I Am a Swarm of Insects

In the book you wrote, a woman is represented by a male, then a female she...

It's difficult to mix one-person and three-person perspectives. To write an introduction to the insect swarm in the title but say it's going to be a single-player adventure is tantamount to driving away readers. It would be better to change it whole-heartedly to otaku/complex comics and summon girls to eat soft rice and conquer the world. Of course, you should also practice your writing style and paragraphing, and don't miss punctuation marks or typos.