Immortal Anonymity

I couldn't stand it after reading three chapters. The protagonist can go to the sea to catch dragons and go up to the mountains to hunt tigers at the age of ten. It's not a matter of ability. You can improve the abilities of the monster supporting characters so that there is resistance. Such stories are interesting,

I feel that the protagonist is not suitable to be an immortal cultivator. He likes to meddle in other people's business and do justice, so he might as well go to the secular world and become a hero!

Tao: Condensing Qi, Building Foundation, Golden Pill, Nascent Soul, Transforming God. Buddha: consecration, enlightenment, relics, pure appearance, nirvana. Demon: Qi refining, demon body, demon elixir, demon infant, and spirit transformation. Demon: Gathering Qi, Demonic Body, Demonic Pill, Demonic Infant, Transformation into Saint. Ghost: Soul Refining, Soul Condensation, Soul Pill, Soul Infant, Return to the Void. Beast: Enlightenment, psychic, wise, shape-shifting, profound.

Recently, there is a book shortage, so I accidentally clicked on your book. I just read the first chapter and I can sense the author's potential. Come on. But in fact, as a 20-year old bookworm, I still feel that the author's youthfulness and immaturity make it impossible to read. Many places read very poorly. 1 "Be loved by everyone in the village" should be changed to "Very well loved by everyone in the village" or "Loved by everyone in the village" 2 "You will get stronger when you get older" ~ It is really rare to say "you will get stronger when you get old" before adding "you are a few years ago", I think it is better to keep it simple It is written as "the body and bones were strong in the early years" 3 "often carefully taught" should be changed to "carefully taught" or "often taught" 4 "left and right in the mountains and forests" maybe... It should be changed to "walking through the mountains and forests" is enough. There are many more that I won't list one by one. In short, there are many small things that affect the reading experience. These subtleties could have been avoided if the author had been more careful. I feel that since it is my first time to write an article, I should strive for excellence and develop good habits. One family's opinion, for reference only.

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First of all, the setting is not good and there are too many escape chapters. , Depressing Secondly, there are too many sects. There are so many sects in the new book, and the relationship is messy. Who can read so many novels and study so much? If you don't study, you really can't understand. How can you have such a good memory? You can read Ergen's book. Knowing that he was abandoned by the sect, he didn't run away, but he still wanted to save people. The main thing was that he had no relationship with them, so he killed a few insignificant people.

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Hello Sir, your comment scares me to death! It's fun to watch the world of immortality, isn't it? Don't worry, my sister will give you a Death Pill. Even if you die, you won't be afraid, as long as you have enough breath left to resurrect! La la la! 😁😁😁

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There is also Thunder Tribulation in the Small Realm of Foundation Establishment. After reading so many books, this is the first one with such a setting. Thunder Tribulation is too worthless.

I couldn't stand it after reading the second chapter. An ordinary ten-year-old kid killed a big tiger. What did the author think?

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Chapter 62: Then it's okay if Li Yun'er doesn't save her. Normally, the favor of saving a life should be promised with one's own body. It's fine if you don't allow it. If you don't understand something, you have to follow the authority. You yell and make rude remarks there. You should rape first and then kill.

The character's personality is a bit like Jin Yong's novels

Seeing Thirty-One The setting of the secret city is indeed as what a book friend said in this chapter. It is impossible to sustain the idea of ​​making money Since you want to steal the protagonist's things and you have an intermediate talisman, why should you kill and kill and let the protagonist use the talisman?

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Haha, my old friend is still hiding his name, he needs to make his name known~!