Investigator

When I saw Chapter 10 running a group article, it was quite interesting to see how the author failed. The roundness is okay, the writing is good The second failure, this, the author is a bit weird Three failures? ? ? Four failures? ? ? ? Five failures? ? ? ? ? Originally, the reason why group novels are so niche is that their contingency makes it difficult for the author to deal with. The reader's sense of involvement often explodes due to a major failure of the protagonist and the author's forced explanation. The author who is lucky will be chosen by God throughout the whole plot, which is natural, but the author who is unlucky will be wiped out at the beginning (various hints) Like the first plot, even if it is useful or not, it has failed so many times in a row that it is too late to complete the story. I always feel that if the protagonist has just a few more chapters, he can start his next life. And sometimes, depending on one's own status, knowledge can solve the problem but it still fails. The author is too fond of gambling. It's like looking for something. Normally, shouldn't you look for it yourself first? Wouldn't it be more appropriate to search again if you can't find it? It's not a secret project, and it's said to be in line with the reality of life, but in the end, everything needs to be done first. What about a person's subjective initiative? Isn't this just turning a running group into words and writing it down? The selected d time is too frequent and life-like, not critical, and there is no feeling that I am also looking forward to it. If it succeeds, there will be no fluctuation in my heart. If it fails, I will only see the protagonist complaining without any feeling of turning the tide. To put it simply, it gives people a feeling of "Oh, I passed" and "Oh shit, I failed again, forget it, go home."

In fact, if it is really a running group. Suggested endings and the final game are also given by dice. In fact, a very interesting problem in real-world running groups is the opposition between destiny and human destiny. But it seems that there is no intention to start in this direction. Dice are still the only powerful setting. Apart from using dice, the protagonist will neither succeed nor fail. Using a sieve forces success or failure. Then all daily actions are performed within the dice framework. . . The usability of such novels and outlines, even if they are written in a modular format, will conflict with the purpose of the novel itself. A thorough running team should use dice to decide every decision every day, and obviously there is no way to write a book like this. And if the use of dice is decided by the protagonist, then when there are many things that should not be thrown by throwing dice but should be done by oneself, one should also decide to work hard by oneself. However, this book seems to completely deny the effectiveness of self-learning when explaining skill points. Here is another question: If this is the case, how do basic attribute points such as otaku knowledge and physical chemistry skill points come from? Didn't you learn it too? Otherwise, the achievements of the protagonist mentioned at the beginning, such as paper making, toilets, rice, etc. . I can't believe he was able to do it by rolling dice and constantly making decisions. Each decision involved in these things is relatively complex and cannot be solved with one investment. If a successful scientific research requires about 10 successes with a probability of 0.5 Each time, then the probability of ten consecutive successes will be 0.5^10, ​​Which is one in 1024, which is about a probability of 0.001. What's more, the probability of the protagonist once being less than 1/2, then it is obvious that almost every one of these things cannot be successful, if it is really determined by rolling dice. Therefore, I think the inconsistent feeling seen at the beginning may not be caused by the dice. It's that the protagonist has obviously made great achievements, but he still relies heavily on the dice and throws the dice when encountering difficulties. This is completely inconsistent with his own achievements and the decisiveness that his status should have, as well as the absurdly high probability of failure brought by the dice itself.

This book is more in line with my taste than the new book published by the author outside the station. Running Group Panel Prehistoric

Where is Su Daji?

Those people with merit from heaven become immortals and ancestors in a matter of minutes, and it is the so-called merit from heaven, but in the end, when the protagonist is here, he is still a mortal, a novice? Are the virtues of heaven so useless now?

Feng Xue started human immortal martial arts

I just started reading What is the data source of this sieve throwing, or what is the basis of the setting? It's a bit hard to understand. Does anyone understand the settings in this book? Please explain it to me. If I continue to read it, I think I will be persuaded to quit.

Medicine 1/27 (Great Success) A golden light fell from the sky and went straight into the cauldron in front of Feng Xue. "Boom!" A stream of medicinal fragrance burst out from the cauldron, condensed into the shape of Ganoderma lucidum in the air, and then exploded quickly! Suddenly the earth returned to spring, and the grass revived! In an instant, an indescribable feeling surrounded Feng Xue. It was like seeing the black cat Setu in the group after staying up late to update the article. The hard work paid off! Feng Xue knew at that moment - penicillin was successful! …… Far away in the Fire Cloud Cave, a man in yellow robe suddenly raised his head. "Another great sage has been born in our human race!" ... Thousands of miles away from where Feng Xue was, several "people" wearing clothes that were obviously different from this era appeared out of thin air. "This world is "The Great Evil God in Ancient Times". According to the prompts from the space, the Great Evil God is still a mortal now. We must stop him before he refines the "Innate Penicillium Human Completion Pill" into an external elixir and becomes a "Weird Immortal"!" "We must stop him! Otherwise, in a hundred days, the "Sic Niang Heavenly Way" will replace the Heavenly Way, and then we will be finished..."

The main character is quite interesting but he was dragged down by the author.

Praise the classics seen in the group

The author's luck is simply outrageous. He doesn't get what he wants. He helps the protagonist to be unlucky and deceives the protagonist to get lucky. I almost want to drag the author to gamble. If the author bets big, I will bet small. I'm sure to win.

Damn it, I read someone else said that Zhai Nan's dice at the beginning of this book made the protagonist die for four lifetimes, and I thought it was four consecutive big failures - but it turned out that this mud horse had eight consecutive big failures at the beginning! 😰

The author's actual writing style is not bad. The story design is very interesting, but it's all about driving high and going low. The introduction of the opening design structure of each story is very good. It was just my damn luck that I chose to roll the dice. Then what was originally a very good design was completely ruined due to inexplicable luck. The story that could have been continued was immediately discontinued. Severe sense of rupture. A good story, with an anticlimactic end and a muddled ending. Causing all sorts of unhappiness. Many of the possible choices set up by the author have to roll a dice, and then disgusting things happen. And it gets more and more wrong later on, and the background settings all deviate. Overall, this is a background setting score of 9. 8 Points for character design. Story design: 8 points. A story with 5 points for story continuity and 0 points for story reading fluency. All I can say is that throwing dice really depends on the person. Maoke also writes novels based on head dice, but because of the various reversals of Shining, the story is very unique. And everyone actually invested in the group. The author's hands are so bad that every time he rolls the dice, he always chooses the worst direction. There is really no way.

I discovered that when it comes to dice luck, it really means death from drought and death from waterlogging. The author's dice calculation is relatively low. As for the super Indian poster next door, that is a big success in a row - can you believe that the same dice repeatedly rolled out 6 big successes?

Feng Xue's four failed introductions coincided with the original setting of "the stronger Feng Xue's divine system, the worse off other Feng Xue will be."

After reading this book, this book is a story about filial sons dividing their family property and running away. Among them, Ying Zheng and the protagonist robbed the most. The protagonist not only robbed the old father (Pangu)'s largest property but also buried him. The son who suffered the worst was Daozu 😏😏

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Here is a chapter of the Cthulhu style See the pure Cthulhu style

From what I said next door, the author's reality seems quite miserable? The 2008 earthquake seriously injured the author. They were all sentenced to death by the attending doctor, but miraculously cured. . Although I am still in a wheelchair

It's not that some people are outrageous. This is how running a group is originally. If the dice girl doesn't let you pass, you just can't pass, unless the kp shows off. It was originally a running team, but the script was set in the prehistoric times. Where do so many problems come from? Doesn't the author make everything very clear in his book?

This book is classified as Xianxia, ​​but after reading it, I feel that the setting of "Xianxia" is just a background. It is essentially a suspense and decryption novel. It is more appropriate for the author to make the book a suspense genre. Adding the word "Xianxia" is not a way to gain popularity.

Although it is fully booked, the author's dice luck is really troublesome. I suggest that people who don't really like coc running groups should not click on this novel at all🤫

As long as there is Feng Xue in this world, more experimental products named "Zuozi" will be born, so it is recommended to get more ╭(●｀∀′●)╯

No matter how much the author tries to improve his worldview, he can't change the fact that the world has become smaller. It's really awkward to go from the primitive world to the young people on campus. Even in modern times, the protagonist should climb to the top of the Himalayas as a mortal, skydive in the Yarlung Tsang Grand Canyon, go diving in the Mariana Trench, fight through the Hunger Games on the way, and blow up the dimensional killing array. Is that really what God said? Tell Him that my word is the truth. Going to school on campus? I still can't figure out why you are in school. I can accept it if you find a way to find a way to a shrine in Mount Fuji and work as a sweeper.

The setting is interesting. The writing style is also good, but, if you say it's Kewen, it's not Kewen, and it's not like cultivating immortals. It's also a demonic version of Honghuang, so it's good in every way, but I can't stand it if I put it together and I don't know what to do. Maybe the plot is too bland. . . Life has been very uneventful. I can't stand this kind of bland article 🔨

The golden spirit of the running team The golden spirit does not necessarily mean how good you can fight, but being able to stay awake by your will even when you are in the jo escort and then call someone to inherit your legacy (dog head)

I think this book is quite interesting. Why are there so few people reading it?

The story is good, but it's just too dull. After writing the settings, I still have to explain the settings, and after explaining the settings, I still have to complain about the settings. One chapter is watery for most of the chapter, which is a waste of starting points.

The writing is quite good, I finished reading it, but I have to complain The author's luck with dice is so bad. Although every article in it is preparing for a good article in the early stage, it has always been because of the dice. In the later stage, it often fails to burst out and rushes to the next life. It sounds like it is called Cun Zhi, but it sounds bad. Unfinished In future writing about dice, can we limit the consequences of dice, or not throw in all possibilities, or throw more dice as a remedy according to the severity of the consequences of the event. If that doesn't work, at least recycle the cool foreshadowing before starting to expand. Although I know there is an outline to support it, but not using the cool points that were foreshadowed really affects the perception.

The author is actually a prophet