Winter Snow Like Brocade

The writing is not good, there is no priority in the writing, I wrote so many chapters even after I left the capital, and the number of words is the same... It's so verbose, and I have to explain trivial psychological activities. I really don't want to know what passerby C is thinking!

I originally wanted to keep watching, but I really couldn't hold on anymore. Didn't the heroine already know that his father was unreliable? But she still clings to the illusion that if she is not tough enough, don't blame others for bullying her. She is about to be exiled, and the author's focus is actually on house fighting? I originally thought it was an exile article, but it turned out that the author kept describing the disgustingness of the concubine and the concubine's scumbag father. I wanted to know that even if his daughter let out two maids, his father would have to take care of him? You have nothing to do! Moreover, the heroine did not resist after her rebirth. The author can say that the heroine only lived for an extra twenty days before her rebirth. It can be said that the heroine was not smart before, and it is impossible for her to become very smart after her rebirth. But after the heroine is reborn, she cannot even protect herself, so why is she reborn?

Thinking about it, the male protagonist paid attention to the heroine's uncle for saving his life a few years ago, so he started to pay attention before the accident. After the accident, he directly married his wife to repay the favor, not because he liked her very much... The heroine's suspicion was correct. There are not so many people who want to get married as soon as they meet... Only by being independent can you live well...

The writing is too wordy. There are many descriptions of psychological activities and so on. There is no need to write so much.

I felt very depressed. I thought that after the heroine's house was raided, she would turn to farming and solve the problems in her family. But the author made a stroke of genius and got married directly. Married...

There is a problem between this couple. The male protagonist probably married the female protagonist because of the dispute with the heroine's uncle. He thought that he had given sincerity and the heroine should treat him with sincerity, but it is obvious that the heroine does not trust him and is depressed. The heroine married the talented male hero under that situation, and she felt anxious and uneasy. She had no confidence and no backing. When faced with the kindness of the hero to her, she felt like receiving charity, grateful and thankful, but not at ease.

Especially procrastinating and long-winded... The character of the person inside is weird.

There are so few updates now! Time is messy again

Too slow to update, end of Torah.

The author is too verbose, giving various explanations of big and small things, no matter the priority, which makes people anxious.

I feel like it's divided into sections and piled up, and I'm not in the mood to continue reading at all.

The plot is too procrastinating, and it takes more than ninety chapters before the house is raided. The heroine is too stupid. She's still so useless after more than ninety chapters. Give up!

Since the love between father and daughter has long been gone, and it has been clearly seen that there is no one in his father's heart, and the past life is clear, why did he still kneel for that hour? In order to highlight that the heroine is a kind person, since he wants to save himself, why not just break away and sever the relationship between father and daughter, and take the opportunity to leave with his younger brother. I don't seem to be watching this anymore.

The heroine is as humble and petty as a concubine in her husband's house! He didn't dare to offend the cousins ​​who were originally mountain wolves in Gu's family. He was too cautious and overcautious! No wonder you are being bullied!

I don't think you need to worry about them. People who save themselves save themselves. All they need to do is teach them what to do. You are despising yourself. If you stand out, if something happens behind you, you will still be blamed. There is no need.

It's so long-winded. Let's analyze why someone could write tens of thousands of words back and forth even if they knew the heroine couldn't get pregnant, and it was all dialogue. . .

Spring, summer, autumn and winter, cold comes and summer comes

It's not a cool novel with a great heroine, but it's a bit of a domestic fight, with a slow pace, and those who lack patience or don't like gentleness and frustration, please be careful! The heroine is a local rebirth. She was timid and cowardly in her previous life. From a family incident to her death on the way to betrothed, she was immediately reborn in just over 20 days. Therefore, after her rebirth, the heroine's business or ability to do things has not improved much, and she has no golden fingers! I thought the focus of the story was how the heroine prepared in advance and actively responded to the upcoming confiscation of her home and her brother's life. After saving her and her brother's lives, she embarked on the road of self-improvement through border farming and rise. . Of course, preparations were made before the house was confiscated, but it seemed to focus more on the daily struggle with the female family members of the Hou family and the father's concubines, as well as the married life after the house was ransacked and the hero rescued the beauty. . Although it is a bit different from the expected story, the author Jun's writing style is not bad, but the heroine gave up because she didn't like it.

I've been watching for many days, but I still haven't seen any house raids. If I don't run a house raid, I'll just have to play house fighting >_<

My house was ransacked today, how can I escape?

This should be considered the end of the foreshadowing! The plot about the heroine is about to unfold, I'm looking forward to it! Recommended every day

Important characters are the last to appear, so the hero who saves the beauty must be delayed until the end, and everything in the front is all foreshadowing.

One monthly pass, there will be many updates on the shelves.

A monthly ticket, a special arrangement to celebrate the author's birthday. The heroine may be able to wash away the bad luck since her rebirth.

I'll give you a monthly pass. No more extras.

Could it be that this military advisor is not the male protagonist's biological father?

It's nice to have icing on the cake, but it's even more rare to provide help in times of need. The heroine has these best friends and former mothers, and most importantly, the hero. It's really good.

It is this kind of imposition that is even more disgusting. The heroine should refuse it outright. Although reputation is important, it is putting the cart before the horse to cause trouble for oneself because of reputation.

These two maids will definitely cause trouble

Am I the Virgin? I really didn't expect Brother Xu to take action so quickly.