One Piece: the Swordsman's Heart

This book is awesome! In the early stage, Weir was indeed bloodthirsty, but in the later stage, he transformed into a swordsman. After reading this book, I fell in love with Dover. Emmmm, the ending is also very satisfying. Now it seems that this book does have many shortcomings. In comparison, "Reincarnation Paradise" has been improved and perfected a lot. However, without the bond similar to Dover, the happiness that interpersonal relationships bring to readers is actually great... In the end, as usual, I praise Mosquito, and I hope you get better and better as you write★

The first 50 or so chapters are quite toxic, but the progress afterward is simply obvious. This is probably the first book written by Mosquito, so please bear with me.

I felt a little uncomfortable when I saw the place where the protagonist of the war fights Whitebeard at the top 😢

Please note that this may be the first book among pirate novels to hack the empress to death.

The only pirate novel that hacked the empress to death.

Waste mosquitoes, chase them from the beginning to the end. When it was about to end, I was thinking about raising it to the end. But I found that after a period of time, my enthusiasm for this book diminished. Therefore, I suggest you start saving your manuscript when it is almost finished. When it was finished, I thought it felt great to have 10 chapters in one go. I offer you a few monthly tickets, please add more!

I devoured this book two days ago, then read a few other pirate novels, and then came back. . Compared to other poisonous weeds, this book is simply a fairy tale

I finally finished reading it, and to be honest I was quite disappointed. Maybe it's because I read Samsara first and then this book, so I have a stronger sense of anticipation. But after actually reading this book, I did feel a little sad. Many times I didn't quite understand the protagonist's motivations and purpose, and I abandoned the book many times. Later, I gritted my teeth and read it, and I roughly understood that Mosquito might be suitable for writing infinite novels. Because infinite novels deal with tasks, there is almost no problem in infinite novels where the protagonist's purpose is unclear. The summary is that this is a relatively average one among the hundreds of pirate fanfics I have read.

It's a pity that too much has been deleted. Some of the plots are a bit confusing. I remember that when I watched it the first time, I felt pretty good. But now I can't listen to it the second time.

So where did Bakurat and Toad come from? Who in the review of Samsara Paradise said that these two came from this book.

After reincarnation, when I saw the deleted part about eating the soul of a child, I realized that I had read this book a long time ago and it had not been deleted at that time.

Mosquito took a leave of absence and had to come back to relive it 😢😢 Actually, I personally like Weier's character more than Su Xiao, who is energetic enough 👍 who is not in reincarnation but is better than the reincarnation paradise (madman)

It doesn't matter if you are bloodthirsty. After all, this is a world of pirates. It is a world of the jungle. It is possible that if you don't kill others, others will kill you. So there is no opinion on bloodlust. But! Killing is very inhumane. Even if you are a pirate, you are still a human being and not a beast, right? Information is needed, so torture is okay, but you can cut the person's throat cleanly and end it neatly, but you have to chop the person into several pieces, or even chop him into meat paste. What does this mean? This is not bloodthirsty, this is considered a psychopath. You can just chop off a person's head with one knife, but you have to chop it into pieces and mince it into minced meat, and then eat next to the minced meat. Does this show your mental strength? The reason why a swordsman is called a hero is because he has a bottom line and persistence. The protagonist I saw has no bottom line and no persistence at all. You can kill because you become stronger, but you cannot become stronger by killing. These are two different things. What the protagonist is pursuing is no longer a swordsman, but a perverted murderer who can use a sword. He cannot be called a hero!

Boring, why is the new book so useless m9( ｀д´ )!!!! I promised not to use systematic writing! ! ! Neither does a similar system! Or explain that this system was invented by a certain big shot and is a completely rigid system.

... At the end, I actually came up with the idea of ​​letting Will and Dover get together. I'm sorry for being rotten... (But I actually won't repent at all 😏)

After reading Chapter 16, I also saw the issue of killing innocent people that everyone is hotly discussing. As an "old bookworm" and a "Pirates fan", I think I should say something. First of all, let's talk about the author's writing style. It is not gorgeous, but it is relatively smooth and quite satisfactory. There's nothing to complain about at this point. Let's talk about the plot. If it weren't for the One Piece background, it would really be okay. Even if someone criticizes the protagonist's killing mission, it won't be too intense. But the failure is that this is the world of One Piece, a world that needs heroes like Luffy to save it. The pirate world built by Mr. Oda is very grand, but many people only see the passion, fun, friendship of companions, etc., But few people pay attention to it. This is such a dark and depressing world. Under the brutal rule of the Celestial Dragons and the dark underbelly of each country, human life has always been the least valuable. This world really doesn't need more cold-blooded characters, so Mr. Oda created the most passionate Luffy, which is why everyone likes Luffy. But the protagonist darkened himself just after returning from studying arts. Does he still need Luffy to reform him? Or do you just go your own way and stay dark? As well as those who whitewashed the protagonist in the comment area, or even praised it, you reminded me of a saying, just watching the excitement is not too big a deal. If someone is about to jump off a building, there will always be spectators below saying why don't you jump yet? Come on I support you and stuff like that, that's how you guys are. The last thing I want to say is that although I don't like the protagonist, I still have to respect the author's work. Thank you for your book.

After reading this book, I feel that the first few dozen pictures are quite toxic, but the subsequent ones are great, invincible and not brainless, but the ending feels a bit bad. . Lost the little Tianlong Lolita

What's the point of not killing Luffy? Are there any One Piece novels in which Luffy is killed?

I want to say when will Lidya Su be assigned a female protagonist?

All I can say is that the early plot of this book is pretty rubbish, but the original plot takes off in the later stages.

I finally know why Will is so kind to the Don Quixote family. Because Brother Virtua—Brother Virtua is a senior member of the Don Quixote family. 😅

One thing to say, the front part is indeed a bit poisonous. I picked it up and put it down again every once in a while, picked it up and put it down again, and reincarnated many times. Then, I smell really good. During the study period, I got up at around 5 o'clock to catch up on it for an hour, and finished it after many days. For those who like the dark genre, this book is really good. Compared with other pirate fans, it kills decisively and does not kneel down to lick Nami. The empress and the protagonist group were cut down when I first saw it. It is also in the Doflamingo camp. It is outstanding in the middle and late stages.

I don't like to see this reincarnation paradise. But it's been a long time since you updated. When will I read another book? I've already finished reading Jianhao.

The reincarnated Ryoma Great Swordsman originally slayed the Dragon Flash here

The master's early works? Why does it look so embarrassing from the front?

Could you please tell me whether the protagonist of this book ate the fruit or not?

Personally, I feel that this is the best Pirates fanfic I have ever read, but the ending is a little bit worse

It is said that Anita ate the sun fruit and got high when she and Veer were making humans. She failed to control the power of the fruit. Will Veer's little brother use the black fertilizer?

Is it bad to be an ordinary person in the world of pirates? Merge and fight

After reading it, I can only say that Mosquito is indeed the material for writing a book. It is obvious that this book has made progress. Although the front part is a bit stretched, the strength at the end makes up for it. All in all, I think this book is not bad and can support a high-quality brand. Although I have not read One Piece, it does not affect my reading of this book.