Naruto's Demonic Law

The writing in this book is okay, but there are too many poisonous points, and I am defeated.

The previous chapter was fine, but I saw that the protagonist in Chapter 7 was really mentally retarded and couldn't bear it anymore.

What the hell is this beginning? Is it so mediocre? The protagonist is too childish

This is the only novel I've ever read that I didn't jump to.

Damn it, my favorite Naruto fan

I see this kind of thing every time I read fanfics. Although there is great power, nothing can be changed. There are already five human puppets, four of which have devil fruits. The protagonist's strength is beyond the shadow level. He beat the masked man to the ground, but the fourth generation couple still died. I don't understand why you write it like this? Don't dare to change the plot? What a pity.

,,, In the world of Naruto, I admire the third generation the most. He is a true statesman. When he took over as Hokage. The first two generations of Hokage all belonged to the Senju clan, which led to the Senju clan having too high prestige. He tried to find a way to wipe out the Thousand Hands clan. Tsunade is a girl, no threat. So he accepted him as his apprentice to improve his reputation. The sacred tree was a boy, a bit threatening, so he died unexpectedly. ,,, Accepted Orochimaru as his apprentice, (knowing that he likes to conduct experiments, so he used cold guns) and asked him to seduce Danzo and conduct human experiments together. (The matter was later revealed, and Orochimaru was specifically let go.) The success allowed Danzo to take the blame. ,,, After the Thousand Hands Clan perished, it was the Yu Zhiha Clan's turn. The first step ~ weakening the power of the Uchiha clan. The second step~tempt the patriarch to rebel. The third step~Use Itachi's loyalty to the village to destroy the Uchiha clan. ,,, Yu graduated from the Ninja School and showed amazing strength. When the third generation saw this, he slapped his thigh (thinking of a bad idea) and immediately called Yu to accept him as a disciple. With Yu as a thug, his life was happy, and he used a few tricks to get Yu to work with Danzo. Sandai also laughed out loud while lying on the bed,,,,,,

The most trashy fanfic I've ever seen

Let's be honest, it's okay if you know how to use Chidori, Rasengan, and Chidori-ryu when you are 6 years old, but you fucking tried Chidori twice, once Chidori-ryu, and Rasengan once in one fucking game. How did you get so much chakra when you were 6 years old? He learned S-level ninjutsu when he was less than 7 years old and used it well. You fucking have more chakra than Naruto.

If you're not an old Shennong, don't click on this book... It's too toxic... The average Shennong can't handle it. The protagonist is 6 years old, "As we all know, the Chidori's seal is Who are you? Then what's even more amazing is that we started working on the Rasengan the next day. The principle of the euphemistically called Rasengan is simple... And then it turned out to be... This logic is so funny... Even junior high school students know the principle of the atomic bomb, but I haven't seen you build one! It's so addictive that I can't read it. If you say this book is good, it's probably your first time reading a novel, right?

You can kill Jinchuuriki at the age of eight or nine. You can use palm senjutsu at the age of five, Chidori and Rasengan at the age of six, perform S missions at the age of seven, and defeat Kage level jinchuriki at the age of eight. I can only say that Shennong can't resist it.

Like the title says, I can learn Chidori and Rasengan at the age of 6, and a few months later I can change the water properties, and I also have physical skills and medical skills. What do the others do? If the protagonist was really that powerful, he would be a Nobel Prize winner in reality without having to travel back in time. At the level of the richest man, do you really think that you can use Ninjutsu just because you know how to form seals? Where do you get your experience with the chakra guidance methods that need to be used when forming seals? If you could just look at the seals and know how to use them, you would already have no shortage of geniuses. The writing in this book is just like watching someone in a movie make a Gundam, and you will be able to make a Gundam. It's so brainless.

In the first few dozen chapters, Naruto is written as an urban pretentious article. That's really awesome. It's so vicious that I can't stand it anymore.

Chapter 16 is the real poison. A person with water and thunder attributes has mastered wind-type Rasengan at the age of five. This Rasengan is Boruto's type with space attributes. No wonder I would withdraw the book after more than 20 chapters.

Naruto's world view is very childish, and the characters are very childish. You, the author, are actually more childish than Kishimoto's design 😰

To be honest, everyone who writes fics must write a good and passionate manga about love and harem, about the love-hate relationship between the protagonist and Shisui and Kabuto. Isn't it a good idea to forcefully insert a female protagonist into the story, and to do it in such a blunt way (╯°□°) that she will kneel down and lick the protagonist when she sees him in passing? Is it really necessary to have such a female protagonist?

I think the first Naruto fanfic I read was very good.

Although I haven't finished watching it yet, the protagonist is a completely emotionless pervert who only pursues power. This is very similar to Danzo, and the author has completely failed to understand the Naruto anime.

I can't stand seeing the ninja school charging fees. You're telling me that a school that trains cannon fodder charges a fee? As long as you have ninja qualifications, are you afraid of accepting it?

What the hell is a BUG? He's four years old and less than five years old! Chidori and Rasengan are so good at it that they even created a Kamigakure Rasengan! Why the hell don't you take a spiral pill? You went straight to the moon to fight Kaguya! The earth can no longer let you go

When I saw the sentence "The size of this village is even smaller than that of an international metropolis in the previous life," I felt that there was something wrong with the author's vision. Can you tell me that a village where you can see the whole village from a higher station is comparable to an international metropolis? If you want to brag about being a Hokage, don't brag like that, okay? You can easily search for pictures of Konoha. Can you tell me how Konoha looks like a metropolis?

Advantages: The creativity is good Disadvantages: 1. The characters are OOC, the ninjas are too arrogant and domineering, and they are all waiting for the protagonist to come and pretend to be a slap in the face. 2. The level design is broken, and the inexplicable secondary design classifications such as shadow level and super shadow level are changed into traditional fairy tale and fantasy levels in this book. In fact, the original Naruto's strength level is close to that of martial arts, and the fuzzy algorithm of being a first-rate master, second-rate, and third-rate. This book sets up a direct link between strength and chakra. But in fact, in the original work, restraint, intelligence, secret techniques, and blood inheritance can seriously affect the battle. 3. The training system of One Piece does not highlight the description, focusing on the original power system of Naruto, and there is no experience in cheating 3. The protagonist is mentally retarded, unable to find his own position, and operates mentally retarded

The Naruto novels written a few years ago have all the usual flaws. The writing is not strong enough, and the imagination is not good enough. I don't dare to change the plot randomly. I can only pretend to be B in the context of the original plot. No matter how incredible the protagonist's ability is, the person who originally deserved to die has to die. It seems that if I survive, I can't figure out the plot behind it.

Is this author still around? Does he dare to read his books again?

The writing style of a primary school student, saying one word several times in a row, is embarrassing as hell, and there is also "only see". . . . . . Some people are talking about this book

Some people say that Naruto is so invincible in the novels that he beat genin at a certain age. You must know that Kakashi graduated early at the age of 5 and was promoted to chuunin at the age of 6. Itachi beat Orochi at the age of 13.

The three generations of this book are the main protagonists

It is indeed quite poisonous. Once you eat the fruit in the early stage, as long as the fruit awakens, there will be basically no threats to you except Uchiha madman below the Sixth Path. Like the Rasengan, the Erha demon can also talk. It is too poisonous.

A bunch of talents. Fan fiction is just for fun. Age is not a problem. Itachi Uchiha is 12 years old and has the Mangekyō Sharingan. Why is no one commenting on it?

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