Naruto: Chronicles of the Mist Moon

But this is the world of Naruto, a supernatural world, where power is not supreme, but where power is supreme. More directly, personal force surpasses everything. A typical counterexample is Orochimaru, who neglected his strength for the sake of longevity. What will be his final outcome? If you like to write Machiavellian novels, I suggest you abandon the Naruto framework

This book is a more realistic version of the Naruto world without a psychiatrist among the people who don't have six levels of trouble. Pig's feet are more indigenous than indigenous people. The reason why it is not popular is not the problem with the author's writing style. There are a few points. The plot is too long, which makes most people tired of watching it, and there are too few exciting points. It would be more reasonable to cut two-thirds to speed up the plot. After all, it starts too early, and there are too many plots, which will make the author and readers tired. However, if the plot advances too slowly, everyone will lose enthusiasm. If you use one sentence to briefly promote it, there is not enough foreshadowing, the writing is too cunning, and the jump is too abrupt. Second, the pig's feet have psychological problems and are not pleasing to the eye. There are few fights and the strength seems to be high and low. The overall view is too entangled in small issues, and the alternative version of Zhuge died from exhaustion and finally destroyed the country. I guess the author's outline is not designed well. The space is not allocated well, and I can't stop writing and enjoying myself. In the end, I found that even though it was not popular, I still wrote so much. The plot was not advanced very much, and it was impossible to survive until the farming period. The eunuch's miscalculation is more sensible, and I hope the author can control it in the next book.

After reading the previous ten chapters, I still can't figure out the name of the protagonist.

It's no wonder that readers don't pay for the opening paragraph. At the beginning, when it is most important to attract readers, the protagonist wanders around for more than ten chapters and watches his mother's suicide, which makes him feel depressed and speechless. Can't the clan leader block the news and wait until the protagonist's 5 or 6-year-old talent is leaked before the elders can assassinate and rebel? Then the protagonist can have more scenes... What's more, if you want to rebel, it's better to attack and kill the clan leader directly, which will tear you apart...

In fact, I was attracted by the cover. When I first saw it, I thought it was very classy. After reading it for a while, I thought it was pretty good. The author is great, please keep updating 😁😁😁😁

I originally read the book when I saw the word "Ji" in the title, but then I clicked on the chapter and found... I couldn't stop reading! !

It's a pity that this book wasn't published on women's channels.

There is an author's book, The Pirate Code, which has a realistic and reasonable style. The results are getting better and better. His writing skills are really poor, there are problems, and the plot cannot develop. It's very slow and has no sense of immersion at all. You are much better than him, why can't you. You can really become a full-time writer. Most online writing skills are not high.

After reading a little bit, I feel like the main character is so long-winded and it doesn't seem like the book will be finished in less than 300 chapters. He must have been disgusted and took the initiative to finish this book and start a new one.

The author is going to be a eunuch at the end of the month, yet he is still so diligent. Comparing it to the One Piece Code, I have something to say mmb.

The good Hokage was written into a palace battle drama, and I was convinced. Instead of writing about the exercises, write about your thoughts? Ill

Looking at the first few pictures, I thought it would be a game played by scientists like Newton and Einstein, but it turned out to be a Machiavellian flow.

I didn't write more about what I should have written, but I wrote a lot of content about what I shouldn't have written. Is the author actually writing for himself, unable to tell what the readers want to see? For example, our family can be deleted. This paragraph can be said to scare readers away.

I think the author should change his name! Your Hokage has nothing to do with technology! And your title has technology! Tell me where the technology is! What I write is all about fighting among each other! No sense of immersion at all!

Well, I have to keep raising him. It's not easy to find someone who is not a novice at all.

Just make some comments. After reading a few chapters, I feel... The writing style is a bit subtle. Because the author's writing focuses on power struggles, especially internal struggles, it makes people feel that his vision is a bit shallow. (I only read the first few chapters, so I'm sorry if there are any mistakes) After all, this is a world where individual strength is incredible. Everything, whether wealth or power, is based on sufficient strength. With no wealth and no strength, it is easy to be destroyed like the Kingdom of Whirlpool. Moreover, if you are strong enough, power will come naturally in this world, just like Hashirama and Madara. At this point in time, there are definitely a lot of battles. The amount of tasks, friction with other villages, growth in strength, and research and development of techniques are all writeable. If you just stare at it, you will feel that this world is not that rich. What's more, the author said that the protagonist is a scientific researcher who loves power. If he could focus on the development of ninjutsu (imagination), I think it would be a lot more interesting. Moreover, instead of focusing on family power, it is better to think about how to unify the ninja world. Through force or economic methods, a little bit of layout, and taking over the ninja world with like-minded people and people with opposite ideas, etc., It will feel more interesting. Finally, isn't the author a girl?

Showing a charming posture, confirming that the protagonist is normal?

In fact, the author's writing is pretty good. You have to look at the time point the author describes. The current time point is actually more than ten years after the establishment of Konoha. The war to unify the shinobi villages has just ended. At the end of the Warring States Period, this atmosphere is actually very realistic.

After reading the book reviews, they all say that the protagonist joins Xiao because he has no strength. In my personal opinion, Xiao will not absorb people who have no strength. If they don't have strength, they will probably be killed by other people in Xiaoli.

In fact, the principle of blood attack is that the body cannot bear the withdrawal of the technique. Kimimaro's corpse veins are overloaded bone hyperplasia, Uchiha Itachi's Sharingan is caused by excessive chakra consumption and the use of Yin escape power beyond physical load. Hayashi Yuri also uses thunder escape on a super scale and uses too much thunder swords. Uzumaki Naruto's wind escape Rasengan shuriken is actually a phenomenon, and there is also the sage mode that turns to stone.

For a student like me, this book is very tiring to read.

The ninja world's own strength is the foundation. I really don't know what the hell the struggle for power is. I gave up on it in ten chapters.

I don't quite understand how strong the protagonist is now

I feel like the protagonist is a cruel person and will be crushed sooner or later╭(╯ε╰)╮