Two-Dimensional Card System

Damn it, Devil Fruit users are afraid of sea water because there is salt in sea water. First of all, it is said in the anime. Secondly, when fighting Crocodile, the water broke all over Crocodile before defeating Crocodile. Also, when fighting Moonlight Moria, Moria's fruit power was broken with salt. All of these indicate that they are afraid of sea water, not to mention that it is very clear in the comics. If you don't understand, just look it up and then write.

I've only read three chapters and already want to complain. Can't Jiraiya see where the protagonist was injured? The protagonist is the son of Jiraiya's friend, and the protagonist's parents are dead. How could Jiraiya allow the protagonist to be beaten every day. How could the Uchiha clan be jealous of the protagonist living in Jiraiya's house? And when did Uzumaki Kushina become Mito's granddaughter, the granddaughter of the ninja god?

System personification is the biggest poisonous point The protagonist's skills are all given by the system. Without the system, he would be beaten to death by a child, and he would not be able to live like a normal person. In other words, the protagonist is a waste that cannot live without the system.

I just read the introduction and felt that I didn't want to watch it anymore. Kaio Fist vs. Hachimen Dunjia felt like adults bullying children.

Come, let me detoxify you. To put it simply, if you can finish reading it, you can basically survive for a long time at the starting point.

If it weren't for the main character's name, I wouldn't have abandoned the book

Supporting character's name and strength persuade him to quit 🙂

After reading Chapter 6, I have a few words to say. The skinny camel is bigger than the horse, which means the one with red eyes. Does the author think too highly of ordinary ninja school students? Even taijutsu cannot require as much chakra as Xiao Li (Xiao Li is older than those in the same group). Sasuke bottomed out with the Fireball Blue once during school. This is already a genius. So even if the pink eye family has not opened their eyes, it is impossible to have as much chakra. Have you never seen Obito? Those red-eyed sidekicks are at most a little stronger than the genin Obito, but the protagonist's predecessor was killed for nothing? Also, the protagonist has obviously trained his body, but he is a squishy one. Has his training over the years gone so far as to be like a dog? Once you have a golden finger, you will immediately become a master. You don't need to be a civil and military expert like Minato Namikaze, but at least you need to be a theoretical master like Sakura! Is the memory of the predecessor of the Jonin School filled with water?

Let me tell you my thoughts after reading the beginning of nearly a hundred chapters, which can be regarded as a test for all book friends. 1. The first few pictures can probably be seen from the text. When I first wrote it, I probably started this book because I like girls and show off. For example, when I got the dragon-slaying magic, I said that Natsu's dragon-slaying magic is definitely a powerful tool for flirting with girls. 2. A little impatient. It feels like I want to create a big scene but the writing is a bit hasty. Many local bugs have not been filled in. Moreover, the author's names are indeed useless. For example, homophonic names such as Uchiha Kento, Sabi, and Erhao may have made me laugh before, but as the saying goes, if you play too many jokes, you will get tired of reading them, and some children will be discouraged from reading them. 3. The character's personality is not stereotyped at all, as if every female character will transform into a personality suitable for conquering her. It is inexplicably awkward to see it this way. 4. The show-off scene looks really awkward 😰. I'm not blaming the author. This awkward way of writing does make me feel numb. 5. It feels like the protagonist is like a box, with all his abilities stuffed into it. I have also written a few embarrassing articles, but they all failed. I am not as good as the author in insisting on this point, but it is true that this kind of duck-filling method is a bit painful for people to read. I just took it. When it comes to the red dragon hand, there is another dragon-slaying magic. Before the dragon-slaying magic is warmed up, the Zanpakutō comes again. It feels like I have obtained these abilities just to look cool. As the kind of person who wants to take myself into the perspective of the protagonist when reading a book, it is indeed a bit uncomfortable to read. Although it is cool, it is awkward. These are probably some of my general thoughts after reading the first hundred chapters. I don't know if the author's writing has improved after that. It may be that I have read too many books to develop my appetite. In fact, I was a little embarrassed after reading it, so I resigned.

I've only read three chapters. It's extremely poisonous. How can you still feel so good despite being beaten every day? Got beaten and still in the mood to make wisecracks? Cheap or not!

The author can't tell the difference between kunai and shuriken, and doesn't know the names of various settings, so he writes blindly.

All kinds of forces come in randomly, and it makes people brainstorm. I can't understand the expression of those forces at all, that is, I can't understand what the author wrote.

The protagonist's name is Izayoi Zhang Ye. . . . . . . . . . . .

The details are rough, the plot is bloody, and it is written for novices.

I have to accept it, the author is forcefully trying to persuade me to quit! ! Too poisonous

I was persuaded to withdraw after three chapters... The name is too sexy

Fantasy novel? Not a sense of déjà vu?

Just watched. There won't be college students doing things that only elementary school students and junior high school students do, right?

I watched the Naruto arc very well, but I had no choice but to travel through the world of Masks. Brother, I have no interest in Masked Fighting at all, so I gave up 🤐

Chapter 4 Those Uchiha names are a bit...

In traditional cool novels, the villain's IQ has dropped, and various irrationalities can be used to show off and slap him in the face at any time. Many people can't stand it.

Well, I probably took a look. How to say it? In terms of writing power, it can be said that there is none. Describe it in one sentence; a primary school student's composition.

"Too many typos! The name is not elegant and too rude!

When I see the ending, I want to say that your insistence, author, is actually to insist on charging no matter how bad the writing is!

This kind of novel is so poisonous. I have to step on all the thunder. Where is the author's brain?

I came across this book by chance, and after reading twenty-three chapters, I suddenly quit being addicted. I suggest everyone be brave and give it a try 😜