Harry Potter's Natural Villain

To be honest, this book is the best HP fanfic I have ever read. It is neither holy nor childish. The background created inside is also very realistic, which is the most important thing. Other HP fans are just obscene and not true at all. He just said a few words to impress the heroine, and he also analyzed the emotions between men and women in a serious manner. Please, there is no routine and no training. Where do you get the emotional foundation? Nonsense. This book does not indulge in the emotions between men and women, but analyzes the original plot very well, and the mission creation is also very vivid. Whether it is the male protagonist Malfoy or the three female protagonists, I can feel the relationship between them and be deeply moved by them. I am also impressed by Malfoy's wisdom and sacrifice. Although it is a villain protagonist, I feel that the villain in the original plot is a more decent protagonist in this book.

It gets more exciting as you go to the back, with many original dramas. Don't be fooled by the previous chapter reviews. ps1: There will be some small bugs, and the "I think" habit in the first few chapters is also a poisonous point, but it is harmless ps2: This version of Pansy will become more and more cute ps3: I am so happy to see the author interrupting updates from time to time, and everyone being angry and helpless! Fortunately, I only discovered this book after I finished it.

Let's talk about the advantages first: The plot concept is good. The protagonist acts as a big villain on the surface and infiltrates into the enemy, and at the same time protects many people who died in the original work. Of course there are shortcomings, and there are many: The wording and sentence writing are a bit crude, especially in the first few dozen chapters. Everyone keeps saying "I think, I think, I think..." The "butterfly effect" is always mentioned in the article to indicate that the arrival of the protagonist has changed a lot, but there are so many in these one million words that almost the entire chapter is a plot of "copying the original text". Many unreasonable places also forcefully bring back the plot direction of the original work. The description of the politics, economy and combat in the magical world is very shallow, especially the combat, where almost no one is dead, everyone talks a lot of nonsense, and it is a turn-based system. Overall recommendation: If you are not familiar with the original work, you can read this article, because many chapters are similar, but it is more recommended to read the original work. ps: Looking at the reviews, the author likes to delete book reviews. You may also know that this work is not very likable. After all, many of the paid chapters are copies of the original text. Book reviews with derogatory connotations will reduce the author's income

A good HP novel

As a woman, after reading Chapter 22, I was shocked by the author's more and more arrogant writing style. I really can't stand the plot where the protagonist has constant ambiguity with all the girls. It's too toxic.

The more I read the book, the less I liked it. Why did Draco want to give his credit to others and bear the infamy himself? He couldn't stand the author's thinking.

If the author doesn't know how to write emotional lines, he doesn't have to write them... After reading the first twenty chapters, as a girl, I can't feel the cuteness of the heroine Pansy. Isn't it stupid for girls to be pampered? It's too poisonous.

This book is very good, I don't understand where so many trolls come from

Wow, you guys are really good at fighting. This book is pretty good. It's poisonous here and there, too. Just don't read it anymore. It'll hurt your eyes.

The protagonist of this book is not a villain, but an anti-hero, who takes up the cause of fighting against that adult by himself. The ending is quite interesting. I had already finished the book when I didn't catch up on it. I read the comments that the author delayed the draft N times. In terms of the plot, there are many emotional portrayals between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, but until the end, the attitude of the male protagonist is still better than that of the male protagonist. You can also take a look if you are bored and have free time. I hope the author will open up a new pit ~

I was so shaken that I couldn't bear it after reading chapter 61. It's a pity. Normally, this book would last me 7-8 days at least. Does the author particularly like to be scolded and wronged? Does it feel like a taboo pleasure?

Pansy is really a "real-life girlfriend", so annoyingヽ('⌒´メ)ノ

It's a pity. I really want to see some of the daily life after defeating Voldemort.

Why do you always have to get together with the three protagonists, travel to an extraordinary world, and learn magic? Isn't it delicious?

Great author, this book can be said to be really good.

I have always felt that the retinas of white people are different from those of yellow people... Flaming red hair? Many Caucasian literary works include the adjective "flaming red hair", but there is no hair of this color. In fact, what they call "red hair" is just a brown hair color, or reddish brown is more appropriate, and there is absolutely no "flaming" color. By the way, what color is the flame? Orange? Blue? Or green? Is there any specific flame? Charcoal burning flame (orange)? Gas blowtorch flame (blue)? Sprinkle copper sulfate (green) into the burning material?

This is the best Harry Potter fanfic I've ever seen

The author also asks the author to give all the women in HP to the male protagonist. Just a few are not enough. The protagonist Professor McGonagall is also very needed, 🙂

No one took the picture? This is unscientific! ! Let the AI ​​draw it, and I can barely read it. 😠

I have to say spicy chicken, I can't stand it anymore

When I saw the introduction, I suddenly thought that the beginning of Malfoy is actually quite interesting. The main plot is the road to whitewash. Unlike other fan fiction, it takes off from the beginning and can write many conflict points.

Is the ending a little rushed? There is very little space to describe the final battle. I feel that the fourth part is a bit confusing. After all, the stories in the remaining four parts after this one are all closely related, and the rhythm is not as good as the previous chapters.

Support, this book is already very good for a HP fan who can finish it.

One thing to say, if you are a fan of the original novel, as long as you can survive the poison in front of it, this book will bring you a good experience.

Tsk, how come I still have a book that is clearly finished? The writing is also very exciting.

Why can't I find it by searching directly, or can I find it only by searching for subscribed books and adding them to my bookshelf?

This book has been clipped and I can't find it from Qidian. Com

I saw it a few years ago, and it was surprising that the archaeological findings were hidden.