I Brought Hundreds of Millions of Physical Shocks to Xiu Xian

Title of the book: I brought hundreds of millions of physical shocks to the cultivator [Recommendation]: This is a system novel about traveling through the world of immortality to become an inventor (refiner). The protagonist Ding Yi travels to the world of immortality. After successfully making a small watering can magic weapon, he activates the creation system. By creating new inventions, you can get the creation value rewarded by the system. By consuming the creation value, the system can improve your own ideas (such as incomplete exercises, perfect magic weapon production, etc.). Inspirational to use physical inventions to change (dominate) the world of immortality! [Seedling Rating]: As of the time of publication, the novel has written 108,100 words. On a 10-point scale, I think this book can reach 8.0. In the world of immortality, inventions are made, and physical science dominates the world. It feels quite interesting. I don't know if I am following the trend. I have recently seen similar movies such as "The Nuclear Emperor". The plot feels a bit spliced ​​and not smooth. The writing is pretty good and relatively smooth. [Introduction to the work]: The main character Ding Yi tends to be funny and scheming, and he likes to sell things (I don't know if he wants to imitate a meme about listening to music). The golden finger creation system is powerful. Various problems in cultivation can be solved through the system. It can be said to be quite refreshing. The disadvantage is that the function is too powerful and the content is a bit cumbersome. After reading this, I still don't fully understand the system. The plot is a bit bland, but the author drives it daily and the speed is acceptable. Book friends who like driving or writing about systems recommend it to read it. Come on, author! {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}{"TopicId":"865669143700766720","TopicName":"Qi'an's Saowen Building"}

Damn it, I finally started a new book. I started to follow you from the book "It's Right to Take Risks". I always thought that one was the best, so it's a pity to cut it off.

I have a small question. Are you talking about nuclear bombs and Trisolaris?

Let's just say, although we say we need to jump out of our comfort zone, there are thousands of fantasy authors, and you are really not the only one. It's too difficult to stand out. You can't attract new readers, and old readers are dissatisfied. It's better to continue to shine in the online game area.

Qidian Anti-Theft is so disgusting. I have to read 1 million words a day. How much does it cost? Most of them are shoddily made and not worthy of my money. Today I will withdraw from the starting point.

I feel that it is a bit baffling to write a plot about the Holy Son of the Buddhist Kingdom as the protagonist during this period. On the one hand, there is a problem with the character's behavioral stance. The Buddhist country is considered neutral and friendly even if it is not decent. After all, as mentioned earlier, the Holy Son was on a mission on behalf of the Buddhist Kingdom, but you found the Holy Girl to stay in the small town of Novice Village. What should you do with the business? Moreover, you are looking for a saint instead of dealing with a traitor. You just do it without saying anything from the beginning. It is very deliberate to let the protagonist hero save the beauty. There was no explanation afterwards, just to see if Qiao Mei wanted to join (it felt like Qiao Mei wanted to practice cultivation), we had to mess with her whole family and the protagonist. It didn't feel like a serious act, it just seemed like it was just for the sake of plot conflicts. Moreover, the subsequent operations seemed to have problems with IQ and EQ. How did he become the Holy Son? It would be better to just change the name to the Holy Son of Demon Country from the beginning, so that the previous approach would be reasonable. On the other hand, there is no distinction between goals and all kinds of nonsense. The protagonist just accidentally sabotaged an impromptu action of the Son. From the perspective of the Buddhist country, looking for a saint girl actually has little to do with the protagonist. Why are you focusing on the protagonist now? It was said earlier that it would be difficult to deal with Sister Qiao living in the area where the police officers' families live in the Yamen, but does your role as the protagonist serve any other purpose besides just alerting others? Especially if the protagonist has merit and virtue, you know it's not easy to do it directly, but you still have to do it forcefully? You can obviously wait for a while for Jin Dan's men to find opportunities to arrest people, but you have to confront the protagonist just to be the villain and add conflict to the plot? Previously, the protagonist started a gang and alerted the whole town Jin Dan and the Yamen police officers. Instead of taking the opportunity to arrest people, you let your subordinate Jin Dan spend his merits to control a useless undercover agent. Later, Qiao Mei came to help the protagonist settle the score, and you didn't let the undercover inform the news. Fortunately, Qiao Mei arrested people on the way back, so you let the undercover steal three rings of knowledge. Even the undercover trigger has nothing to do with Qiao Mei, but the protagonist going out of the city alone. Why is your goal not to find the saint, but to change it to the protagonist for no reason, right? In yesterday's chapter, you even controlled the police, but you still said that Qiao Mei was not easy to deal with in the family area of ​​the police? Directly controlling a yamen agent is no more of a big deal than kidnapping an agent's family. Now Lord Wang, Brother Qiao, Ye Su and the protagonist are not in the city, but I feel that you would rather send experts to deal with the protagonist than capture Sister Qiao. So are you staying in Novice Village to fry fish and find a protagonist or to find a saint? Actually, I am a fan of the author. I started watching it from the proficiency level. Although I have not rewarded or joined the group, at least I have subscribed to it and have not read the pirated version. I am not specifically criticizing the author to find faults. I just feel that there are some problems with the rhythm of the plot during this period. I hope the author can adjust it and write the story in a logical manner, so as not to end the climax before it starts like the previous book.

Strongly recommended to write martial arts online games

It's still an ordinary system refining machine with a physical coating.

What's going on with Yundongliu? It's been endless since he reached proficiency.

Just because the protagonist has built a machine tool, Duobao Pavilion doesn't go out of its way to recruit people, and it doesn't stop its weapon refiners from embarrassing others, and it is still a large force!

No need to wait, the author passed away due to the new coronavirus epidemic.

Only then did I discover that the alchemist = material dog, the alchemist = chemical dog, the spiritual planter = gardening dog, the talisman master = chip circuit dog, the array master = geomagnetic field dog...

Fuck! ! How long has it been since you published a new book? ? ? Where are the people?

It's hard to describe the plot after it's launched

I would like to make a suggestion, don't be shocked by the title. You will be shocked when you open the table of contents. I have been shocked enough over the years.

What a weird weapon-refining master, but the author doesn't write about weapon-refining properly, and there are several women. Isn't one of them enough for you 😂😂😂😂

Brother, let's make an outline next time.

Twice in a row. Make an outline first, you kid.

If you keep it, you will lose it! "Yangmei"

Are there any brothers in the group? What's going on with Lao Yun? Is he still writing a book?

The author is probably writing a new book using the vest again. Does anyone know which book it is?

This... When are you going to plan a new book?

10 Minutes. How many times have I read these two chapters?

I remember that this type was quite popular.

Please don't mess up this time, brother, please be more stable, okay?

I'm here to 😁 support Lao Yun

It's better to write a martial arts book for everyone

Is this... Starting to step into the trap of cultivating immortals?

I only found out about the new book when I saw Aier's post I've been waiting for a long time

I've opened a new book, but I can't see anything, but the subject matter should be Wanding's subject.