Weaving the Ming

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I originally thought it was a masterpiece, but I didn't expect it to be a half-finished book. I haven't finished reading the free chapter, so I have three questions: 1. There is no military training, and the quality of the soldiers suppresses the establishment of slaves. 2. The author's writings completely fail to show the fear that the common people had towards the army in the late Ming Dynasty, and there is no evidence of the army's bullying of the common people by killing good people and taking credit for their merits. 3. When there is no golden finger, nor when the issue of food and salary is not explained. In the end, without explaining in detail how to train Xuanda Town, your town was already able to compete with Dorgon. 4. In the history of the late Ming Dynasty, Xuanda just changed the general soldier. What kind of quality was it? Brother, you imitate Lao Bainiu and want to push forward directly without farming, forcing logic, without training soldiers, and without eating empty wages or drinking blood from soldiers. The most terrifying thing is where your weapons and equipment come from. You still have a fine Numi gun to bring out. Just write it down, if your army has no servants, where will the food come from? Are you counting on the Ministry of War? Still counting on Chongzhen's Industrial War Bureau and Gunpowder Factory. Do you think it will be different if you go to Xuanda University? In fact, you can control no more than 20 excellent soldiers. The author would like to reflect on it The most exciting part of Lao Bainiu is indeed the description of the battlefield, but without farming, your book would become a fairy tale. 🙂

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Not scolding, just confused. Is the late Ming Dynasty a prosperous age? Are those people saints? Does it still need to exist? When it comes to the late Ming Dynasty + Chongzhen, then the Ming Dynasty should die. If you don't have enough ability, you will still be stubborn, and you will be beheaded if you take the blame. Who can bear it, who dares to be loyal, who dares to do things, it's not worth it. First of all, if the protagonist is a time traveler, he should know that the Great Qing Dynasty is in ruins, and the Ming Dynasty is not much better. The protagonist's actions will inevitably offend the interests of the old nobles, and "starting over again" is the most direct and guaranteed method. It's not that I incorrectly think that the Han people cannot be the masters, but I really think that the Ming Dynasty is over. Past groups have been too powerful. Changing the past is as easy as creating the future. The fate of a dynasty can be seen from the rigidity of land annexation and wealth distribution.

There are over a thousand sheets and they are still being used as dogs for the imperial court.

Hahaha, I laughed after reading a few chapters. Each of the Qing soldiers looked like martial arts masters. They hid countless killing moves in the battle formation. They have divine consciousness. This is also the author wrote that he immediately shot heavy bows and arrows at eighty steps and got three out of ten. This is Lu Bu. Licking the Qing soldiers must be consistent with common sense.

The author artificially divides the officials of the Ming Dynasty into two groups, the eunuchs and others, and gives the eunuchs labels such as die-hard traitors. In fact, 99% of the officials are just trying to get promoted and make money to keep their officialdom. It is just human nature. The most disgusting thing is this kind of value system that divides groups into classes.

The book is above the horizontal line and can definitely be read. I have been reading it. Now I have just read about supporting Liaodong. Maybe it is the first time I have written it. There are indeed some problems. Except for combat, other aspects are very general and the focus is not focused enough. For example, his development in Xuanzang, except for military, farming, and business, is basically a few strokes. However, people who read it will find that somehow the protagonist has money and food to support tens of thousands of troops and the people under his rule. But when it comes to the military, every part of the organization is long, often changed, and often appears. It is just like that. My novel has the same subject matter and the battle is just bullshit. People who read it are still like that. There are so many, but the management is well written, the human world is sophisticated, and the various developments are well written. If he had your description of battles, the book would be on a higher level immediately. Also, your emotional scenes are a bit awkward. The dialogue between the two is uncomfortable to watch. Apart from driving a little, there are no highlights. It needs to be strengthened. Another point, the author When you write characters' expressions, don't always smile evilly or evilly. It will appear that you are very incompetent. You are obviously very powerful. These two words always appear, regardless of whether they are enemies or friends. In fact, if you write the right enemy, it can be a cold light flashing in the eyes, or looking at his back like a dead person. It doesn't matter. It's definitely better than having a crooked smile, and it's the same when writing about yourself. Don't smile crookedly or crookedly. Not many people laugh like that. They either laugh out loud, sneer, or turn up the corners of their mouths. Whichever one you use depends on the scene. You're a great writer. I'm just giving you some advice to make it more comfortable for me. Haha, don't take offense!

Don't think that Chongzhen is so unbearable. According to historical evaluation, he was not a king who lost his country, but he was destined to lose his country. When any news is to deceive the king, all officials are only for their own interests. The king can only stick to the ancestral system, and everyone is tied up. After all, Chongzhen is not a time traveler, and his thoughts have limitations. I like the backbone of the Ming Dynasty and Chongzhen's tough choice to hang himself. As an ordinary person, I don't have the courage. Compared to Puyi! They are all very different from the last emperor.

This book is well written but too little. In my mind, the history category is "The Late Ming Dynasty" first. I like to read about farming and hegemony reforms, but I don't like ancient officialdom novels that are purely about power. However, I still like to read modern officialdom novels. Ant Thief, The Age of Huang Tian, ​​A small soldier in the border army at the end of the Ming Dynasty. Not as good as the late Ming Dynasty, but still at the same level. The next level, The Most Romantic of the Three Kingdoms, does not have the cruelty of war like Ant Thieves, and the thrill of fighting for hegemony is not enough. The deer, the deer is not as immersive as the ant thief. I personally like the way the ant thief uses words. The ant thief's struggle for hegemony is really well written. If you like rigorous competition for hegemony and can feel the cruelty of war, the refreshing feeling of gaining power, and the liveliness of the supporting characters, I highly recommend watching Ant Thief Late Ming.