl, and Leo's threat theory. It seems that it is a bit too thin, even until the two people officially break up and kill each other (currently watching this), to be honest, I sided with Zhao Ritian when these two people fought. The protagonist is really too unlikable. I have said so much above, but in summary, as a first-person perspective, the author's description of the protagonist's inner activities and thought changes is a bit too pale. The most intuitive result is that it is almost impossible to stand as a minor. From the perspective of the tauren whose body was taken away by an alien creature, we can understand all the actions of the protagonist, but this kind of understanding can only be obtained from the perspective of God when separated from the story. It cannot be obtained from the main perspective of the story (the perception from the main perspective is that he is a 🐮 version of a naughty kid). Of course, I don't mean that the setting of the protagonist is not good. Using Jin Yong's The Legend of the Condor Heroes as an analogy, looking beyond the story itself, the protagonist Yang Guo is actually a very paranoid, egoistic and emotional person. It can even be said that the three views are not very "positive", while Guo Fu is actually more of a spoiled child and cannot be called a naughty child. However, what readers feel and can identify with in the story is that Yang Guo's bad behavior is understandable, while Guo Fu's willfulness is annoying. As for the plot so far, it feels like The Legend of the Condor Heroes has turned Guo Fu into the protagonist and Yang Guo into a supporting role. Even if the story is still the same, the perception is completely different. Whether the characters have flesh and blood and are recognized and liked by people, the character design is only one aspect, and more depends on how the person who writes the story tells it. The last thing I want to say is that writing a story cannot blindly cater to readers, but since it is written for everyone to see, it is also necessary to consider how to make readers identify with it and make the story more attractive. I hope the author can write better and better.

The first person is acceptable, and the subject matter is novel. After reading Chapter 200, it was really hard for me to give up. Niu Tou is still stubborn, but after accepting Leo's various benefits, he really can't stand the hatred that remains unchanged. If you really want to write Niu Tou as someone who will never change and be stubborn from the beginning to the end, then leave Leo alone. If you want to hate him, just stick to it and not accept any help. This way of accepting benefits while scorning it is really disgusting. After describing a lot, I still come back to the old grandfather. After reading chapter 30, I thought the relationship was about to ease. After reading chapter 100, I felt that the relationship between the two would change. After reading chapter 170, Niutou was still accepting Leo's benefits and there was still no big change. After reading chapter 200, I felt that it was just a dog. I fed it meat every day and it would not be as double-standard as Niutou. Why do you still hate him after accepting Leo's gift? Whether you accept it or not is up to you. If you find a reason to accept it, you still hate Leo. The more stubbornness and determination to set the goal that will not change are described later, the more hypocrisy and old double standard dog 🙏

I think it's really good. I haven't read such a great book in a long time. However, I guess the author's performance in this book may not be very good. There are basically no comments in the paid chapters. I don't know if the author can stick to it. I haven't had such an experience reading a novel without sleep and food for a long time. Bi Hong's kindness and true heart, the loneliness and ambition hidden under Leo's poisonous tongue, Taiya's gentleness and intellectuality, and Yilu's independent and enterprising image. . . Under every word, I seem to see the author in front of the computer conversing with every soul in the book. The plot of Brad getting up at night reoccurred, and it was very interesting for me to read it. Although each chapter only has one or two sentences, combined with Leo's complaints and Bihong's finishing blows, it felt very vivid. It made people feel that the purpose of supporting characters is not to add to the plot, but to really have their own life. There are also chapters where Bihong, Taiya and four other friends meet for a trip. Whether it is the banter and laughter in the restaurant, getting close to nature in the hills and farms, or the sincere birthday wishes for Taiya under the starry sky, I can feel the warmth of friendship lingering between the four people. There are also descriptions of the family and villagers in Vail Village, the tenderness of the family staying together during the Easter Festival, the bickering between the two old guys, the grandfather and the grandfather, the sadness in the calf's head when his sister got married, and the concern when leaving home. . . It entrusts the Chinese people with their beautiful ideals of family. Of course, it is difficult to have such a family in reality, but who can say that in the ordinary life and disputes of food, rice, oil and salt, there are not a few moments where the heartstrings are touched by family love similar to that in the book? I read from the book that the author said that he is already 30. 30 Is a very embarrassing age. Calling him uncle seems a bit too old, but he can no longer say that he is still a young man. I wonder if the author is anxious about his life? Does the Leo in the book reflect the author himself? "The earth does have enough food and clothing, but people can't see hope." Is this Leo's complaint? Or is it the author's melancholy? Judging from the results of the book alone, it is difficult to say that the author is successful. Maybe the author is really so unhappy and unwilling to accept it? But I feel that the author still has the heart of a teenager. There are long words at the end of each chapter, either talking about books, movies, or news topics. Young people get old easily, and blood is hard to cool down. The author seems to still retain sensitivity and enthusiasm, rationality and reflection. This trait of the author is reflected in the exchange between Leo and Bihong. It is sometimes shown, or in other words, in the dialogue between the Minotaur from another world and the otaku from the Earth, we will unconsciously take part in it, follow the author's thinking, sometimes look at the other world from the eyes of the Earthlings, and sometimes look back at the Earth from the perspective of the Minotaur, and think in the comparison. This arrangement is really great. Finally, I want to talk about a character, Zhao Ritian. In fact, this character and the related plot are really inexperienced, but the story is really wonderful. If you are the only protagonist of the time-travel flow, then you will feel that the whole world is yours. When the second time-traveler appears, you will be nervous, defensive, and even shaken like Leo in the article. In short, it will not be "satisfactory", but it also elevates the reader's perspective and changes the reader from routine reading. I feel that I am more interested in the future direction of the story, and I have to say that I really can't stand the strong nouveau riche atmosphere of the protagonists in many so-called great books. They are always greedy and cruel, and they are obsessed with pursuing wealth, power, power, and beauty. They are like rude guests who break into the door of the host's house and robbed everything that originally belonged to the host's house under the banner of justice. I think it is lucky that these are all fictional, otherwise people in other worlds would be too miserable. . .

Too much poison! ! ! The writing is good and the author works hard, but it is too poisonous. I can see that the author wanted to write a book about the collision of two world views, but when Goldfinger came on, Young Master and Young Master were very dramatic. The characterization is also very poisonous (in reality it should be more moderate, this book is too extreme.) Plus the unreasonable entanglement between the male protagonists (Leo's kindness should have been a brother long ago because of the simplicity of the minotaur, and he still regards him as an enemy. If the minotaur is so stubborn, don't learn the devil's knowledge, don't borrow the devil's wisdom, don't rest on the devil's boxing skills, it's outrageous). Stubborn resistance and acceptance without distinction mean that he may not be able to tell what the tauren wants to do now. Forcibly creating opposition like this is very poisonous. (If Leo comes up with a lot of shouts of master and young master, it will be over if he doesn't talk about seizing the body). In addition, the first person is not easy to write in the first place, and the author is really sloppy in some parts, which is indeed a bit discouraging. But the author will change, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง.

As someone who has been following the book for a long time (I don't know if I'm the only one based on the fan base), I feel like I should say something before you finish the book. Just like the author, I remember you said in a chapter review that as long as there are still people who subscribe, I will not give up. I happen to be a person who will continue to subscribe as long as the author does not give up. So it has been like this for the past few years. I think the author's spirit is the most worthy of my subscription. Let's discuss the content, I'll talk about whatever comes to mind. First of all, no matter what the author writes, I will respect it, because it represents the author's complete thoughts from beginning to end. I actually don't like authors who revise their outlines just because the book reviews are not good. I think what is written like that must be fragmented. I see that many people in the early book review posts disapprove of the first person. My personal feeling is that it doesn't matter. I think it's natural for the first person narrative to have more personal and emotional perspectives, and I personally think it's well written. However, most readers may find it a bit awkward. This is probably the main reason why you complained about the lack of subscriptions. I think your advantages, Laota, are very obvious, your idea is very novel, and the logic of the article is also very good. You will remember all the pitfalls that need to be filled in. It can be seen that the overall plan of the article is very detailed. Although the plot does not advance very quickly because of this, it may have lost a lot of readers who like to read cool articles or quick stories about protagonists. I felt that there were no surprises when I watched Go to the Dragon Clan until you came up with the time-travel drama. I am not afraid of surprising you. To be honest, I almost canceled the subscription because I felt that the plot was falling apart. I originally thought there would be a wonderful battle. Later, you said that the outline was planned long ago. I think maybe my original idea was wrong. You originally planned to write a time travel story instead of slowly developing the process of developing the protagonist. I was even more confused when I was bombed into the future. I felt that the connection was a little too forced. I thought it was the godhead of the God of Time who was sent to the future. It seemed easier to accept. P. S. I actually found that I quite like the character design of Niucha. After following it for so long, I feel that although the plot is a bit out of context, as a "memoir" it is completely qualified. It has the feeling of someone who has traveled the world and had some adventures. I really hope that this "memoir" can finally hit the wonderful points. I really don't know what the ending is yet. I don't know if posting this now will have an impact on you. I hope you won't be affected by the review and finish it according to your ideas. I will support you until the completion of the book.

The author is really awesome, come on!

A person who basically doesn't need to use his brain... No, it's a minotaur. How smart do you think he is? If we follow the ordinary Tauren life path, this fool might have grown a little during the Centaur invasion, and then he might have tried his best to improve his strength for revenge, or he might have been devastated. The former might have become a Minotaur that went further than his father, and there is no need to say more about the latter. Therefore, his attitude towards Li Mou was largely related to Li's seizure of the body after time travel. This incident confirmed Xiao Niutou's position towards Li Mou as an enemy. Therefore, the simple-minded Tauren needs room to grow before he can understand whether everything Li did for him later was correct or whether Li was really his enemy. To put it simply, Li kept giving advice or planning for the future. The Tauren might resist, but many of them were chosen based on Li's words. The tauren doesn't know this. He only knows that you wanted to kill me before. You are an enemy and I can't completely trust you. I want to have enough strength to get rid of you. . . . . . . . The book is very good, but the pace is too slow as I continue reading. (The above is my personal opinion, please bear with me if I find something wrong. If you are not in the mood to scold others for excitement, please don't come to me. Thank you 🙏)

Summary of Chapter 363: In fact, there is a lot of well-written content in the front, but I feel that it is too exaggerated and boring. But I was actually unhappy after reading this chapter, so I sighed. In this section, Niutou's performance towards Zhao Ritian, without mentioning the details, still adheres to his concept of earthlings, that is, of time travellers. Travelers = invaders = should be killed or kicked back to the original world. Before reconciling with Leo, this was quite right. But after accepting Leo's benefits for a long time, using Leo as a tool, he met and pursued the people he liked, and established a long-term friendship. He actually wanted to rush forward and kill the other person without consulting him. It could be said that he was throwing friendship to the ground regardless of the feelings of Leo, who was also a time traveler. Moreover, it is described that he becomes more determined to kill time-travelers after getting the treasure, but his attitude towards Leo is not firm, and he also shows his obedience to the bull head, which is also very dissatisfying.

In fact, I feel that if I had succeeded in winning directly from the beginning, my results would have been much better!

The first person is acceptable, and the subject matter is novel. After reading Chapter 200, it was really hard for me to give up. Niu Tou is still stubborn, but after accepting Leo's various benefits, he really can't stand the hatred that remains unchanged. If you really want to write Niu Tou as someone who will never change and be stubborn from the beginning to the end, then leave Leo alone. If you want to hate him, just stick to it and not accept any help. This way of accepting benefits while scorning it is really disgusting. After describing a lot, I still come back to the old grandfather. After reading chapter 30, I thought the relationship was about to ease. After reading chapter 100, I felt that the relationship between the two would change. After reading chapter 170, Niutou was still accepting Leo's benefits and there was still no big change. After reading chapter 200, I felt that it was just a dog. I fed it meat every day and it would not be as double-standard as Niutou. Why do you still want to hate him after accepting Leo's gift? Whether you accept it or not is up to you. If you find a reason to accept it, you still hate Leo. The more stubbornness and determination of goals are described later, the more people feel that Niu Tou is hypocritical, and he is an old double-standard dog.

Bihong and Tyrannosaurus rex, hand-drawn by the author

I finally understand the uncomfortable point above, There is an iron law that every enemy must be punished and every kindness must be repaid, even if it is a pure villain novel, it will never violate it. Not to mention that Mavericks does not remember Leo at all for saving the whole family, and Leo's attitude still looks like licking after being treated like this.

It is a very good book. It is plain and gives me a lot of expectations. The author's writing skills have been improving. I have been reading books for ten years, and I have read all pirated and genuine versions. The world created by the author is my favorite. It is the first time in so many years to comment on a book because I like it. It is very novel. I am also an old player of World of Warcraft, so I am looking forward to this kind of world. There are also shortcomings. The first person is a flaw. Although the sense of substitution is very good, the emotional transition is too stiff. I feel that the author wants to write more naturally, but on the contrary It feels very delayed, etc., But the big problem is that the evolution of the relationship between the two protagonists is a bit misaligned. Many words cannot be said to a certain extent, otherwise it will give people a feeling of ungratefulness. I read this book very carefully. The reason for the feeling of ungratefulness is that Leo's language always stimulates the simple Mavericks and leaves a fixed impression on Mavericks. However, the author must understand that not everyone will read a book carefully. What I said here is a bit confusing. Please forgive me and it only represents my personal thoughts.

Originally I didn't like the first person, but this book is really good, comfortable to read, and the setting also attracted me. If the time traveler really took the body, it would be the same. I really like the story of Bihong and Leo, and I will continue to witness it!

Well, I've read more than a hundred chapters, and there's obviously nothing too poisonous about it, but I still can't stand it. I'm quite surprised. After thinking about it for a while, it was probably because the story lacked conflict. I couldn't even see the protagonist's obvious growth (either in terms of professional level or emotional experience), and I felt that the protagonist was confused. In fact, professional insights can be interspersed with daily events (such as the bravery, tenacity, and never-give-up of a warrior, the natural heart and balance of a druid, and the elemental insights of a shaman). Youth competitions should be collisions and full of passion. The protagonist may not necessarily win, but he must grow. However, as a result, it was full of intrigues and direct cheating in the finals. To be honest, I was convinced. The creation of other characters is not good either. Even the supporting characters must have distinctive characteristics, a moment of fire, and even sacrifices to strengthen the character image. After reading one or two hundred chapters, I only remember one Leo. I feel that the author has missed a lot of events. In fact, things can be described slowly, and it takes dozens of chapters to write slowly. It feels like the author has passed by in a blink of an eye, and the characters and backgrounds are just touched, and the people are gone.

I have read about a hundred chapters. It is really well written and very distinctive. I support you by ordering it all. The pacing is a bit imperfect, the excitement is a bit lacking, and it's too subtle, which may have affected the book's performance! I personally like this book very much, but I am a little worried that it is not suitable for the public. I am very sorry for the results of this book.

It's already the New Year. I don't know how the author is doing now. I hope you are well and have the perseverance to write a novel that is not popular. It is not easy to follow your inner thoughts. Come on.

Already ordered, the book is very good. Now that I have read more than 400 chapters, Bihong's performance is sometimes better and sometimes worse. Especially when something unexpected happens, he always freezes. In the early days, it could be said that it was a problem of vision, but now I have encountered a lot of things, especially even though I have received a little modern education, I still can't calm down and panic when encountering problems. When will Bihong really grow up!

Um. . . Not the tauren I imagined, disappointed

Minotaur is so rare. The last Minotaur I read was "Legends from the Underworld" Inster.

Summary of Chapter 158: Preparing to leave the village for a small town. The writing is quite good. At first glance, it seems a bit fluid, but at a closer look, it is quite reasonable and excessive. It shows how Niutou was originally ordinary and simple after losing Leo, and the character image of his Niu tribe. But without the humor of Leo's gags to harmonize it, the progress should indeed be accelerated. After arriving in Thunder City, what I dislike the most is the part about celebrity worship. The author may have complained about Xiao Xianrou's rubbish, but shouldn't he include those who have strength and deserve admiration? Even if it's not good enough, he should mention scientists. Shouldn't the otaku thank Arch Druid Yuan for giving him this meal! The part written during adolescence plays a distinct role in change. When the items appeared in the maze, I thought of multiple time-travelers, but I didn't expect that they were all time-travel preparation gift packages. I originally thought that the Niutou was too strong, and when would I be able to suffer a serious injury and fail, now I am afraid it is even more elusive. During the period of space training, I kind of hoped that there would be some poems and lyrics, something that would make me look confused and confused, but unfortunately there was none. I quite like the inclusion of some modern songs in the content, but it's a pity that it's just a symbolic hum haha.

In the later period, various long explanations were cumbersome but rigorous. However, today's readers have developed the habit of "fast food", so this situation has a small audience. However, this is not a disadvantage, but an advantage. And the character creation, I dare not say it is excellent, but at least it is one of the best in the books I have read Many people complain about the first person. The substitution of the first person requires a sense of identity. Think of yourself as a minotaur, put yourself in someone else's shoes, and feel everything that happens to the protagonist. You will have a better reading experience. Some people say that the protagonist is not likeable. In fact, if it were you and me, we would be the same. However, there are still shortcomings in the book. I hope the author can persevere and give readers who have read so far a complete story.

Summary of 433: I have finally caught up with the latest progress and become a follower of the game. The martial arts tournament chapter is well written and adds combat elements that were few in the previous chapters. The descriptions of gourmet food, novel martial arts, conspiracy, and treasure hunting are also very brilliant. But as mentioned in the plot, the high-level torture of food lacks the excitement. As the shortcomings of Bihong's previous plots become more prominent, Leo is transformed into a tool, and the benefits of success are his own, while the mistakes of failure are all on Leo [use your brain? What is that?], Firmly hostile to time travellers. After this competition, it's time to limit Leo's plot leaks. Early plot leaks are okay, after all, proper leaks can assist the plot, but how many readers like to always be spoiled by plot leaks in the middle to later stages? Personally, I prefer the works of the past, Jin Yong, Gu Long and other authors, to the current online articles, because the current works do not mention the ending. In the process, there is Leo who does not use Hong's brain. Compared with Hong, there are some things or lack of talent that require other people's halo. There is the halo of the protagonist that does not exist. Compared with Hong's failure and serious injury, there is no Yaya plot.

I would like to ask friends who have read later whether the author has added settings in the later period. For example, the Minotaur is the first life of Leo and the second life together with Piko, and for example, Piko is the reincarnation of the other half of Leo's soul. Otherwise, this book would really be unreadable. Is Bichou his grandson? Is he going to chase him and feed him? Bichou's attitude towards Leo was very rude, condescending and arrogant, a very obvious attitude of a guard towards a prisoner. This was normal. What was abnormal was that when Leo was treated like this, he would go on to help Bichou with his plans, help him analyze forms, teach him worldly ways, teach him martial arts secrets, and understand his own situation! ! ! You failed to seize the body and were sealed. Don't you want to find a way to break the seal and help your guards reach the peak of life? ! What are you doing! Leo didn't have a chance. When he met an old time traveler in the Golden Triangle, he could try asking him to break his horn to see if he could come out, or kill Bicu to see if he could seize the body a second time, but he had never tried it. Helping Bicu was not impossible, but Bicu's attitude was at least similar to Xiao Yan's attitude towards Yaochen! Just like Coax's attitude towards Leo, coupled with the fact that he was sealed and couldn't do anything and had no entertainment on earth, normal people should give up freedom or die.

After reading about a hundred chapters, the author's writing style is really good. First of all, the first-person viewing experience is indeed much worse than that of the third-person viewing. This is not a question of admitting it or not. In addition to the advantages in the portrayal of the protagonist, it is much worse than the third-person viewing in aspects such as the portrayal of other characters, the description of the settings, and the development of the plot. So the author's writing style is really good. Even though I don't like the first person narrative, I also enjoyed reading it. Secondly, at the beginning, Mr. Leo Ben does not look like an adult who has been working for two years as the author said, but more like a junior high school student. He must be the most naive among junior high school students. After a few dozen chapters, he gets much better. He is a good foul-mouthed complainer, and he is also a personal genius? Also, the description of the protagonist of the calf head is too in line with the race. He is stupid and stubborn and refuses to listen to advice. If I were Leo, I would be very angry. Of course, Leo also wants to seize the calf head, so it is reasonable not to believe him. So I decided to take on the role of Leo😊The time traveler is really the most immersive setting. . . So I want to ask, can Leo come out later? Temporary is okay. Go out and pick up a beauty from the fox tribe. After all, I'm not really a furry control. What I like is beauties with cat ears, not beauties with cat faces.

I have read more than a hundred chapters It's too bland I can't treat it as a daily life. The tauren are stubborn and stupid, and their aesthetics are different, so there is no sense of immersion. It's okay not to have time travellers, because I'm sure I'm subconsciously on the side of time travellers. However, time travelers have lived a very uncomfortable life, without freedom, and their good intentions have been misunderstood. The most important thing is misunderstandings, especially by silly boys. Then this time traveler's performance is not good, and it is quite childish. The audience is younger children, but children generally have no ability to subscribe. If there is no time traveler, there is only one option, and you can also substitute some tauren.

From a child's perspective, the author has gone too deep into the world and lost all logic? Too immature