Taoist Book

Is there something wrong with this pig's feet? Seeing patterns on bronze mirrors makes you panic. How timid you must be to do this. I always feel that there is something wrong with Pig's Knuckle's character, and the author needs to pay more attention to it.

When panic occurs, can you not pinch your thigh?

What happened to the protagonist? What does it mean to run into trouble every day despite being weak to begin with? Without the halo of the protagonist, I don't know how many times I would have died.

It's too extreme. What's the difference between only knowing about killing and mindless writing? Besides, humanity also has its own limitations. We can't deny others. Ten thousand ways compete for freedom.

The protagonist just started practicing and went to the Holy Mother to rescue disasters. This and the idea of ​​Gou at the beginning suddenly changed to the Holy Mother. It was inexplicable. He met a big demon and couldn't even chop off a hair. He was going to harm others and himself. Every time he relied on luck to get out of trouble, the author didn't know what he thought. It didn't make sense!

I look like a fool when I look at this introduction, as if the world exists only for humans.

We often encounter trouble when writing a protagonist. It can be written, but if the writing method is wrong, a story can be written with any plot. It just depends on the writing method. Once the writing method is wrong, someone will say something. How to write? The best example is Jojo. In Jojo stories, the protagonist is often in trouble. When the protagonist is about to succeed, a villain often comes to break the situation. But no one says why the protagonist is always in trouble. Isn't this abusing the protagonist? Don't rely on luck. If you write it like this, the protagonist cannot rely on luck.

Damn, it's just a rubbish book, I really have accepted so many recommendations The dog-licking male protagonist is a trash male protagonist, wow, these two attributes are stacked on him, it's so disgusting Damn, the whole **** has no idea why he wrote this book?

After reading the first few chapters, I can only say I'm sorry to bother you! Farewell

The inner strength, inner strength, and immortality methods inside are a bit messy, and I feel dizzy when I look at them 😰

I feel like the main character is so useless, too ordinary

After reading a few chapters, I can only survive by doing this kind of thing, and it all depends on the halo of the protagonist.

Overall, it's very depressing. It's so weak that it explodes. It all depends on others. Goldfinger is not very reliable either. The plots come one after another, but you still rely on luck to survive. The outline of the world is vague, but the impression is that it is extremely depressing. It should be a slow-burning type.

I didn't dare to read the first four chapters. Please tell me if my friends who have tried poison told me whether the protagonist killed the woman at the beginning. If not, I suggest you not to read it. If you don't understand, you can read the first three chapters and then come back to read the post.

There are a lot of trolls in the Zhangshuo and book review sections who don't even read the book carefully, but just open their mouths.

So far, I feel pretty good. Some of the abuse points are quite reasonable. It's understandable that the protagonist doesn't get rid of the monster's secret hand before arriving at the city gate, but enters the city first. After all, there is a queue at the door, and he has to get off the car for inspection. But the author, your update is outrageous. Let me tell you, it only takes three or four days to update a chapter.

I like to watch obscene and underdeveloped films, but I can't stand death-seeking scenes. Isn't it just because of the halo of the protagonist?

Abandoned what book? The strength is so weak, but it always gets into trouble.

The book is good, but it is wrong to say in the review that the protagonist goes to dangerous places. According to the way the book is written, danger appears around the protagonist. Even if the protagonist hides, things will still come to him. Moreover, the protagonist has friends around him and can deal with danger. This also increases the protagonist's own value and is valued by others.

Too extreme. He also killed all the demons and monsters. All kinds of frosty weather are free, just kill them as protected animals. . . .

This. . . No updates for several days

Taoism has a system of cultivation, and it is embarrassing for the author to come up with this system for ordinary people and strong people.

I didn't kill anyone after reading Chapter 7. This is a rubbish book.

There is so much nonsense in this article that it's terrifying!

It's well written, but it's a pity that it's not my cup of tea. Good luck to the author.

. . . . Just thinking about exterminating monsters and monsters, isn't sustainable development bad? The demons and ghosts are extinct, and the end of the Dharma has arrived.

Why can't I find the author's name?

Don't use random words. What does an unmarried girl say about being a concubine?

Is this a eunuch? The author's writing style is quite good, which is a pity