The Invincible Immortal Venerable of the City

I have read a lot of similar novels, and they all basically have the following plots: "That boy is overestimating his abilities!" "That boy is dead!" "Oh! It's a pity that he will die at such a young age."... After a blind beep, the protagonist got the upper hand and said "Oh~ How could it be!?" "This must be his good luck, a fluke!" "When so-and-so gets serious, he doesn't even know how he died!". If there is a plot like this, basically every fight will be repeated like this. I think, if someone with a weak heart is displeased, recommend more novels like this to him, and let him die of myocardial infarction.

An immortal turned out to be an old gangster who punched bullies and kicked rich young losers. An eagle managed to become the king of an ant hole and was very proud of it.

I have read nearly 2,000 chapters. Although the writing is good, there are many shortcomings. First, there are too many slap-in-the-face routines. It was new at the beginning, but after reading too many chapters, I just felt that only the protagonist is smart in the whole book, and the enemies are all big pigs. You don't have to think about it, just offend them one by one. Secondly, the protagonist is too selfish. To be honest, in this novel, there are many protagonists who seem to be female protagonists. I want to ask, since Lin Jiuxuan doesn't like them, wouldn't it be better to refuse them directly? Write less about those people, why do you have to pretend to be the boyfriend of each woman, and then pretend to be a saint after being slapped in the face? I think, this is not a saint, but actually a holy mother bitch. Women are surrounding him, and he is sitting still, making it uncomfortable to watch. Instead of doing this, it is better to write a harem story, at least it is fun to watch. Thirdly, the plot dragged on too slowly, and I was confused. After so many chapters, he was still in the foundation-building stage. Why did he drag him? Looking at the level outline introduced earlier, what was the difference between him and a ten thousand-year-old elementary school student? In short, the more he watched, the more unhappy he became with the protagonist.

Pretending to beat people, pretending to beat people, ninety percent of the people the protagonist encounters are arrogant and feel superior. Oh my God, what kind of world is this? No one with a discerning eye is like a fool. And besides the protagonist's pretense, the plot of the pretense is almost the same. Brother, don't you vomit if you eat the same thing every day? For example, if you get tired of eating fish every day, you can change your style. Today, you can grill the fish, steam it tomorrow, and braise it in braised fish the day after tomorrow. Isn't it still fish? Still have to vomit

This is the only book I have ever seen that is more procrastinating than Demon Emperor Xiao Fan 😡, and more pretentious than Chen Beixuan 😆. Although you want to write a daily pretentious article, this daily life is really procrastinating, and there is this school beauty. Miss, where do so many school beauties come from? Where do all these ladies come from? Also, I wrote more than 1,600 chapters before writing about his father. It really took too long. Can this be written faster? Make the progress faster. If you write it like this, when can you return to the world of cultivation? 😒😒

It's Master Lin, Lin Yi, Lin Jiuxuan! Is it so easy to confuse three identities into three people? Master Lin's first name was Lin Jiuxuan, and some people actually thought they were two people! Master Haizhou Lin, plus Haizhou Lin Yi, no one knows that they are the same person. Are they all idiots?

After reading the previous chapters, I feel that most of the characters are scornful and look down on others. Is the world so cold and heartless? The protagonist is also a SB, he is so powerful, but he can't make money very quickly. He must be seen like this, and then wait for others to bully him before he takes action. It's too pretentious! ! !

I am really about to be blown away by the sight of you, Immortal Lord, what a ghost, have you ever seen any Immortal Lord that is so useless? I really can't stand this little Shou's character, and yet he becomes an Immortal Lord like this, your uncle.

A common problem with this type of novel is that if you were once so awesome, you must have a good heart, but once you arrive in the city, you will turn into a fool. I'm not saying that his writing is not good. After all, I have never been a god or emperor and I can't understand this.

I don't understand. Why didn't the police or the government take action when the protagonist killed so many people?