Fuji Avenue

The first half of the novel is very exciting, and the portrayal of the female characters is particularly outstanding, with the lingering charm of Jin Yong. However, a single bad ending brought a work that could have been a god to the bottom, and instantly made me lose confidence in the author's new book. Unlike most people who abandon the book because of the emotional drama, I think the biggest problems with this book are the following points 1. Pick it up again and put it away lightly. The main character's real strength is due to his mixed-race background. The main character cannot be with the person he likes because he doesn't know his background. He is about to be exposed countless times, grabbing the readers' hearts, but the author suppresses it and covers it up countless times. It can be said that in this novel, the protagonist's life experience is like Zhang Xiaofan's secret in Zhu Xian. All readers are waiting for it to be exposed and trigger an explosive plot. However, this book is good. The author directly reunites the protagonist and his parents in private, and then says "The child has known it for a long time." He 🐴 reveals this important truth that hangs many readers, wtf? We have been waiting for a big scene where the two clans go to war, and then the protagonist's identity is exposed, his three views are subverted, and he runs away from the Horned Clan, but the result is just like that? It's really a rotten pit 2. There are countless rotten pits. I still remember what the protagonist seemed to agree to do with the possessed person? Nothing further. Readers don't even remember it, so the author is probably very happy. 3. Interspersed with unlimited flow settings, the failure among failures. The essence of romance is all about the Shura scene of romance. How does this infinite flow setting help portray emotional scenes? To rob him of the drama, not to mention the sci-fi world view at the end, is simply letting yourself go. The fairy sword fighting, one of them pulled out a gun, said "I'm eating shit" and then pulled the trigger Except for those who are specifically making jokes, I have never seen such mixed writing. 4. The author simply does not know how to depict big scenes, nor does he let the protagonist pretend to be X. Can't romance protagonists just show off? The final ending, it was over without even starting a fight? I still have to take Zhu Xian as an example. At the end of Zhu Xian, Gui Li merged the three heavenly books, holding Zhu Xian in hand, reversed the situation and turned the tide. Can't Fuji just pretend to be X like this? The author can completely create a super-kill or super-powerful treasure that can only be used by mixed-bloods in the later stage, and then Fujio saves the Horned and Human tribes alone, and finally hides his merits and fame and lives in seclusion for many years, leaving behind a legend. This is the title of the book, "The Great Road of Non-Energy," but I would like to ask, has the "Dao of Non-Energy" become narrower? Speaking of not being able to depict big scenes, I even think that the reason why I don't write about the war between the two clans is because the author can't write it 😅 5. If the new book continues to be so bad, I will really call the police. I finally understand that this author can't tell the whole story even if he writes a novel of three to four million words 🙂 Finally, where is the promised postscript? Leaving an unclear ending, huh?

......... After reading the whole book, I thought about what to write. The more I read it, the more bitter I felt. In the end, Kui Mufeng's story in the ancient city was not very good, not very detailed, and Li Youran had no results. Nan Qiuci was so infatuated that he did not resurrect his lover. Brother Gu was probably not killed by the garbage system in the end. Chi Xin was able to embrace the beauty and even had a child. Senior Sister Mu didn't know if she would live well in the future. How could Li Ran live a good life with her parents without her cultivation and memories of growing up. The Witch of Time finally went into seclusion with Wei Buer. Zhong Xiuxiu was so pitiful. I always saw people saying that you are a mistress in book reviews. Thinking about the price Xiuxiu paid for Wei Buer, she was willing to do so. The monk in Lu Ying's enlightenment realm ruthlessly said that he had a problem and wanted to use Xiuxiu as a test subject. The author also said that after taking the ruthless path, he was no longer himself, as if he had lost his feelings. Oh, Wei Buer, Wei Buer. The hardest thing to bear is the kindness of a beautiful woman. . The finale was open-ended. Wei Buer was so powerful that he didn't notice anyone approaching from outside. Is that really Xiuxiu? I hope so. I hope the three of them will live happily ever after and never be separated again, just like the ending of a fairy tale when I was a child. It won't end with only regrets like the Zhu Xian I read when I was young. Reading this novel in one go was like a dream. I hope it will stay in my memory for a longer time. I also hope that the mythological stories that appear in the author's future works will be able to meet familiar people and continue to write new stories together. 🙂🙂🙂

I found out that this book was finished, so I stayed up late for two or three days to read it. Judging from my hardcore reading experience, it is indeed a good book. If updated more diligently, it has the potential to become a god, and I hope more people will read this book. . I haven't been able to order all of them, but a few subscriptions are better than none.

I haven't read many books, so if the author takes a lot of time to write a novel, I'll take some time to comment on it. It was a little strange that martial arts was embedded in Xiu Xian at the beginning, but I have seen less individual martial arts and it is still acceptable. The biggest feature of this book is that many nodes in the story echo back and forth. People who usually read less books like this are very happy; but especially in the middle and later stages, the number of descriptions of the group of animals increases, and the presence of the pig's feet is reduced a lot. The more emotional scenes make the presence of the immortal cultivation background a lot less, and the description of levels, especially the power of high levels, is also unclear (for example, Miss Chu's opening mirror saved her life under the eyelids of the Enlightenment Mirror). Overall, it looks like an adventurous and emotional novel wrapped in the shell of a cultivator. Let's not talk about Xiuxiu and Niu Niu. To put it bluntly, the former just started too late, while Fu Er is just out of his mind. It is better to accept the other person than to cut off the love thread and continue to cut it off. Speaking of which, let's talk about the setting of Fuji's protagonist. There are many contradictions in the personal perception of this character. Take the setting of love as an example. The protagonist grew up in a world where he could have three wives and four concubines, so he should not completely stick to the way of thinking of love. His parents disappeared when he was a child, and the book did not mention the impact of their parents' love on him. The characteristic of infatuation also belongs to Nan Qiuci. Senior sister Xiu Xiu and the witch are all close friends. Why do they fall in love with the witch? Even because they were just friends at the beginning, there is no possibility of falling in love at first sight for ten thousand years. Wan'er took a step back and threw the medicine bowl, not wanting to die, and then squatted with Xiuxiu for a while (squatting in a cave). He didn't write much about Fuji's understanding of emotions. He just kept emphasizing that he didn't want to delay Xiu Xiu and use others to call him pedantic... After all possibilities were eliminated, Fuji's sudden love seemed a bit abrupt. The only variable was that he was raped by a witch on the other side of the sea of ​​​​insects. Stockholm appeared somewhere. From this point of view, he looked like a male version of Spring Flower. Second, choose the avenue. More than 420 chapters later, when Fuji chooses the avenue... As a character who is initially set to grow up, it is very inconsistent to give him the avenue of innocence. Fuji originally pursued Wan'er into Yunyin because of his unwillingness, and because of his unwillingness, he endured all kinds of humiliation before entering the Open Door Realm. In other words, he established the path of innocence, but he actually did it because he forgot his original intention and Qingmei. To put it bluntly, his original intention of cultivating Taoism is unwillingness rather than pure kindness. This is somewhat similar to Li Yunjing's experience (it's a pity that Li Yunjing left without even saying goodbye). His innocent heart is not reflected, and there is no story foreshadowing. Except for one scrapped manuscript, there is no description in the book that Fuji's original intention is pure and kind (stupid). No one knows whether the child king is pure or kind. Judging from the subsequent plot, the biggest effect of this innocent heart is to make Fuji a lot thicker. The Tao he denies is more like the author trying to deny the mainstream routine but ultimately falling short. Forget the original intention - still haven't jumped out of this trap... Therefore, from my point of view, this is almost the biggest failure of this book... I started to think that Wei Buer's "Fuer" had some meaning, but at the end I realized that it was just a coincidence with Fuji's Avenue... In fact, it would be the best if Fuji could be related to his Avenue. This is also the regrettable part at the end, the poor choice of the avenue and the weak description of the subsequent avenue... The title of this book should be changed back to "Hongran Demon Slayer (Revised)" (laughs). Third, talent. Genius is one point seven. To be honest, I feel it is a slight failure. Like Naruto, I thought it was a poor boy's struggle at first, but I didn't expect that in the end it was fate. It can be seen that the author finally wanted to explain the origin of these strange golden fingers, but in terms of personal opinion, it was quite reluctant. Even so, Fairy Mu and Brother Hu did not explain it clearly, and it was very uncomfortable to hang up in the middle of the explanation. Second, the story described in this book is a mutated version of "Hong Ran's Demon Slayer". So many golden fingers have come or been reborn in this era at the same time and are still piled up in one place. Compared with the fate of the golden fingers, this is the most confusing one... This is also one of the reasons why the introduction attracted me to read it. When I first read this book and saw the introduction, I thought it was a witty and funny novel. Unexpectedly, the style of the introduction is quite different from the main text. Of course, the blame for the golden fingers can also be thrown at the turmoil caused by the existence of the World Fruit, but according to the book, it is inferred that from the time when Fuji's parents picked up the World Stone, to the time when Fuji was born, grew up, and destroyed the village, in addition to his parents saving his master, compared with the subsequent twists and turns of Yunyin, the World Stone was very obedient and actually stayed calm for many years... In summary In short, the look and feel is not good, and it feels like it is not rounded out Although the author has put a lot of effort into creating various flesh-and-blood characters, the only character I like in the whole book is Mu Daixian. Since Fuji took Xiu Xiu and the witch away, it must be because Mu Daixian was lying on my bed that there was no news at the end. Thank you to the author 🪖

Briefly tell me your thoughts about this book. There is no need to say too much about praise. Some writers gave a self-evaluation on November 6th. First, the first 250 chapters (I don't know which book review said this), to about 250 chapters, can be called the most exciting part of the book. From the beginning to about 250 chapters, the plot is rounded, and the group portraits are described with ease. In the later period, maybe Maybe it's because I'm too busy at work. Although I still followed the outline, and the author's carefulness can be seen in the text and plot, the plots in the big chapters seem to give people a sense of incongruity, with each section being forcibly connected together, and the mellowness in the early stage seems to be gone. Second, the finale is a matter of opinion, but the writing style at the end made me look at whether it had been mixed into other books. The long paragraphs of teasing and joyful atmosphere kind of ruined the overall atmosphere and rhythm of the book, and the plot also didn't fit well with the pattern of the book. Thirdly, this book focuses on the emotional line. As for the emotional line in the later period, a large section is empty. Then there is a section that is suspected of being coerced - the section about Feather's clone. The writer must have felt it himself, so the plot of Chi Xin's clone was deleted. Fourth, abuse of masters, stallions, etc. The author can do as he pleases, and choose a specific readership based on his own writing expertise and style. There is no need to refer to all opinions, after all, it is difficult to agree with everyone. A small opinion, I hope the writer can write better and better articles!

Hey, although the beginning of this book is not very good, the more I read it, the more interesting it becomes. Today I wanted to see if the author has any other books, but it turns out that it seems that the author has not written any more books, which is a pity.

I finished reading it in a week. Talking about my feelings, this book can be said to be one of the few masterpieces I have read in recent years. Because I don't like Xianxia, ​​I don't feel like I have any taste for it. This book is well written, with deep character descriptions and sincere emotions. Although the plot is a bit tight, the overall coherence is very good. It's really refreshing to watch it in one breath. Let's talk about the setting. Putting aside the original fairy tale setting, the supporting characters are a combination of several cheats from today's online novels, and although the protagonist possesses a treasure, it has no effect. The protagonist's growth is full of hardships, and his qualifications are mediocre and in the end he falls short of a celestial being. But I work very hard and keep changing, it's not just about putting on a persona. In the ending, although there are a lot of scenes with the reincarnation team at the end, it feels like a waste of the previous foreshadowing of the world view. The endings of various main characters are also mostly explained, and most of them are memorable. The author deserves to be a master of Bai Xue, some plots are really stomach-ache. Finally, this book is worth reading, but I also hope that the story of Hongranjie does not end like this, and that the author gives you the original ending, not a simplified version 😡

The first half is great and the ending is epic

The author wants to write about the changes in the protagonist's growth. This is a good starting point, but the change in a person's growth lies in the way he handles things rather than his character. The character will not change unless it undergoes a major impact. Kindness will still be kind, and selfishness will still be selfish. As for this book, I thought it was well written at the beginning, but since you first said that you were nervous about saving the manuscript, the later chapters became less and less interesting as I read them. After about ten chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

I don't know why Li Qingyun has so many pinks and so many complimentary labels. I really don't understand. I don't know if there is a problem with your three views or with mine 🙂

Going to the Southwest and Northwest was a bit off at the beginning. The plot framework is large, but several heroines and some characters later repeated too much space. It felt like romance for the sake of romance, and the ending was indeed a bit abrupt, which made people feel regretful. The first half looks and sounds comfortable, but the back part is a little watery.

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw the three female Shuras in the middle. I really don't understand why the author spent so much time portraying a female character, describing her so deeply into people's hearts, and then ruined all the previous efforts in the plot of Shura Field. The author's writing style, plot, and plot all suit my taste, especially the plot between Fuji and Suiyuu. Unfortunately, I think the character of Time has collapsed after the harem plot appeared.

Is this the end of the book? I felt that the ending was not very satisfying. I felt that although the central idea of ​​the protagonist was reflected: unwillingness to be ordinary, there was nothing substantial about it. Inexplicably, he became the obsessed clone of the Horned Clan genius, and then inherited the power of the Horned Clan genius, and then became invincible! Also, I personally feel that the ending of the character Mu Wanfeng in the book is not very good. Mu Wanfeng is the first female protagonist that the protagonist has a crush on (except Wan'er). They have experienced so many things together later, and the male protagonist also encountered many dangers for her. Mu Wanfeng also likes the male protagonist, but in the end, he just said "see you later" and disappeared and left. Personally, I feel dissatisfied with Mu Wanfeng's setting. Oh, I suddenly remembered that the author is a white scholar and his brain circuit is different from ours. Excuse me and say goodbye!

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I feel that the quality of this book has dropped significantly recently. It is really a bit watery and the writing is not as delicate as before. I hope the author can adjust the situation and improve the quality. Then why does this volume feel like it's about to be finished? ? There are so many holes left unfilled, and Xiu Xiu's role is still unfinished. The author doesn't want it to be unfinished. And I beg the author to accept Xiu Xiu as soon as possible, I want them all!

I read this book in 2024. There are many ideas that should have been outstanding back then. The description of Shura Field is one of the best. Jin Yong's reference makes the plot more appealing. There are many great group portraits but the impact is not enough. The story setting is good. The change of the protagonist's character may be too fast to be felt. It seems that he was too busy in the later period. It is a pity that the writing has declined. The impact is not enough. I don't know how to describe it. I feel that I lack some famous scenes and lines to remember the supporting characters.

Very well written 👌 worth recommending.

There wasn't much at first, I didn't read a few words, I kept getting interrupted, and it didn't feel coherent at all! ! And what's the point? We know that you work hard, so you don't need to show it in this way.

Worth buying on kindle

The writing is very good, and it shows that the author has a deep writing skills.

I give recommendations every day and give monthly passes from time to time. I am afraid that this book will become a eunuch. After all, it is such a beautiful book and I don't want it to disappear.

This book has been chaotic since the middle period, roughly after Shura Field, starting from the northwest. I suspect that the author adjusted the outline before and after that, or that the initial outline was only close to that. The author frequently pays homage to other types of online novels. Although it is creative and brings readers closer, the fourth wall is broken too frequently, causing many harms. It is a double-edged sword. The biggest problem is the interference of Mugenliu. The tone of the entire book is off-kilter. Many people have mentioned it and there is no need to repeat it. The ambition is too great, there are too many characters, it is very difficult for the author to control it, and the ending is also a bit weak. This is probably related to the fact that the author is not a professional and has limited time. However, writing it as it is now cannot be considered a collapse, it is still not easy.

The following is only for some of Wan'er's content, and does not involve the readability of the author's novel Let me talk about my feelings. When Wan'er was hesitating whether to conspire to kill Fuji, she faced two choices, but a demon pulled her away but no one stopped her. Fuji watched her step into the abyss but did not lend a helping hand. Some people would say that the choice is up to you, but in the face of temptation, threats, and opportunities, how many people can refuse after being polished by society? Readers who read novels cannot refuse, and authors who write novels will not refuse. According to this standard, will 99% of people in society be condemned and considered to be innocent of death? We are now condemning Wan'er and scolding her for forgetting her original intention and failing to keep her moral bottom line. In fact, we are scolding ourselves and the protagonist. Society pushes Wan'er to change, and various bad guys coerce Wan'er to make choices. Friends and confidants watch Wan'er step into the abyss without reaching out to rescue her, and they still sigh afterwards, "Ah, this person turned out to be like this. He deserves to die." The butt determines the head, but those of us with a God's perspective have not clearly seen our own position. I will not put myself into the protagonist of the novel just because I like it. My position is based on my identity in real society. Wan'er will die if she dies, but please keep some disgusting words in your stomach, otherwise things will change in the future and make people laugh. The above are all my humble opinions. They are just one person's opinions and cannot be true.

A few days ago, I opened the starting point again. As soon as I saw that the book "The Best Way" was finished on the bookshelf, I went back to Katse in one go. I want to write something, here is my humble opinion. The writing is very good, the supporting characters are outstanding, everyone has their own personality, the basic characters are not broken, and the setting is also very imaginative. Like "Infinite Horror", the supporting characters have created a very moving world. I am thinking that if the author is not in a hurry to finish the book, but perseveres even if it is interrupted, maybe this book can become a god. I think it would be best to write tens of millions of words for this book. . One is that the author wants to express too many things, there are too many characters, and every supporting role is demanding to be flesh and blood, so the early stage is very long. From the protagonist to the ground bridge, it may have been three million words. I followed it for a long time, and the protagonist had just joined the army, so I stopped pursuing it. Many pitfalls seemed anticlimactic, such as Lin An, who was given a lot of roles in the early stage, but later on, he lost his presence. Like this and the one with the ring, they only interacted with the protagonist once or twice in the end, but they left a deep impression on me in the early stage, and I didn't see them much in the end. In fact, Chu Yue, who has been interacting with the protagonist in the military camp, did not appear in the first two million words. When reading, it feels like the previous character slowly disappeared in the end. On the other hand, in Infinite Horror, it would be good to directly send many important characters to get lunch in the middle stage. It would be simpler and more straightforward, and the branch plots could be dealt with earlier. Otherwise, the main line will progress very slowly. Like the protagonist, he has not experienced many big scenes. The main plot is actually very simple, that is, from the teacher's gate to the valley, after traveling to other worlds, to the northwest to join the army, and then to Katse. The world is so big, but the place where the protagonist goes is too small. I think it's a pity. To put it bluntly, it is too long-winded about the characters and loses the plot advancement. You know, characters in novels serve to advance the plot. If the supporting characters do not have an impact on the protagonist for a long time, do not have very important plot scenes, and do not have an important impact on the plot, there is really no need to write them all in detail. I think the author is too kind-hearted, and he must be a little reluctant to let go. As a result, he suffers and is too tired. Just like Fuji, I appreciate such kind and persistent people, but they are often too sloppy and end up losing a lot of things. Xiu Xiu, Xiu Xiu is mentioned again and again in the book when she thinks of the broken teleportation talisman. I think it's a little delayed. Once is sensational, repeating it several times is deliberate. But the faults do not hide the merits. Many characters are so brilliant that their shine cannot be concealed no matter what, such as the witch. Yes, I support the witch. I think the description of time is much better than Xiu Xiu, and the witch is a more three-dimensional character. Because the transformation of the witch from hostility to attraction to jealousy and finally to being together is beautiful. Moreover, in the middle and later stages, Xiu Xiu completely became a vassal of the protagonist. She focused on the protagonist but had no effective practical actions. I felt that it was a bit thin and false. Love under racial justice is much more unforgettable. The author writes the emotional drama very well. When there are three women and one drama, I hope this beautiful story will never end. And when it comes to fighting, especially fighting in the realm of enlightenment, it's not very good. In fact, I even think that there is no need to describe the battle between more than thirty enlightened people and one black corner in detail. After all, watching this kind of battle at the protagonist's level is like a child watching the Champions League, where you can only see who scores the goal. The detailed description is not as good as what Li Yunjing said, "The vision of a long rainbow over the military camp that day was that the leader of the Orc Tower was chasing the Horned Tribe." This side description made my blood boil. Also, remembering names is a skill, but the author's requirements for me are a bit high. There are so many people named Chu who are not related by blood, so it is a bit difficult to remember. If there are brothers, just change the word, wind and moon, or wild and feather. The two of them appear together and leave together. I can't tell them clearly when I read them. Haha I hope the author can continue writing, and I am looking forward to the author's next book. I hope the new book can be more cruel and cut off some irrelevant character descriptions. Or hold on a little longer and update it by tens of millions of words. No matter which choice I choose, I feel that I can become a god in my heart. Because the author's world philosophy is great, his imagination is great, his writing is acceptable, and his novel skills are gradually maturing. I hope the author goes further and I will continue to support him no matter how many years he writes.

I thought what you said was true, but in fact I am pretty sure the author is teasing us again! In this way, if the author updates daily and reaches 100,000 words in the 31 days of this month (2018.12.1), I will reward him with 100,000 coins. This post will not sink, even if you say this

Well, a new book will be released in March. If you don't release it, I will be a hammer🔨

I clicked on the free-reading coupon. I am willing to call this book a magical beginning, a magical plot, and a WOC ending. It may not be favored by lovers of refreshing novels, but it cannot be considered a refreshing novel in the first place. To be honest, the ending makes us readers feel deeply resentful and willing to respect the author's writing style. In fact, I personally also want to code words in private. After reading too many brainless cool articles, I will think in my heart: I can write better than this about any JB stuff. However, I haven't written anything yet, so I think maybe this is the best ending. After all, this is not a cool article...

I have read almost half of it I came with high expectations, but I saw not very good content. I am really unhappy The book is above the fast food article, but it is really not a good book Every book list boasts about the amazing opening, it is really just nonsense, nonsense The writing is good, the pace is slow, there is a lot of psychological description, and many words with repetitive meanings are also very verbose. I don't lack patience. I will comment after I finish it slowly.

It seemed good at first, but it turned out to be something wrong when the leader of the battle between humans and demons blew himself up. In order to practice evil skills, he destroyed the male protagonist's apprentice Yuan Yin, and he also destroyed the male protagonist's Qingmei. He searched around the camp and abducted beautiful women. In the end, he just fooled him with just one sentence: "For the sake of the sect?" The leader is indeed a very good person in the sect, but I really don't see the need to stay in such a sect. The master who helped you lead the path of spiritual practice has also rebelled, and your enemy has not yet died in the sect. What do you mean by the virtue of supplying resources? Aren't you out there all day long doing your own thing? The only reason I'm talking about this now is to forcefully implant that the male protagonist is really moral and grateful. I just think this is disgusting. Brother Li went all the way to deliver life-saving medicine to you, but you didn't even think of finding anyone to thank him afterwards. Such a person is not worthy of Xiu Xiu and Sui Sui's liking. Rotten, abandoned

Ten years ago, when the Internet was first launched, this book was top-notch. But now, I can only say that I would not recommend it. Ps: If you want to see your compatibility with this book, just read this sentence of the original article. Can you hold it tight: At this moment, she only has one thought in her mind: "As a woman, if you don't marry such a hero of heaven and earth, what's the point of living?" - From Chapter 86 of the original article