Pokemon: The Dark Rift

The ending actually is that the protagonist abandons all his elf friends and goes home/die alone... This is in a newspaper office==

It is said that people who watch the flow of darkness do not mean that they have to suffer some kind of blow before they can join the darkness, but that they sincerely desire to join the darkness. They are in the light and their hearts are in the darkness. Many times, people's endurance is not that low, and the reasons for joining the darkness are not complicated. The means are not important, but the results are important. Live for yourself and devote most of your emotions to the love of your own life.

Actually, I think the title of this book... If you want to see Pokémon, all you search for is Pokémon, Pokemon, and Pokémon (I hate this name) Most people who search for elves are searching for handsome men and beauties with long ears and magic horses of life. So if you want to see elves, click here and you'll see it's an elf. If you want to read Pokémon, you can't find this book. Just like me, when I saw the Elf Era, I immediately thought of the ancient times, when elven magicians dominated the world in an attempt to pry into the mysteries of God and were destroyed by the gods.

The protagonist doesn't even need an elf to hold it in his mouth like this. The protagonist can defeat a level 1 mythical beast by himself.

An online article can be summed up as nothing more than character design, creativity, writing style, and plot. Judging from the most basic writing style, the author is no worse than other fan fiction. Then there is the creativity. The data at the beginning shows that the author has put a lot of thought into the settings. This is much better than some fanfics that just copy game data. Judging from the above two aspects, the author's performance should not be bad. The problem lies in the character design and plot. First of all, the character design. The author obviously wants to describe an epic (???) Story of a goldfinger (?) Protagonist who grows up after experiencing love (?), Survival (?), Betrayal (?), Etc. It has a familiar taste and dark literature. Although dark literature is niche, it still has a future. Alas, I really have to say here that there is really no need for these messy things to create a character. Please forgive me, the king next door. When you mention the protagonist, what is your first reaction? Cheap. A character can have many tags, but it must have a prominent shining point! Shining point! It seems that so much, I have no sympathy at all for the protagonist of this article. There is also the plot. Well, how should I put it? The plot serves the characters. This article has obviously done this. In order to create the characters, the plot is really bloody. Seeing the turning point makes me feel like?_?. A good plot is either interesting, stupid, or enjoyable. Fortunately, this article does neither of those (funny). Dark literature can moderately torture the owner, and can kill the wife to prove the truth. We have all read these things, but at least the above three points must be achieved, otherwise there is no support for us to continue reading. To sum up, the author, you might as well use the existing settings to create a more ordinary fanfic.

To be honest, regardless of the data that may explode in the future, the character of the protagonist and Maria are very poor. First of all, the protagonist is an adult who traveled through time and has his own family. He is twenty-six years old, but aside from the excessiveness of the first few chapters, the protagonist who was written later was completely brought into the body of this teenager. I don't know if he was assimilated by the residual consciousness of the original owner. Let's talk about the character of Maria. She seemed like a silly sweetheart when she first rescued the protagonist. Except for a little caution at the beginning, she borrowed the protagonist's elf and brought the protagonist back to the camp. I thought this was a silly sweetheart. But suddenly there came another charming character who was the plaything of Apollo, one of the three future leaders of the Rockets, Xiaomi, etc. Then, there was no more, and later she became a silly sweetheart. I don't know if the author forgot to write this, maybe there is some foreshadowing, but now it seems that it is completely silly and sweet, and I can't see anything else. Let's take a look at the hidden character, the uncle. At the beginning of the introduction, he was full of ambition and desire for possession of this Maria. Later, he found out that this woman was Apollo's woman and he didn't dare. Then he came out to make soy sauce and won't talk about this person. Let's talk about Apollo, the most awesome person who has come out so far. As a current super boss, his woman has never been so ambiguous with others, and it has caused the entire team to misunderstand the relationship between the protagonist and this woman. And this woman is not afraid of him misunderstanding at all. Could it be that the boss has the attribute of forgiveness? Or is it another big foreshadowing? Express not understanding. Overall, it has a novice vibe. Even if all other characters are put aside, the character of the protagonist, who used to be an adult with a family, behaves as innocently as an eleven or twelve-year-old child in every aspect, can be labeled as a novice novel. Darker novels should not say that a child killing people in various ways is dark, and the writing style is still too immature. At the end, I suggested that the protagonist read a book about Pokemon: Pokemon: Giants of Darkness. This is the dark flow, and reading it will never look like this with the word "Embarrassing" written all over your head. I am just expressing my personal opinion. The author feels that what he wrote is good and I can understand it after I have said it. After all, everyone has different opinions.

Can I post an NPC building and let the author take a look? Fujiwara Jiro (has a brother named Ichiro), trainer level: elite level, currently holding a badge: one, female, because she traveled alone and was afraid of strange monsters, so she disguised herself as a man, and her parents opened a Pokémon breeding house. Because he likes the color of the sea, he only catches blue-colored Pokémon. He has zero life skills and cannot cook, but he has a lot of combat knowledge. He has a high-level king's brother as a sparring partner at home, so he has a lot of practical experience. The goal is to participate in the league competition, win the championship, and become a staunch supporter of the league. Pokémon held: 1. Mary Luli (water type, demon type) characteristics: herbivorous Personality: Likes to look for water and grass to eat, which often puts its owner in danger. It was hatched from an elf egg in the breeding house managed by its parents, and evolved from Lunini. Moves: predict the future, refresh, protect color, imitate, play with water, repay favor, play, round, roll, help. 2. Swamp King (Water System, Ground System) Characteristics: Water Storage Personality: Her hobby is collecting round things. It was the first Pokmon she conquered with a Poké Ball through battle. It evolved from Ubo and is very reliable in critical moments. Moves: Yawn, instant amnesia, mysterious talisman, thief, self-regeneration, do it again, double return, play in the mud. 3. Wind chime (super energy system) characteristics: floating Personality: Evolved from Ringing a Bell. He likes to use his body parts as scarves for Fujiwara Jiro. He has a smile that heals people. Moves: healing bell, wish, self-regeneration, yawn, immobilization, hypnosis, synchronization interference, supernatural power. Remarks: (You can get a box lunch) In addition, if the author accepts it, please add it to me and circle it⭕

Dark style and system flow, a very interesting idea Although there are not many words, it can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into it. The psychological portrayal is very vivid, There are also unique features in the analysis of human nature. These are the highlights. Come on, look forward to the follow-up content 👍

Is this the end of the book? After keeping it up, I suddenly realized that I had finished the book...

It's good to read. I hope the author doesn't give in. It doesn't matter how fast he writes. I really like this novel.