A Beautiful Woman

I can't stand it anymore after reading more than 90 chapters. There are too many jokes. The elder brother takes his grandson to visit the 13-year-old heroine's house. Isn't there any protection between men and women? The heroine's second uncle is appointed as the county magistrate of Fujian. Is Fujian a county in the story? After returning to Beijing, he wanted the hostess to find a concubine and enter the Hanlin Academy. How can someone who has never participated in the imperial examination become a shujishi? What rank of official position does a shujishi have? The heroine's home is the Dingguo Palace. The Dingguo Palace appears countless times in the article. What the hell is it? Moreover, all the current people in the Dingguo Duke's mansion are civil servants, and the heroine's grandfather is actually the elder of the cabinet. Isn't Duke Dingguo a noble person? How can one rule a country without military power? Is the country decided by words? What kind of concubine is the concubine of the eldest son of the Hou family? Pay back two. Is there any son of the prince named Shisun? What does the maid call the heroine "eldest girl"? I have seen eldest lady, eldest lady, and this is the first time I have seen the name eldest lady. In addition, the scene jumps inexplicably. For example, when two people are talking, after the author adds a background introduction, the next step inexplicably changes to a few days later. What about half of what was originally said? I thought I skipped a chapter, so I read it several times. There are many such places. Fortunately, I bought it for 100 chapters, so I wasted 20 chapters of money.

The biggest problem is that the heroine Xin Xie clearly cares about her family. Because her mother Xin Xie comes from a wealthy family, everyone says the heroine is the daughter of the Xie family. Even my girlfriend's uncle said this? ? ? Is the heroine's father a wife? Obviously he lives in his father's talisman? ? And the heroine also feels that she is the daughter of the Xie family. Are you sick? You say you love your father but you don't think you are a family girl? ?

Concubine Cheng is still very resourceful, using both soft and hard tactics. It's no wonder that the heroine was defeated by his scheme in her previous life.

I hope the author will be more rigorous in writing books in the future, and not ignore the rationality of the character just to follow the trend and make it easier for people to see. The character of the heroine's mother, Xie, is from a century-old family, with very good rules and education. She is also very smart, good at housekeeping, and most of the people she serves are sincere people brought from her parents' family. She also favors boys over girls, and will ignore that the heroine's focus is on the heroine's younger brother. For such a person, the heroine's younger brother's yard is messy In this situation, the wet nurse is controlling the heroine's brother, saying that she can't leave the yard if she can't. Seeing that her sister wants to sneak out, all the maids in the brother's yard are irregular, as if all the maids don't know this man. As the future heir to Duke Dingguo's mansion, she doesn't take Xie seriously at all, but as I said at the beginning, all the maids are very respectful to the heroine, because the heroine's parents are the future masters of the mansion The heroine's mother seems to have no son in her life. She doesn't care whether there is a sincere person around her young son, and she doesn't care about what her son's life is like. She allows a wet nurse to climb over her son casually Not every reborn heroine needs to save a younger brother and teach a lot of disobedient servants in the brother's yard. This does not make the heroine particularly awesome, it only shows that the heroine's family is about to end. The heroine's house is so weak that it makes me angry. Originally I wanted to ignore it, but every time you write about the mistress teaching her principles and how to deal with things, I can't ignore the character of Mr. Xie at all.

Speaking of which, Wang Youjun is not important. . . I think it is more important that Xiao Yan (crossed out 🤭) cannot marry a good wife! Let them be exposed! Expose it! No high-ranking family will marry their daughters to a sick and weak prince who has his own heart 🤓 PS: My irresponsible guess~ Zhao Maola loves power so much, it would be great if Ping Yi gave Xiao Jiu a concubine. . I always think Wang Youjun occupies the position of the principal concubine very well! (This guy's fighting ability is relatively poor, but she is protected by Xiao Jiu, so if there is a powerful concubine from a famous family, she will not be able to fight her for a while; and the concubine being occupied will definitely hinder Xiao Jiu from attracting civil servants and generals. The conflict between his sweetheart and the throne will occur over time ~ ahem ~)

After reading the previous 25 chapters, the character of the heroine's mother is "a shrewd daughter of a wealthy family + patriarchal preference", and I don't see any shrewdness at all.

The plot is very clichéd and has nothing new. Rebirth stories follow the same routine: unjust death → rebirth → seeing a (good or bad) maid → protecting the younger brother → meeting the sisters → meeting the old lady…

All the plots are exactly the same as Phoenix Returning to the Nest! The names in the article have been changed, the dynasties have been changed, are there any other changes? I just don't know if the Phoenix Returns to the Nest now or this book came first?

I feel like there is something wrong with the introduction. "Assistant" is not suitable to be used in the heroine's situation. After all, the heroine was just a pitiful and incompetent puppet in her previous life. She does not have great power. Only those with power can assist. She has no power and cannot assist regardless of her identity!

Wang Youjun and Xiao Yan can be considered to be in love with each other. As long as they don't base their happiness on the pain of others, there is nothing wrong with it.