My Shadow Will Hang Up

I can't stand it any longer. I originally wanted to scold it directly, but after thinking about it, let me tell you my opinion. The most important point is that the author's writing skills are not strong enough and he can't control it. I read about ten or twenty chapters, and it gave me a feeling of chaos in addition to chaos. The preface does not match the postscript. The shadow is 13 centimeters when it is released, and it becomes 9 centimeters when the fight begins. Also, the author, are you a human on earth? Have you graduated from elementary school? Do you know how long one centimeter is? Have you seen ants? ? An ant looks like a giant in the eyes of a one centimeter shadow! ? . . . I agreed not to scold him. . . If you don't have enough writing power, don't spread it so big! Four dimensions, five dimensions, six dimensions and seven dimensions. . I know how to write and read without overestimating my abilities (sorry, I couldn't help it)! There is also the latter one going to Wuwei Na. Seeing that there are so many people waiting for the pig's feet, whether it is from the context or the author's own description, it gives the reader a feeling: the pig's feet are late (hate people who are late)! Then he said lightly at the back that he was lucky enough to catch up at the last minute of the appointment (what should I do if I want to curse again). . . Is it really okay for you to say nothing at all? There are so many more that I don't want to say anymore for fear that I won't be able to bear them any longer! Abandoned, 88

Although I ordered more than 900 chapters, I just couldn't stand it after reading more than 300 chapters. The setting of this book is very creative and good, but the writing style is really inferior, and the author does not pick out typos or omissions at all. It is like reading a pirated version, which is very toxic. If you read the book without thinking, it is fine, but if you like to read with your mind, it is not recommended at all.

If you don't hang up every day, what are you doing?

I've been following the new book since it came out. At first I thought it was quite novel and exciting, but I got addicted to it within two days...

Not good, messy, dizzy!

It can't be considered a book review, just some personal thoughts. It's a standard protagonist who cheats on the story, and if you don't like the story, you can just leave it. It's not bad for newcomers, you can give it a try.

There are a lot of settings, and sometimes it feels confusing, and the world is very large, but the writing is good and the description is pretty good, so it's worth a read 🙂

Haha, this logic was very impressive at the beginning, and there is no pressure to cross levels. When I really took action, I said that I couldn't beat this logic.

In fact, I'm very sorry. If I were a trap, I could spend money to get you to the top of the rankings. Unfortunately not, I can only show my support in a small way every day. 🤝

Great writing, please update!

I think the world setting of this book is the biggest flaw.

I can't stand it anymore. I really can't bear it. I can block the recommendation like this.

Generally speaking, this book is just a book if you don't pay attention to details and read it without thinking! Anyway, I feel that the system is the protagonist from beginning to end. After all, the protagonist relies on the system to direct everything he does. Also, the protagonist always says "I don't even know how strong I am now", and then. . . . . After saying this, shouldn't it be possible to fight the next supporting character in one move? Why do we have to fight for a long time? In the end, the pace is really slow. There are three or four hundred pictures, and the protagonist is still the lowest level. He keeps talking about combat power, so what's the point of having a realm? In the end, the protagonist has no reason to despise others. The Saint Family that has been fighting for centuries and thousands of years can't compare to a few shadows with the same strength as the protagonist. Let me go, this is not the protagonist's problem. The author's setting is extremely embarrassing! Also, I have been writing about fighting, improving combat power, fighting, and improving combat power under the guise of shadow hanging up. Really, I would not even think about letting shadow hang up unless necessary! Finally, the protagonist is a real zz. The protagonist is not allowed to hang up and upgrade in the early stage. The settings need to be updated. After hundreds of pictures have been taken to the main world, he is still not allowed to upgrade. Settings and techniques cannot be clicked. It is obvious that you can practice it by yourself, but you must have the system level ten before you can use the internal energy value to upgrade the techniques. Okay, this world has not found a way to open the void value, so you can't practice it by yourself? I was really convinced. The main character and the world setting were really embarrassing. I read three to four hundred pictures without thinking and couldn't stand it anymore. The author's writing sounded so good that I completely lost my mind in the Pacific Ocean! Of course, in the author's first book, poisonous points and the like are normal. I hope that after this book is written, the next book will not set the protagonist as such a mentally retarded child. Can you please use normal people's thinking to set the protagonist?

I was attracted by the imagination and saw Chapter 17. It poisoned me to death. It reminds me of when I was required to write an essay in school. I have to scrape together more than half of the idioms out of 500 words.

This slightly novel subject matter allowed me to persist for more than 200 chapters. The author's writing became a little better. Until this old man returned to the earth from the main world, he seemed to have changed into a web writer in the 2005s. I persisted to 500 chapters. I couldn't do it anymore. It was too poisonous. The shadow of this buddy had already begun to make friends with the vampire minions. They drank and had a good time. Farewell. It was too novel.

You have to read this book without thinking! ! ! Otherwise you will be poisoned to death! ! !

After reading more than 400 chapters, the system became more humane. At this time, the protagonist kept fighting, and in group fights, he said one by one that he would use the opponent's best fighting method to kill him, but in the end he didn't kill him. If he couldn't pretend to be cool, he would switch opponents like this. It was so bad that the author could not reach level 5 😤

It's this kind of book, so it's natural that it won't be popular. There are a lot of awesome plug-ins available. But if you don't improve your own strength, you will be pitifully weak. That is, you must kill people beyond the level. When you encounter someone who is too awesome and can't beat him, you will come out and forcefully open an awesome cheat to kill the opponent. Afterwards, he still didn't improve his strength.

My mom, my mom, oh maiga, I keep using this tone of voice. Isn't it disgusting?

The author's writing skills are not good. He always makes things out of nothing and forcibly drives the plot without any details. He jumps from paragraph to paragraph and becomes more and more exaggerated as he goes on. I'm so afraid I won't read the anecdote again. .

After reading more than two hundred chapters, I realized that it was a bad book with no ending. . Writing a book has no ending. What are you writing? It's a waste of my money.

The plot that the golden finger of the pig's trotter was created by someone else is a bit disgusting and disgusting, and suddenly it feels boring.

It's a pretty good subject. Why do you need to add N tons of Crane's Crown Red to it? With my invulnerable physique, I just can't withstand it 😐

In fact, there is nothing else. Although the writing is not good, the plot is very weird... But good writing should not have too high requirements... But... But! The protagonist is a bit angry... He is always in darkness, catastrophe, everyone owes him... I feel sorry for him... I feel the author's anger when reading, but the reader has no idea what to be angry about... For example, that Xian Zu... He will give you treasures when you break into the tower, but if you die in it, he will absorb your energy... Why is he so dark? Did he force you to go? Then after you die, he will absorb the world even if he doesn't absorb it? He is the star realm... What's wrong with you going there and magnifying your greed... Then the music you play while watching the movie is also exaggerating the atmosphere... No one has to let you go...

I vaguely remember seeing a pirated copy about four or five years ago, but I didn't expect that it's been six years since I updated it.

Are there only 2 chapters per day? Update it quickly! Nice!

Come on, the author. I support you. I hope the author will not constantly compare him with the War Saint when describing the protagonist. Such writing will make people feel uninvolved! There is no passion! Recommended votes are presented! Forget that the author can adopt it!

The update is slow. Please add more gas.

Has Universal Lord been taken off the shelves at the starting point?