Traveler Around the World

The writing of Gang Lian is pretty good. I didn't read the rest and I don't want to read it. Gang Lian copied and pasted the "flask man" all the way through the whole process. Whoever looked at it would be embarrassed by the author's so-called "father". It was okay once or twice. However, this word kept appearing and it felt like the boss became the same as everyone in the author's Steel Lian. The summary is that the son beats daddy 😅

Is it the Gensokyo invincibility theory again? What's so strong about a group of trembling monsters hiding on the earth? Playing Gensokyo all day and night makes me want to vomit, and I am a nerd who knows how to add random settings. The one who is still chosen. What qualifications do you have to choose someone who is on the same path as your so-called boss named Chen? Ps. What technology has the protagonist researched so far? In addition to the specious electromagnetic gun, what else is studied in so-called science.

Except for the fact that the protagonist in the first world is a bit pretentious and stupid, the plot arrangement is slightly unreasonable, and I have watched the anime but I don't know the plot of the steel chain, etc., The following is getting more and more on the right track. If I really want to write a seeker from the beginning, whether it is a positive energy route or a negative energy route, there is no such thing as "the protagonist needs to grow up", "Personality will change" is something that even novices don't bother to write. It seems reasonable but is almost always a slap in the face. Firstly, readers won't accept this trick. Secondly, the authors have too much writing power to control it. Too much or too little change is a pitfall. If it didn't start with a steel chain and the protagonist didn't use Wushuang to sweep the scene, it would be difficult for me to continue reading. Those who like the current character of the Taoist in the book will find it intolerable to the Taoist in front of him. Readers who like more positive energy can't even stand the previous Taoist, so why not bother with two sides in the end? The most important thing at the beginning is to attract readers who can resonate with the author as the base. You have to play some tricks and wait until you become a great god to have the capital to play!!! Having said that, I also like this work very much. The author will write according to his own ideas first, hoping that the more he writes, the better! By the way, the most important thing is not to be a eunuch!!!

One day, Yi Daoren published several books in the world of Xingyue. The list is as follows. "Five Years of Alchemy and Three Years of Drawing a Circle" "Refining the Human Body? Trivia You Don't Know" "Master Yi teaches you how to make the Philosopher's Stone"

The first 200,000 words of the work are a masterpiece in my mind. They struggle to survive under pressure and gradually control the information. The stubble-faced but tenacious and cautious Yi struck a chord with me. He was really handsome in a war zone with a cigarette hanging... After that, the author went off to enjoy himself, and he was satisfied that he would not be able to do it. After all, he had enjoyed 200,000 words.

Since the eyes cannot see "normally" now, then with the protagonist's ability, he can create an eye with "normal vision" and connect it to the "optic nerve", right? On the forehead? (Erlang Shen?) Or on the butt? (Manual funny)

I looked at the catalog and found Naruto so I stopped reading. I really don't like Japanese comics.

Boss surnamed Chen? Dr. Chen, Tianqi Chen, Master Chen, Adam Chen

I don't want to read it. They belittle me, Dr. Chen, as if I've eaten a fly. It was the same with The Great Way of God before, but I abandoned the book at that time. Let's take a look at this one.

The appearance of Gensokyo is like adding shit to the soup. How can it have such a high force value? ? ? To be honest, Dr. Chen is not much higher than you. If you encounter Dr. Chen in Gensokyo, a group of monsters will be made into experimental subjects. The plot of dnf was originally quite good. However, this novel has no idea what the protagonist did in Arad. The forced interruption of the Arad script at the end made people feel like eating flies.

The early stage is a masterpiece, and the later period is a masterpiece. Author, why can't you think about it! ? Forget it, there hasn't been a single comment for a few days now, and its popularity has long since dissipated... I'll just stick to updating it every day as usual, why bother? Why not open a new book and start over? As a (former) die-hard fan, I don't have much money to reward, so I'll leave a recommendation vote in the end.

The steel-making part was perfect, but it was a pity that the dungeon couldn't be watched anymore.

I feel that the alchemy chapter has a youthful and delicate atmosphere!

If it were not for the tampering of Naruto World, then this book would be a fairy tale, but after it was tampered beyond recognition, the book would be completely unreadable. I hope that a new book of the same type will be published soon, and there will be no tampering this time.

To see the magic ban coming! There are many jumps in the middle, such as DNF! Let me know your thoughts! I feel that the protagonist has been taking the initiative to attract hatred on his own. For example, the supporting characters are just very ordinary to consult. The protagonist responded with a cold and bad tone, and also in a provocative tone! To be honest, my personal feeling is that in fan fiction, if you don't interact with the protagonists in it (anime or movie), it seems really meaningless, and it completely deviates from the main line. If you are like this, you can create an original world view, which is better. Moreover, in fan fiction, the protagonist of the scientist mode is really not suitable, and the mainstream of fan fiction is to relax! Personal opinions are discussed peacefully! Thanks!

The protagonist has always been a weakling and is speechless. Not cool

Sure enough, was this book ghostwritten? Hey, am I dazzled? Why are there so many people... I must have gone to the wrong place. Turn around and go forward, close the door and look at the house number...

When I saw the back, I had a headache. I don't know why.

Chapter 1: Strength persuades people to quit. Can anyone count how many times 'Yi Dao Ren' appears? Every time he appears, it destroys the sense of substitution. It's amazing!

I'm looking for a similar novel. The protagonist is a mystic and the name is similar to this book. If anyone has any information, please reply.

All other worlds have a Western layout, but Westerners don't read them at all. They all rely on domestic readers to pay for them. Is it interesting? Why

Who is Chen Ang?😰

This author's books of the same type are all about alchemy, and it bores the readers if he writes them over and over again.

After reading Chapter 15, I felt that the reading was chaotic and not smooth, just like the feeling of lag after lag when playing a game. Maybe the sentences can be improved a little bit.

I feel like this book is a bit similar to The Soul of Negri

No bragging, no blackmail! To be honest, I read the pirated version on another website two years ago. The early stage was well written, but the middle and late stages were not well controlled. The middle stage was a bit messy, the late stage power system collapsed, and the ending was a bit hasty. But it's really well written. Real! No bragging, no blackmail! If you don't believe it, you can go and take a look.

I thought it was the original world, sorry to bother you.

A very awkward novel. It was depressing at first, but then it became purely perverted.

The beginning seems to be a scene from Jidao Tianmo!

It would be much better to change the title of the book! I often feel that this book is about a woman. . . .