The Invincible Immortal Venerable of the City

I've read many similar novels, and they almost all have plots like this: "That kid is too overconfident!" "That kid's doomed!" "Sigh! It's a pity he's going to die so young."... A bunch of nonsense, and then the protagonist gains the upper hand and everyone says, "Oh~ how could that be!?" "He must have been lucky, just a fluke!" "When so-and-so gets serious, he won't even know how he died!"

A celestial being, in the end, ended up punching bullies and kicking rich young spendthrifts. A mighty eagle, on the other hand, became a self-satisfied king of an anthill.

I've read nearly two thousand chapters. Although it's well-written, there are quite a few flaws. First, there are too many face-slapping tropes. It's novel at first, but after a while, it feels like only the protagonist is smart, and the enemies are all idiots who don't need to think before they come to offend you. Secondly, the protagonist is too selfish.

The protagonist, who's always showing off and getting into fights, encounters 90% of people who are arrogant and think they're superior. Good heavens, what kind of world is this? None of the high-ranking people have any sense of propriety; they're all like idiots. And all the protagonist does is show off. The scenes of showing off are all pretty much the same.

This is the only book I've ever seen that's even more drawn-out than *The Demon Emperor Xiao Fan* 😡, and even more pretentious than *Chen Beixuan* 😆. While you wanted to write a slice-of-life, pretentious story, this slice-of-life is just dragging on and on. And this "school beauty" thing—where did all these school beauties come from? Where did all these "young ladies" come from?

It's Master Lin, Lin Yi, and Lin Jiuxuan! Are three identities so easily confused into three different people? Master Lin was initially revealed to be Lin Jiuxuan, yet some people still thought they were two different people! Master Lin of Haizhou plus Lin Yi of Haizhou—and still no one knows they're the same person? Are they all idiots?

After reading the beginning, it seems like most of the characters are snobbish and condescending. Is the world really that cold and heartless? The protagonist is such a loser; he's already so powerful, yet he makes money so easily, and he insists on being looked down upon, only taking action when people actually bully him. So pretentious!

I'm seriously about to explode! Immortal Venerable? What kind of immortal venerable is this pathetic? I just can't stand this submissive personality. How can someone like this be an immortal venerable? Immortal my ass!

The common problem with this type of novel is that the protagonist was once so powerful and kind-hearted, but once they enter the city, they become a complete idiot. I'm not saying the writing is bad; after all, no one has ever been a god or emperor, so they can't understand.

I don't quite understand, how come no police or government intervened when the protagonist killed so many people?