One Piece: The Strongest Martial Soul and Spirit Rings

It slipped away,,, it was too poisonous. It takes a few chapters to fight a monster. Every time the protagonist lets the opponent scold him before taking action. Every time the protagonist has an expression that says, "Say another sentence." Then the supporting actor scolds the protagonist vigorously. After scolding the protagonist, start again. . . I wonder if the protagonist has tremors. . Still like to be scolded.

Author, you are so good at writing Douluo fans, but why are you writing about pirates?

The subject matter is actually quite good. But the writing was useless. The appearance of the little girl makes absolutely no sense. That is, the protagonist's personality or anything else has not been changed. I just accepted a loli. It also added another trouble to myself. To be honest, many pirate novels are about forming a pirate group that only accepts women. Even if there are men, they are old people or reformed people. He is the only one with the output in the fight. I have no idea why I formed a pirate group.

Sorry, I was poisoned to death in the first chapter. I wonder if those masters are more resistant. Can you tell me when you were poisoned to death, or when you ate the poisonous weeds? ? ?

This book is extremely poisonous. I think Shen Nong possessed me, but I still perished in Chapter 30. How sad.

Your book, the author, felt very familiar to me as soon as I saw the "Perfect World" chapter. When I looked it up, it turned out that what you wrote was almost the same as the "Perfect World" chapter of the book "The Strongest Lottery System".

To be honest, I gritted my teeth and read it, it was so embarrassing! The comparison of strength is really blurry! The timeline is messed up,

The first chapter is full of flaws and chuunibyou! He doesn't even have the temperament of a special soldier!

I'll wait and see after One Piece World is over

There are only 6 updates without any manuscript preparation. That's amazing, my author. 😥