There's Something Wrong with My Devil Fruit

I can't do it, I can't do it... I endured the poison and read about ten chapters... I couldn't suppress it anymore... A mouthful of old blood came back... And it sprayed all over the screen... What is the protagonist's ability? ! It's so fucking wet! I wipe it! And I simply can't complain about this name... Every time I see the three words Bai Yina, I instantly get into trouble... She is obviously a big-ass girl... Author, how perverted and multi-tongued you are...

The author has real taste. . . Quite heavy!

After the poisonous identification was completed, he was able to lust after a ten-year-old girl, even kissed the corpse, and later changed his name to a woman. The protagonist did not travel through time and was only nine years old. This is a complete ghost! I've been poisoned to death, and I still haven't finished my night shift yet! I'm so hungry.

Comments are very effective in persuading people to quit 😂 But I am not afraid of death. As a starting point Shennong, I have the courage to try and I started.

This is the best pirate fanfic I have ever seen (๑>؂<๑)

The opening is novel and well drawn. But I can't help the reader's imagination. In other words, I don't feel anything when I look at it.

Damn, this book is so irritating! ! ! !

Look, I really don't want to travel through time. It was put on the shelf and I came here to find a nickname for the author 😃

I just read this book, but I already know the main character's devil fruit abilities. Just wanted to ask you. Has the protagonist ever slept with a man in the future?

So, has Kuina been resurrected?

I heard this book is very poisonous, I'll give it a try (つд⊂)

Chapter 1 What's going on⊙∀⊙? Can anyone explain?

After reading your comments, I am even more excited.

I'm so scared after reading the comments...

When I saw the part where I touched my mother-in-law, I couldn't stand it anymore. .

What misunderstandings might the author have about light novels?

What do you think? 🤫 The girl at the beginning was obviously killed by a navy girl, it has nothing to do with the protagonist! Everyone spread rumors that the protagonist was dead

I just read the first two chapters, and I have some thoughts that I don't like. Basically all the OP fans who write about Gu Yina will talk about how talented she is, and many even directly say that her talent is above SL. But is her talent really that great? The arguments of OP fan authors are nothing more than Gu Yina's crushing of SL. But this crushing is not convincing at all! First, Gu Yina is larger than SL, and women develop earlier than men. At that time, Gu Yina was already a teenager (the dumplings were bigger than walnuts...), While SL was just a toddler at the time! "Junior high school students" beat up kindergarten children, what is there to be proud of? . . Second, Gu Yina has worked very hard to learn swordsmanship since she was a child, and everyone who looks at OP knows what SL is like. Third, Gu Yina could still win SL before she died, but she could no longer talk about crushing her. Genshiro has never really looked at Gu Yina's talent. You can think it is pure discrimination. But in the case of such a sharp contrast (Gu Yina crushes adults), this is still the case. Is it really just prejudice? ! This is his daughter, and he loves Gu Yina a lot. . . OP's non-fruit powerhouse is body + heart, which is the source of domineering power. Not to mention Gu Yina's physical talent, she doesn't think much of herself. As for her heart, is there any fact that can prove that his will can be compared with SL? ! No, at least not in the original work. On the contrary, after being frustrated, she still needs SL's guidance to stand up again.

Xiaosheng admires the author so much (just kidding). Whether in reality or in the text, he insists on frantically testing on the verge of death (such as being repeatedly 404 or the setting of the protagonist's fruit ability and the ending, etc.). If other people's poison is something that they don't even want to see, the author's poison is something that can arouse some people's interest in trying it (purely a personal joke)

You can continue writing about your daily life, it's quite nice.

Wow. It turns out it belongs to Sister Jiao, no wonder

A bit poisonous ~ not happy. I have already discouraged many people who came to read the fanfic ~ It can also be said that this is no longer a fanfic. It is a bit disgusting to dig up graves in the early stage and change her name to Bai Yina~ Maybe the author didn't feel it when he wrote it~ But it seems to us readers~ It should be a bit difficult for ordinary people to accept it.

It really doesn't look good. It feels like the relationships between the characters are all forcibly established and very abrupt. There is no characterization, and the supporting characters just die for the protagonist to become dark. After reading more than ten chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.