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It's really good. After reading the prologue, I think the ending is ready.

The author has his own views on each world, which is much better than most of the purely popular ones. I thought that the author had written all the extras at the end of the book (I came from a pirated website, and I thought the author's writing was good enough to support the original version). I really look forward to the author writing all his own extras.

The reason you guys are complaining is because I came here in 202, and everyone in the first few years liked it very much. At that time, the setting party was really ecstatic, and other people also found it interesting.

Does the protagonist have any emotional problems? First, he fell in love with the eleven-year-old n. Where did he throw the ban? Then I saw that the thief was a beautiful girl cooking for others, and she treated her like a servant. Where was the anger before? And that girl is weaker than the protagonist. Alas╯╰Feng Xue, please don't be a licking dog, okay? Is it really okay to treat beauties so differently? Please remember, [beep——] no one is innocent when prices are soaring. After reading it, I couldn't help but complain. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhinuchin. Com

After reading the author's new book, I finally understand why your book has never been popular. The author writes the book mainly for his own happiness. Readers can't understand it, and it doesn't feel very important. He never writes the end of each copy. The emotional scenes are so poorly written that you have been persuaded to quit. I don't know how many people, especially readers, have pointed out problems to you and still refuse to change them. After reading The Deceiver, I realized that none of your other books are worth reading. Either it's a bad job or it's just mindless licking a girl.

When he saw the world of famine, the protagonist was so angry that he wanted to make the other party understand the value of food. However, when he saw that the other party was a girl, he immediately looked like a pig, which made me almost choke to death with a mouthful of water. Forget it, you are writing a harem story, but you are still writing a perverted story! In the first volume, I can't say I'm tempted. In the second volume, Digital World, I immediately became inseparable from an anime girl. In the third volume, Don't Starve World, I was directly possessed by a pervert, and it was love at first sight when Brother Pig came to the world? The girl in your last world will still die!

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The book is very good, but it also has its shortcomings That is, there are always some trolls who can't read the book, just to show off their lower IQ, why bother?

Please open a new book. There are so many good-looking extras but they may leave holes unfilled. Why not open a new book?

So, hand over your archives! (Holding a murder weapon)

After reading the first bit, I was hooked. After the author set up a planet suitable for human habitation, I wonder if his knowledge level is really poor. He also specifically explained that there is no nuclear fuel to generate electricity, so there is no electricity. . . Consider tidal energy, wind energy, potential energy, solar energy, biological energy, and chemical energy. . . . A series of technologies that can generate electricity are all thrown away

Although it is called the otaku era, this kind of flirting with an 11-year-old girl is still disgusting.

I can't stand it anymore, I really can't stand it. It's so poisonous. Those brackets are so damn poisonous. Every time I watch it, a bracket will appear. It's either a comment about the author or a setting of the original work that the author thinks is right that has nothing to do with the book. In many cases, there are more settings than the normal plot. It's really annoying to watch. If the author wants to get rid of the setting or feels that his understanding of the original work is very fresh, can he open the setting chapter separately? You don't want readers to read the brackets at all! This will cause you to throw yourself on the street and die! There are also some problems with the plot. Many times the plot that should be written is skipped, and there are a lot of useless plots. Most of the plot is to throw away the settings, and the settings are still the original ones, which have little to do with this article and are completely uninteresting. Emotional processing is even more confusing. Not to mention that a time traveler who has lived for more than a thousand years actually fell in love with a primary school student and inexplicably made a lifelong promise. Let's talk about the novice. I don't know how many big bosses in the West are watching, it's really poisonous... In the end, the character of the protagonist is also very unlikable. A good protagonist is set up as a secondary character, and he is intermittently dazed regardless of the situation, and then almost leads to a big mistake, and, forget it, let's not talk about it... I say all this to tell the author that writing novels is a dead end, come and follow me: "Writing novels is a dead end!", So come and sell health care products to me!

I'm puzzled by the protagonist's obsession with various women. How perverted does the protagonist have to be to fall in love with an 11-year-old girl? So disgusting

Disgusting, very disgusting, a novice with more than 150 chapters, disgusting, disgusting to death

Well, the protagonist can be careless four or five times in a battle, so I won't say anything.

The gospel of setting up the party, this book is very suitable for me

The description of the female characters must not be lacking. The plot of the dungeon is okay. I watched Don't Starve very interestingly, but the sudden appearance of the character Xiaobai immediately made me feel bad. The relationship with Ruki was also a bit inexplicable. Since the feelings cannot be written out, it would be better not to write it and just write the dungeon directly. . . Stomachache

Too many people show off their lower limit of IQ, it's hard to stand up to them, it's uncomfortable

Is it a matter of compatibility or is my vision too narrow? Why do I find the battle scenes and emotional scenes so awkward?

I feel like the protagonist is a bit useless and has a useless mentality. And why is it always (cold, shaking) that the ground is cold and understandable, shaking? What kind of car are you lying on? Earthquake?

Author, you said that Journey to the West should not use settings such as The Great Desolation, and then you used Bajie, Daluo, Wukong Taiyi. . . . Isn't the setting that Da Luo Taiyi is strongly related to the realm added after the ancient times. The original works of Da Luo and Taiyi have never been related to the realm. They refer to things similar to professional title prefixes, such as: provincial first-class universities and the Central XX Research Institute. Daluo and Taiyi are similar to the titles of "provincial direct" and "xx" to distinguish different majors, and are not directly related to combat power and realm.

There are a lot of people, but there are zero monthly tickets

How can I live with this book? I'm in tears.

Just read the first five chapters, write a dozen or so words, and put a few hundred words in parentheses. Is it because you have a brain problem? Are you afraid that people who have read the novel for more than ten years will not be able to understand it?

How many books has the author written, including Ma Jia? It looks like this is a series, can I connect?

Write a dozen or so words at the beginning and then a series of several hundred words of settings. Do you really not know how to write a book? Is this what the setting says?

Yuanyue's copy copied a lot of the original text of another book.

Listening to the book is fine, if you are reading the book, it would be too abrupt to complain.

Wc, it turns out that the otaku era is his...