The Little Tycoon of the Mountain Village

Brother, your writing skills are good enough, but you lack experience. What you've written shows absolutely no understanding of rural life. I suggest you read "Small Landlord" before you start writing, okay?

Simplicity is the best, but the story of being reborn and destroying the world is too beautiful and powerful. The pacing still needs to be maintained.

I read this book from beginning to end; it was pretty good, but it was too idealistic.

Hopefully, the author can take a look at what they've written. Several years have passed; shouldn't they have learned their lesson by now?

Well, how should I put it! A 30-something-year-old reborn can still have fun with 7-year-olds, but a few 13-year-olds can rob you? Everything else is fine, but I'm used to novels with cheat codes, and reading this kind of story feels very frustrating.

You gave all the rabbit meat to the villagers to please them, but Ma Huanhua tripped you up, and someone else did something bad to your aunt. So all that rabbit meat was wasted on them.

I'm leaving now. How can a little kid be so awesome? Why don't you just fly to the moon? 🤫🤫

If you don't like what you see, the villains should be eliminated. Behind every success, isn't there a hand of wickedness at play?

Damn, buying a phone for 30,000 yuan is such a big deal!

What is this? The main character isn't a bad person. If they're not bad people, why are their values ​​so warped?