The Sword Knocks on the Heavenly Gate

I saw Chapter 160, extremely poisonous... Gongsun Xiao is going to fucking kill you, but you are still licking your face to protect others? ? ? ? ? ? What the hell? ? ? ? Extremely poisonous, extremely poisonous

It's a pity, it's a book that starts high but ends low. When I read it for the first time, I felt that there were wonderful ideas everywhere and it was fascinating. But when I looked back and took a closer look, I found that there were many familiar and unfamiliar places, such as the master cutting off all the peach blossoms in one day, the master's sword knocking on the gate of heaven, etc. The creation of the protagonist also pays tribute to classic protagonists such as Ning Que and Chen Changsheng. Unfortunately, not long after it was released, the author's ideas became increasingly divergent, but Xiaojiabiyu's writing style could not control the unbridled thoughts.

The author has some background. Judging from the simple fighting plot of fairy tales, it is indeed well written and enjoyable to watch, but the description of emotions is very stiff. The portrayal of several female characters makes people want to complain, which is about the same level as the best servant. . The author should stop writing female characters in the future. .

After reading hundreds of chapters, I finally got poisoned and died. Everyone in the Taoist sect was reduced to intelligence, and the logic was illogical. A dignified monk was embarrassed by a group of ordinary people and had to compromise at every turn. How could he be an immortal? If you like self-abuse, you can check it out!

Everyone in the comment section said this book is great! Everyone is talking about how good this book is, but what are its shortcomings? I haven't seen anyone say it, so I guess I saw that the author's avatar is female! I won't say whether the book is good or not, but there are too many typos, wrong sentences, and bad sentences, which seriously affect reading. Did the author upload it without checking it after finishing it? No matter how good the subject matter of a book is, it will not be a good book if there are too many typos.

First, the plot in the first 100 chapters is pretty good Second, Chapter 160 is extremely poisonous (someone planned to murder the protagonist, and the protagonist almost died, but the protagonist had no idea of ​​revenge and in turn saved the person who wanted to kill him) Third, the combat power may have collapsed! Which old man Xiao is in a realm under the holy mirror! But the protagonist can actually fight against a demon fetus that is at a similar level to Old Man Xiao without the help of any external force! In fact, if we switch to other realms that we are familiar with, it is that in the foundation building stage, we can compete with the bosses of God Refining.

The emotional scenes are awkwardly written, and they don't necessarily need to have a female protagonist. For example, take Master Jiyuan next door, or you can write it as the same as Master Gu, but Model Worker is a bit complicated. He was reborn for 500 years, and normally he has never met the heroine 🤤.

I've only read a few chapters. Is this written by a female author? The writing style is delicate and slightly wordy, a bit like the characteristics of Qidian Da Shen's Seventy-Two Series. After I wrote it, it drifted to nowhere (ー_ー)!!

Leave a book review after reading it. The writing style is delicate, the description of the realm is relatively general, the story is mainly story-based, and the story is complete. The first four hundred or so chapters can be squeezed into my mind as an excellent novel, The gap between it and a classic lies in the supporting roles (the descriptions of the two main female supporting characters are flawed) The quality of the last four hundred or so chapters has declined, or it has become a cool novel. Mainly reflected in the unreasonableness of some details, such as the partial intelligence reduction of the main and supporting characters, and a small number of logical conflicts. Newbies must not miss this good book, and it is also a good book for old book friends to pass the time (just turn a blind eye to the flaws). Overall worth seeing

I gave up after reading Wan Jian Chu Qiu Shui. Although I have already ordered all the following chapters, I think this book is still very good until the protagonist solves his own Dantian. Whether it is daily life or plot advancement, after the protagonist starts to practice, the whole book feels like it has collapsed from the system to the plot.

After seeing the Valley of Ten Thousand Beasts, in one sentence, I felt like I was having cerebral palsy. The more I wrote, the less I knew what to say. Just this, this, this? Is it deliberately disgusting?

All I can say is that the author cannot control this style. If you only have the intelligence to write cool articles, don't force yourself. There is a chapter in the middle that a book friend reviewed very well. You can directly upgrade to become invincible according to his ideas. You will not be tired if you write it yourself, and your book friend will not be poisoned by "jelly grass".

,,,, Express my feelings, speechless😑

I don't know the author, but I came across this book by chance because it was recommended by the system. I had read a few books on the Xianxia list and they were all unsatisfactory, so I felt a little irritated. But after reading this book, I felt calm for a while. The protagonist is very sensible and has a good personality. He knows that no matter what you do, some people will look unhappy with you, so you have to be yourself. Although my spiritual roots are not good, I am still optimistic. Although the law of heaven is unfair, there is no blame for it. The angles are also normal and appropriate. It has all the bearing and demeanor it should have. I have to say this is a good book. The plot may not advance very quickly, but it can be said to be a fairy tale in Xianxia novels.

This book is so satisfying, it's a masterpiece 👍

This is a pearl I found on the beach when I was short of books. Maybe this book is not famous, and the world in the book is not grand, but the cultivators in the book are the cultivators in my imagination. People and mountains are immortals, and cultivators with humanity are immortals. Maybe their magic power is not boundless, but their mind can swallow eternity.

It's very nice. I support it with four votes if I order it all.

What a great book! I cried when I saw the ending. Really! ! I still remember the first time I read a fantasy novel four years ago... The first book I read was "Fights Break the Sky". I don't think any newcomer can refuse this fantasy classic, haha! The first time I read a fantasy novel, my heart was always full of surprises. I read every battle of the protagonist in its entirety. I didn't miss a single word of the novel. I felt melancholy for a while after reading it... About half a month later, when I clicked on another fantasy novel, I discovered how the plot was so similar to Dou Po! So I was very disappointed and clicked on another fantasy novel with a very loud name... The result was that I read the first few chapters of more than a dozen fantasy novels, and the more I found that they were all like the beginning of the same book! ? Later on, when reading, it was difficult to find the same feeling as when I read "Fights Break the Sphere"... But I did encounter one or two fantasy books on the way that particularly impressed me. Then what I want to say is that the book Jianke really helped me regain my original love for fantasy, hahaha! This unique writing style and story really make people unable to extricate themselves, haha! It's a pity that I didn't read this book when it first came out, and it wasn't until he finished it that it was recommended by a certain platform. Otherwise, it would be great to encourage the author who was still a newcomer at the time! Maybe this book can be more in-depth and exciting! That's all I want to say, let's summarize it at the end! Qiushui is awesome!

Very good work, but the update is a little slow. All the votes are given to you 🌹🌹🌹

It is indeed a rare good book. A good book lies in accumulation and precipitation. I hope the author will ignore the rumors and take it one step at a time!

The writing is really good. I actually stayed up late to read it. I haven't done this for a long time, except for the previous book "Zhe Tian Ji". Crazy as drunk Written very well Fengshen

I'm short of books. I came across this book by chance, and then I couldn't control it. I read more than a hundred chapters in one go. The book you wrote is so good. Thank you for your support. I will always support you.

Why do I feel that the protagonist is very affectionate, but the opposite side is full of betrayals? Is it my misunderstanding? ? ?

A good book. The only realm I read is a little vague. You can replace it with a popular realm. You can change the names of individual realms appropriately to make them more logical. Maybe it's a stereotype or because you have a weird taste. If you read my words, just laugh it off. But it is rare to come across such a good book. In addition, no matter the plot, scenes or characterization, it makes me feel a little bit like reading the Big Book of Smoke. The book is similar to the situation of Dragon and Snake Branch, it is a hidden gem from this starting point.

I think I have been short of books for many days and have been searching to no avail. I've searched all over the Xianxia list, but there are few satisfactory ones. Looking at today's online articles, most of them are novice articles with unclear words and sentences. There are occasionally good articles, but too much energy is put into piling up boring and exaggerated rhetoric. Looking at this article now, I still have the feeling of clearing away the clouds and seeing the fog, willows, and flowers. But I found that few people are interested in this masterpiece. It feels like a pearl covered in dust. I hope that more people will pay attention to it, and I also hope that the author can maintain the quality and persevere. Unknowingly, I was up all night. Alas, go to sleep, it will be dawn soon.

It's a good book, but it's a pity that the subject is fairy tales, and the protagonist is a traditional type. Otherwise, he could be a god. I took advantage of the limited time to read it for free. From the overall situation and the details, it is first-rate. The big boss is not cliché, but the minor characters have a sense of routine. It is worth reading.

Thanks for letting me see this great book. The writing is very good, and the characters of different characters are also well portrayed. The most rare thing is that the emotional scenes are well written, whether it is family, friendship, master-disciple relationship or the hazy relationship between the male protagonist and several female characters, they are all well written.

This book would be great if there was no Sang Xiaoman. It's so disgusting. Her identity should be very impressive. She is the daughter of a sect leader. In the early stage, she stole wine from the protagonist's master, hanged several young men from several sects at the same time, and used words to bully another passerby who also likes the protagonist (behavior of a green tea bitch). Then he asked the protagonist to practice talismans, but did not mention the consequences, so he ran away and let it go. It was the master and the others who discovered it and warned him in time to stop him, which cost him one year of his lifespan (the protagonist cannot practice and his lifespan is limited). This woman is so disgusting.

I read two relatively detailed reviews, which were very pertinent and good, so I tried to read them. After reading the first few, I thought they were really good, so I added them to my bookshelf and kept seeing the latest updates. This is one of the few good books that I can read from beginning to end! I think back when I watched "The Battle of the Sky", I only watched half of it, and finally couldn't stand it anymore. It was so pretentious that it made me nauseous and I couldn't stand it. I didn't even watch the ending. But this one (Sword Knocks on the Heavenly Gate) is no worse than the top ten novels on the list. The content makes people feel drizzle and silent, very comfortable and attractive. There is no obvious plot of defeating monsters and dungeons to upgrade. It is not a stallion novel and there is no female protagonist, but the emotional line is rich and full, thought-provoking and fascinating, which is why it is worth reading. In many novels I have read, I can no longer stand it until about ten or even two or three chapters, and I just pass it. It can be seen that the quality of this novel is still guaranteed and it is worth recommending.

It should have been three years ago when I first read this book. The author didn't seem to be called Headless D at that time (I don't know if I remembered it wrong), and the update was just before Qiu Shui destroyed his family. At that time, when novice writers were booming, even as a novice, I could only read those mindless and cool articles. It seems that in today's era when all kinds of great gods are emerging, this book seems a bit insignificant, but it gave me a great shock at the time. The part where Qiu Shui destroys the family was regarded as a masterpiece in my heart at that time. But due to the author's update progress, I stopped reading Shan Hai Hui before I saw it. Even so, this book left a very deep impression on me. I am now about to be a freshman in high school. I suddenly thought of this book a few weeks before the start of school, and I actually read the entire book 😒. And for some reason, I still think this book is still well written. Although the writing is a bit stretched in my opinion, I still like the plot very much. It ranks among the top among all the books I have read. I deeply remember the name Li Yunsheng, I deeply remember the four words "Sword Knocking on Tianmen", I deeply remember Qilin Bone, Yu Xuzi, and Xu Honghu. I have read many novels and forgotten many novels, but this book is the only one that I have not finished but have remembered for several years. Thank you to the author for not giving up and finishing it. Thank you to the author. Thanks to the author for clearing up a knot in my mind. I think this is a very, very good novel (at least in my opinion). I will always remember Li Yunsheng's ^_^ I read a pirated version and I'm very ashamed School is about to start and I don't have much money in vx. I will definitely make up for it when I come back from vacation next month:-D Thank you to the author for giving this book a great ending. {"NickName":"Headless R","UserId":222993028}