The Power of Beautiful Comics' Thoughts

Suggestions to the author: "When writing about pig's feet in novels, don't write about the weaknesses of the pig's feet. For example, the pig's feet in this book are timid. Pig's feet have no weaknesses. Pig's feet with weaknesses are not pig's feet. A novel without pig's feet is garbage. Author, you have written more than 700 chapters now. , Pig's feet are still so rubbish, after saying so much, has the author realized it? In fact, the truth is that the protagonist in the novel is perfect. Readers are human beings, and they will long for perfection and read it. The protagonist of this book has weaknesses and is not perfect. No one will read imperfect things.

Why? Psychokinesis is a skill that is obviously a magician. In the author's writing, the protagonist plays bumper cars with others 😰. You are the magician, not the meat. There are also telekinetic creations that are a bit like the setting of Green Lantern.

Neither good nor evil, if a person is hypocritical and cowardly, isn't that just a faggot!

After reading this book, you will regret why Qidian did not use this function. It brings together all the poisonous points of American comic book fans, and it's also very powerful.

When I was reading "Ordinary Superheroes" before, I discovered that many authors didn't know the difference between writing a book and reading a book. For example, in "Ordinary Superheroes" I mentioned, in order to bring out the battle between the protagonist and the Avengers, and to bring out the time ability of the protagonist's Zanpakutō, a long plot of abuse of the protagonist was written, and everyone who died was killed. For example, the author of this article is currently writing a plot in which the protagonist loses his abilities, is suppressed by a clone, and begs for the Mind Stone but fails. I'm not saying that I can't stand the plot of abusing the protagonist at all. I've finished watching the full text of "Aetiya" and all the various ways to abuse the protagonist. What I want to say is that in the process of this kind of protagonist slowly growing up and then fighting the bad guys, it is normal to have ups and downs. When there is pretense and slaps in the face, there should be reflection on being abused. However, the author must pay attention to controlling the rhythm. Many writers who are new to writing don't know the difference between writing and reading. I have written articles before, so I know that Internet article writers generally write an outline and then slowly fill in the outline and details. It is often possible to set an outline of 1 million words and end up with 150W or even 200W. Sometimes new inspiration breaks out and needs to be filled in. Sometimes it is found that the originally set number of words simply cannot express what one wants to express. Sometimes the description of a battle is divided into up and down, but in the end it ends up being written as an 8-chapter series. However, the biggest difference between authors and readers of online articles lies in their understanding of plot development. The author knew from the beginning how the subsequent plot would develop. For example, now that Wang Kai is being abused, he will definitely be abused back in the end. The author may have even thought about how to draw chestnuts from the fire and turn the tide. But readers don't know that! Readers of online articles, especially readers who pursue books, must be pursuing many books at the same time. For example, I am pursuing more than a dozen books now. At this time, the patience for a certain book will be very poor. The specific process is as follows: When you first start to suppress the protagonist and start to write the plot of abusing the protagonist, readers will still be very curious and will conceive the subsequent plot on their own and verify it with the new serialization the next day. After about two days, or at most three days, if the protagonist still can't take the initiative and is restrained in every aspect, that's good. Patient readers may scan it generally and see that there is no rise, and wait for a few days before reading again. If the author doesn't turn the plot around within a week, it's very likely that readers will abandon the book. The "Zhu Xian" of that year was indeed filled with a sad atmosphere throughout the whole text, and the final ending was beyond everyone's expectations and was a complete tragedy. This is the success of "Zhu Xian", but you have to know that Zhu Xian is a monthly update model of 30W, not a daily update at all. Really, unlike in the past, online literature is fast-paced. If a plot does not end within a week, many readers will not have the patience to follow it every day, let alone a plot that abuses the protagonist. It is suggested to the author that if the plot is to be promoted but suppressed first, the author must write the entire plot in advance before deciding whether to publish it. If you are not sure that "Suppression" will end within three days, delete all unimportant plots, or write them later as memories or third-person flashbacks.

To be honest, what I hate the most among all superpowers is the simple application of telekinesis. This kind of power is invisible and has almost no restrictions. However, those people actually use it to hit people. I really don't want to say anything. Simply and crudely remove the air, and the person will die. There are countless more subtle ways to use it.

I was persuaded to quit after reading the introduction! ! !

The main character is a loser, and the entire book has not been able to create an accurately positioned main character.

It looked good in the early stage, but it was too boring in the later stage. Things that didn't involve the protagonist or didn't matter could have been simpler. Especially when the clones were fighting the protagonist, accidents happened frequently, and various characters made mistakes frequently. The old woman's foot wrap was ugly and long, and it was completely unnecessary.

It's normal for the protagonist to have weaknesses at the beginning, but after writing seven or eight hundred chapters, it's still too cliché. Isn't it too much?

What's the point of copying movies? It's all water.

Nothing you say in your profile is enough, yet you still write your damn words

Fortunately, I read the pirated version, and I gave up after reading the paid chapters before there were 50 chapters. . It was written that the main character was missing but it was okay.

They are all tepid, why are they not hot? The Marvel world is very big, so you just choose a small corner to write about it. People who like to watch Marvel basically do it because of the movies. If you pick a small corner and a small perspective of the story, not many people will know about it.

This book is so addictive to you that the author, a mage and part-time warrior, wants you to write a pure warrior. I am so poisoned that I gave up.

Looking for a book that is a villain in Marvel. Superheroes are really disgusting

A group of trolls who troll without seeing clearly. The main character is not telepathy, not telepathy, but spiritual power! Mental power! All of you are blind, and your mind power turns into blue? Obviously with the help of mental power!

What's wrong with fat people? Why do you need to lose weight? There are so many fat people in One Piece, aren't they awesome! !

He is obviously a mage, but he has to do warrior things. Pianpian writes in a nondescript manner. Author, you are so annoying.

I have read more than 100 chapters, and I personally feel that pig's feet are too crude in the use of abilities at the moment. The author can learn from the example of the one who swallows the starry sky in one day.

There is a very good subject matter, but the author failed to write the essence of it. Pity. There are poison points but not much👀

It can be said that the protagonist's mental power is very strong. . . Did a warrior's thing

To conclude, the protagonist always thinks that he has good plans and can only rely on others. Except for super powers, he is worse than normal people in all other aspects. He is cowardly, panicked, unsteady, and selfish. It can only be said that about 600 of the more than 800 chapters are poisonous, that is, the clones keep releasing poison after they come out.

The writing style feels a bit poor and not smooth.