Alchemy Notes

I won't dare to post here until I finish the book. It turns out there are still so many people who care about me, thank you all. It was delayed on and off for more than a month due to various reasons. Physical reasons, Kavin, some things, I won't go into details one by one... Although it is not perfect, after all, I have completed a novel of more than one million words, and I finally have a sense of accomplishment. Thank you all for your persistence from the beginning to now. The next book must have an outline, a manuscript, and content and quality before I dare to criticize it. Anyway, try not to disappoint everyone.

What does it mean to be low-key? The protagonist is always high-profile from the moment he enters the fairy gate. As if he was afraid that others wouldn't recognize him, he would always cause trouble. He has always pretended to be confident and has the world under his control.

Chapter 22 I did it on purpose. People asked you where you found this spiritual flower. Why didn't you tell me? You still pretended to be cool. You were beaten. You have no strength and you still pretended to be cool. What did you ask me to say? They also gave you a Qi-nourishing pill. It wasn't a robbery. Say goodbye.

The previous writing is quite good. Chapters 20, 21, and 22 directly turn into a licking dog, isn't it just a female nun? As for that, even the style of painting has changed. For newbies, I recommend reading chapters 20, 21, and 22 first to see if you can withstand this poison.

I didn't like the first one before I finished reading it, and I didn't want to read the rest.

After reading the introduction, I feel that this book is nonsense. Can a notebook make the protagonist take off? Can you pull it off a bit more?

It feels like it's trying to show off its writing style. In many places, it feels like it's trying to be literary and artistic, and many of the plots and narratives that it should have are just average!

It was well written at the beginning, but then the plot was mixed up and the logic didn't make sense. I thought I missed a good book at first, but I was disappointed.

Dog licking article? Destiny's Child, supporting character is mentally retarded? I can't read it until I reach Chapter 22

Just look at the name and you'll know what it is.

Some plot designs are very unique and show the author's literary skills. But many character designs are very unreasonable. In the last chapter, I was still writing about the character's potential, but in the next chapter, he died inexplicably. Lack of continuity and too random. It feels like an anticlimax.

Well written! ! ! ! !

This pig's foot could not survive an episode in the normal human world, but he was lucky enough to live in the adult world. I hope the author can improve his writing so that the protagonist of the next novel can live in a world where the supporting characters have normal IQs.

From the early to mid-term of physical training in one day, bah, you might as well write about foundation building in one day.

It would be great if you can finish this book.

This book,,, I always felt that it was nondescript and I couldn't stand it!

First of all, I am a new author. Although I want to compare myself to predecessors such as Jin Gu, Huang Xiao, etc., My writing skills are limited. Please forgive me for the many shortcomings! Moreover, this first book has no manuscript, only a rough outline, and lack of preparation. I think this situation will be greatly improved in the next book. Thank you very much for everyone's comments here! Just please don't be too sharp, and please show your respect to those with sharp tongues. After all, your opinions are to let me know that as long as the expression is clear, there is no need to vent unnecessary emotions... I know that if everyone's opinions do not affect the outline and the works that can be changed, I will naturally work hard to change them. I will try my best to avoid the emotional issues of pig's feet in the future. I originally wanted to depict the psychological changes of a boy growing up into a young man, but I found that many readers do not have the patience. Haha, it's no wonder, I am not Jin Yong after all. Pig's feet can appear again with hundreds of thousands of words (such as Linghu Chong), pig's feet can be silly and life-threatening (such as Guo Jing)... Modern Internet writing will die if it is not popular. I'm afraid I don't have the time to accumulate it slowly. Fortunately, there are many things that Xianxia can write about, such as promotion, freedom, faith... In the following articles, I will present you with more elements and different Xianxia, ​​and try not to disappoint the babies who have supported me until now. If you think the writing is average, I'm very sorry, it's my fault! But I'll try to keep you with the next book. If you think it's worth reading, please subscribe and support. After all, it's not easy to be a writer, and you also have to eat... Thank you all again!

Showing off your writing style is neither fish nor fowl. In addition, there are a lot of protagonists with ugly names. Friends, pig Taoist, please stay?

Can anyone tell me where Chapter 51 is?