The Zither Immortal

Inexplicable male protagonist, inexplicable love, inexplicable love plot, can't you cultivate immortality and become stronger?

This is the most self-righteous male protagonist I have ever seen, a ghost Yang who looks like a dragon.

In fact, in many novels, the author's ideas are good, but his writing skills are not good enough. He writes everything down to the smallest details, with the same running account, and does not know how to cut out the complex and simplify it. He writes many chapters without any useful plot. But by this time the readers were already impatient.

I really like reading stories with a male protagonist, but this male protagonist makes me really sick. He appears out of nowhere and becomes clingy as soon as he comes out. I really want to hit him. This story might be a lot better without a male protagonist.

I have never seen such a disgusting male protagonist. He is so self-righteous. I want to curse when I see this disgusting man appear.

So far it looks okay. I checked the book review section and it is said that it has a romance, but I haven't seen the male protagonist yet. In fact, I personally don't like long stories like this to have a long love story or a male protagonist appearing too early. It would be nice if they were together at the end. This is purely a personal opinion, but I still want to give it a thumbs up

You are so awesome for writing so much. I've only written 50,000 yuan and I can't hold on anymore. I won't say anything more, I support you, come on, I hope the book becomes a hit!

This book poisoned me. Although it is not easy to write so many words, the word count for a good book to get good results is not about the word count. In the plot, there are too many clues and I have been forced to quit. But I really want to give the author some advice: There is no need for inexplicable feelings. You have marked the story about a strong female character. However, the heroine throughout the book made me feel that she cannot judge the situation and only blindly pretends to be cold. , It's okay to pretend, but the heroine's pretending makes me sick with embarrassment, and her character is always broken, and she does a lot of stupid things, sometimes cold and sometimes holy, I'm really drunk, and the male protagonist and male co-star are also... It feels like it's love at first sight, the love comes so inexplicably, I originally thought it was a good strong female cultivator, but this plot makes me feel like the heroine is like a novice, too immature. The writing style is great, and some of the descriptions are pretty good. I really like the setting of the white useless soul piano player. Alas... I quit.

Author, please give the male lead less of a role. It's so disgusting. He's so self-righteous that it doesn't help at all. It's all trouble.

When I first traveled through time, I had an expression that was cold and unapproachable. With such a drastic change in personality, everyone would find it problematic, right? Don't you keep a low profile when you first come here? Offended one after another, obviously unable to withstand my family, and still showing off my sharpness. If I don't eradicate the roots, I will be damned. Her mother feels that she was indirectly killed by her.