The Zither Immortal

A male protagonist who's completely out of the blue, a love that's completely out of the blue, a romance plot that's completely out of the blue—can't he just focus on cultivating immortality and getting stronger?

This is the most arrogant male protagonist I've ever seen, a devilish Yang who acts like a dragon overlord?

Many novels have good ideas, but the authors lack writing skills. They write about everything in detail, like a diary entry, without knowing how to simplify or streamline. They write many chapters but don't deliver any useful plot points. By then, the readers are already impatient.

I really enjoy reading stories with male leads, but this one disgusted me. He appeared out of nowhere and was clingy from the moment he appeared. I wanted to punch him. The story would probably be much better without a male lead.

I've never seen such a disgusting male lead before. He's so arrogant. I want to curse whenever I see such a disgusting guy.

So far it looks alright. I checked the book reviews, and apparently there's romance involved, but I haven't seen the male lead yet. Personally, I don't really like long romance sequences or the male lead appearing too early in long stories like this. It's fine if they just end up together at the end. This is just my personal opinion, but best of luck to the author!

You're amazing! You wrote so much. I'm already struggling to keep going after only 50,000 words. I'm speechless. I'm rooting for you! Keep it up, and I wish your book great success!

This book is terrible! While it's understandable that the author wrote so much, a good book's success isn't about word count, but about the plot. Too many glaring plot points have already driven me away. But I really want to give the author some advice: the inexplicable romance is unnecessary.

Author, please reduce the male lead's screen time; he's disgusting. He's so self-righteous, offering no help whatsoever and only causing trouble.

When she first transmigrated, she had a cold and unapproachable expressionless face. Her personality changed so much. Anyone would think there was something wrong with her, right? Why didn't she keep a low profile when she first arrived? She offended one person after another, clearly no match for the main family, yet she still showed off her power. It would be a miracle if the main family didn't eliminate her completely. I feel her mother was indirectly killed by her.