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I can accept writing about Naruto, but why bother writing about Pirates and then Naruto? Does this book deserve its title? You should change the name to Japanese comics or something.

Personally, I felt that the Naruto plot was okay before, but the fireworks part was so bad that I had to persuade them to quit. Later, the martial arts world plot was even more so at the level of a novice. It was so disgusting that I didn't want to leave it! !

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I have watched the One Piece cartoon, no more than 3 episodes, Bleach, no more than 2 episodes together, and Naruto, which has seven or eight episodes. Many of you who were born in 1995 wrote like this. They don't even know what you are writing, and you will lose a lot of readers.

I wrote too much about Naruto, so I gave up. I am tired of the fancy power system.

This book is really written to death by the author. Should a Naruto book be so long?

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People who write about Naruto generally don't read it. To be honest, I can't understand the Uchique clan. Of course, those who write about him are usually students and basically eunuchs.

Why spend so much money on Hanabi?

I found a girl in the first world. How much do you miss women? After watching the beginning, I lost interest in watching it.

You can consider teaching Rama's inner strength to Qin Shuang and reconnecting his broken arm. Qin Shuang is such a good person but his life is so miserable. It is just the right time for the protagonist to change his fate and he should be able to gain a lot of points.

Uchiha Madara's Susanoo is 208 meters in total Kakashi's is 188 meters Uchiha Sasuke's Susan is 227 meters Six Paths old man's Susan is over 1,000 meters Maki Senju is also over a thousand meters. The author has mentioned many times that the complete Susano is tens of meters long. Is this a children's toy? Even Uchiha Itachi's Stage 3 Susana is 31 meters tall

If you don't like Naruto, don't watch it! Just find the style you like and look at it. Come here to gain a sense of presence. I'm really speechless. Something wrong. .

Chapter 1: Persuading you to quit. The boss wants to promote you because he wants to harm you 😥. You can't do this in order to keep the plot going.

Personally, I felt that the Naruto writing was okay before, but the fireworks part was so bad that I had to persuade them to quit. The plot of the martial arts world after that was just at the level of a novice novel. It's disgusting, so don't use it.

In the first world, isn't it about defeating the last boss? He left before he was halfway there. In the office, you took on tasks for hundreds of episodes. You wrote from the Uchiha genocide to the boss, and it was interrupted in the middle. 666

I don't hate Japanese comics, but there are too many people writing about Naruto. Basically, time travel novels have Naruto. I'm really tired of aesthetics. And I also wrote a Shippuden, emmmmm, the novel is quite good.

Writing about time travel under the guise of the heavens, and the world rules and different power systems cannot be used, so it does not mean that you have to practice again every time you come to a new system

I lost half of the first chapter and immediately lost my temper. I don't like it.

In fact, it might be better to do martial arts first and then comics. Otherwise, if you go to the martial arts world and use ninjutsu, won't others think you are a Japanese pirate? And it looks awkward!

Wasn't Mu Dun eliminated by the Blood Successor? There are three attributes of water, earth and yang. How come the two attributes of water and earth are combined? Without the vitality stimulated by the yang attribute, can wood escape be formed? Wood escape can counteract Chen escape, but Chen escape can pacify the Warring States period.

Damn, this book is so miserable. There are so many people criticizing it for all kinds of reasons.

I've already read two books, and this is the third one that I haven't read yet.

? You made me stupid when you started the operation. You're not even half as smart as I am.

After reading the first chapter, I felt that the protagonist was very suspicious! I didn't look back! But I'm also curious as to how someone with such severe paranoia could begin to travel through time! How do you believe in time travel?

The whole book is just about Naruto and it doesn't affect the experience at all. It's better to say it's a fan of Naruto than it is Zhu Tianwen.

It's very well written, but why doesn't it feel like no one is reading it?

The son of Long Xiu and Feng Wu is Long Er, the sword master. The reincarnation of the sword master, Long Er was born the second after the sword master died in the original work. The author must not have forgotten it!