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Pfft, let me tell you, author, even if Chongzhen had military power, he couldn't have eliminated the eunuch faction. Chongzhen should have eliminated the powerful clans instead. These clans were like autonomous regions in the provinces; aside from counties and towns, they controlled most areas. You think having military power makes you fearless? Do you even have a powerful clan?

The paragraphs are too long, it's tiring to read. Is this how sentences are broken up? So densely packed...

Thank you all for your support. To be honest, I wanted to give up many times while writing this book because, as you all have said, it's not very well written, and the average daily subscriptions haven't even reached 200 yet. When it was first released, it didn't even have 100 average daily subscriptions. But it is your support and encouragement that has kept me going until today.

This is too verbose, I can't stand it... A single tank external armor test has taken four or five chapters... It goes from the 75mm gun, increasing the caliber step by step, to over 100mm... Of course, for the sake of rigor, the tests have to be conducted this way... But the problem is, you can't write it like this...

Sorry, I only read one chapter before commenting! It's ridiculous to say that the Ming Dynasty was unified because the eunuch faction was eliminated! Honestly, if Emperor Chongzhen hadn't killed Wei Zhongxian, the Ming Dynasty probably would have lasted a few more years!

Too many typos, disjointed sentences, and overly long paragraphs.

The writing is terrible, there are too many typos, it's embarrassing to read, and the worldview is too narrow.

This book is exhausting to read. Not only are the paragraphs long, but the word order is also problematic. It's often disjointed and poorly written, with frequent typos and misspellings. The language is also incredibly rambling; what could be said in a simple sentence is stretched into two or three. It's so cringeworthy it's almost given me a stomachache. I've decided to give up on it.

Leaving aside the poor writing style, just look at the Chinese characters – tons of typos! And forget about speaking Mandarin from childhood, even starting elementary school, the author still manages to make the sentences incoherent. To write over a million words like that is truly remarkable.

The first chapter describes how Emperor Chongzhen eliminated the eunuch faction, thus preventing the downfall of the country. That's damn simple.